Meri Apni Kisi Ghazal Ke 2 Ashaa`r.

[Perozai R!nd]

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محبت کے رستے پر لوگ کانٹے بچھا دیتے ہیں
عجیب لوگ ہیں پانی پر بھی آگ جلا دیے ہیں

اس کی یادوں میں شایدہماری کوئی یاد نہیں
جس کی یادوں کا دیا ہم  ہر شام جلا دیتے ہیں
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فہد نصیر رند

[Adventurous]

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Nice 

[Perozai R!nd]

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Sory Secound Line Mein Bhi Jala Dete Hein Jo Ghalati Se Maine diye Hein Likha Hai.. Sorry for That.

Anyhow Thankx a Bundle Deep-Things

[SalmanKashapi]

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  wah +++++++++ 

[Hamgerench]

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 Pani par petrol pehenko aur maches jala kar touch karo , deko kaise pani par aag naheen jalti!!!     aap ki shaheri main deepness and maturity naheen hae, but try do n,t be disappointed!!!! Be scientific!!!

[Perozai R!nd]

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Pani par petrol pehenko aur maches jala kar touch karo , deko kaise pani par aag naheen jalti!!!     aap ki shaheri main deepness and maturity naheen hae, but try do n,t be disappointed!!!! Be scientific!!!

Thank You Hamgerench.. Yeah Sure I Will Try To Improve Myself INSHALLAH..

[Perozai R!nd]

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wah +++++++++ 

Thankx Salman Jan...

[Mir Javed Baloch]

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Mana chahray gwazay thu
Bezan ichie nahay thu
mani arwa ao sahay
mana pursay kahay thu
mani darday dayara
meran dru no blay thu

mir javed

[Mahruk]

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Hamgrench ende man bezante k aapa petrol pereche aas rokh be guda ama wahda mani loga aap baragah man petrol perethkaga bele loge seyah kotaga bale aapa naborthaga....................
       Here i must mention in poetry we use things metaphorically and we also personified beauty as a girl which is dancing. You are speaking like this because you think love is non existent.Are not YOU Waja Shey ragham Who use to wite in Daily AAsaap................
          cha to kamter
               Bibi Mahruk

[Hamgerench]

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BANOK MAHRUK! SHAY RAGAAM WAJA JAN MOHAMMAD DASHTI ENT, MAN SHOME WADIAN NABODE HUN MAN KOJA O WAJA JAN MOHAMMAD DASHTI KOJA!!! MAN ZANEEN K SHAHERI E TOKA TASHBEE DIHANT BALE PA TASHBEE AH REALITY GAAR NABEET, THO SATAR BOGOSH K ENSAAN AAZMANA BAAL ENT BALE WADH E K KAPEET GODA ZAMEEN AH KAPEET!!
NASIR ABAD SHOME WATI NABODI E WAJAH CHE AAPA BORTAG PARCHA DEGE JAGA AAPA NABORTAGANT, SHOMA PA ZAR E WAASTA WATI GAARI BAAH ZURTAG, SHOMA PARCHA PROTEST NAKOTA, PETROL YAK ENERGY ETH E PA FLOOD E WAASTA NAHENT!!!!
 THO MANA PESH DAAR K MAROCHI KOJA TRUE LOVE ZINDAG ENT O THO MANA NATURE O REALITY ZOBAANA LOVE E MANA AH BOGOSH GON??
LOVE STORIES OF FAILED PERSONS ARE POPULAR ONLY,WHY???

[Perozai R!nd]

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BANOK MAHRUK! SHAY RAGAAM WAJA JAN MOHAMMAD DASHTI ENT, MAN SHOME WADIAN NABODE HUN MAN KOJA O WAJA JAN MOHAMMAD DASHTI KOJA!!!

Wajah Zafar Or Hamgerench Agan Tao Naboodye Eshye Matlab Esh Nahent Keh Kullein Diwane Mardum Tayi Wadein Nabood Bebant... Tayi Gappa Che Hame Zanag Beet..

[Mahruk]

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Waja pa protest eya Nasirabad ma shote guda man wati zind o kasani pa protest ey nama datagah protest ey chart mai logah che angat dar kaya.Pa protesta aga Balocha cheezey beraste guda Baalach o Bughti gar nabotah o dome mai raj e toka anche mardom asth k a protest kanokah ganook gosha .mani cousin gosht ame rocha Baalach Shaheed botha man wati dasgoharah goshta pada rawane protest ey wasta guda lathe jinek pad athakg o goshtag ma dana dar neyah mai nokari roth mai raj e hal eshent Nabodiya wa rah ey garent .
     and your another question of love i don't have command over this but i just want to say that Ishq tawan nahent bale arzan hum nahent PA Wafa dara wafa marchi hum garan nahent. This is our love of our nation that we are fighting for a free Balochistan.To wat bechar k Tahe deema Yak ey Balochana cheezey bogoshey to aas gerey parcha????????????? waja e tahe mohabat e watiya ne wasta.
                      Minatwaran
                       Bibi Mahruk

[QasuM,FaraZ]

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 Ae diwan e mardomani mastreen nezori aesh ent k ada chandeen merdoman abaid gaishter merdom andeem ant , daponka ant ,bezan nam esh degran o gon dega naman kayan o gap kanan rawan , parcha ? parcha ma gon wathi jenday naman neayeen ? chaireen chia ? aeshi ey waja ha man serpad naban , zalbolani samja kaith balay ..................?
Domai !!!!!!Hamgernch sab tu shaheria deepness and maturity  goshay chia ?shahria wa app e sara ass nan balkeen aap e sara kalath bandag beth o aap e sara tachag ham beth ,bazeen ancheen chezan k realitya possible nean balay shaheria ast ant..........domi agan tu kase ey dilbadia koth nakany guda hayan dilprosh wa makan,

[Hamgerench]

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kalat bandag beet ya nebeet e paso ah tho shar daat kane o agan tho aape sara tachet kane goda shar betach!!!!! mani goshtan esh ent k reality e koshag wati jendara poshta dhoor deehag ent, agan shoma yak baloch e  o shomara wati poshta rawage sara hetraaz nest goda sharent , bale wadh wati pajjara peshdareet o rooth!! your God bless u!!!! ah taqalos k  degerani bebeet ahi ra osth nabeet!!!!! ponder over it????

[Sheh Mureed]

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waaja shuma durs aida mana chey zanty karterit baley shairi yak hyalley, shahir wati haayala gushi lazumnahingounaaya yakkey iteefaqbikant ya nan. shair aa gappa kant bootkant man tu sard mabnt  ya aa cha reality chey nazeekey makant baley mantu hey gappa gush nakanein aa k shaheri arabint shahiri pikr o yak aayley,agaan shahir aapey sara aas rookknat aa kut kant goun wati haayal, goun wati pikra.
man ummet kanan mani gappan chey kas dil graann abeet.