shaahiree ka safar

[ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch]

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moHtarama Raji Sis , aadaab

aap ki ye tamaam taKhleeqaat maiN dosre forums par paRh chukaa hoN , dosree baar paRh kar bhi nihaayat lut^f andoz howaa , yahi to shaai'ree hai !! mujhe Khushee aur faKhr hai k hamaree qom ko aap jaisee zaheen shaai'ra naSeeb howee !! Allah aap ko kamyaabiyaaN de Aameen !  

mujhe tamaam taKhleeqaat nehaayat pasand aaye haiN , meeri jaanib se DheroN daad qabol kejeye , shukriya  

moKhliS :

UR bro, Zia Baloch

[Zahida Raees Raji]

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[Perozai R!nd]

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MASHALLAH Sis Raji.Really Its amazing that you write Such good Urdu Shairs.Good.Keep it up.

[Zahida Raees Raji]

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[Zahida Raees Raji]

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Ek bohat hee puraani nazm

[Rind Baba]

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Banuk-e Gohaar Raji Sada Khush Raho  
Very Nice Mashallah Baat tara Gohaar apki her Likii Howe Nazam  A1 Hain

weldone Banuk We are really proud Of U

KeepIt Up
 

[Zahida Raees Raji]

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Azeezan-e-bazm
PurKhulooS tasleemaat,

mah-e-ramzaan meN likhne likhaane kee janib raghbat kuch kam ho gayii thee lekin yeh do teHreereN aisee raheeN heN keh jo ek dam se zehn pe vaarid hooveeN aur maiN ne bina-tarmeem inheN post bhi kar diya aur Allah(swt) ke faZl-o-karam se yeh donoN taKhleeqaat do muKhtalif mushairoN meN bil-tarteeb 'behtreen Hamd'-o-'awwal number' peh muntaKhib hooveeN.

is waqt aap sab se inheN share karna chahatee hooN.

aap apnee aara, tanqeed aur tabSare ka barmalah izhaar kar sakte heN aur mujhe bohat Khushii hogii agar aap sab se bhi kuch seekhne ka moqa' mila.

apnee dua'oN meN yaad rakhiye gaa

wassalam-o-mamnoon

Zahida Raees :Raji:


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[Nohani]

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ADAAB SISTER RAJI

BOHOT KHOOBSURAT TAKHLEEQ PAISH KI HAI AAPNE

KUM NIGAHI AAR HAI WARNA MERI
JIS TARAF DEKHON KHUDA MAUJOOD HAI

ISS INAAM-YAFTA TEHREER PER DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE  

[Zahida Raees Raji]

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ADAAB SISTER RAJI

BOHOT KHOOBSURAT TAKHLEEQ PAISH KI HAI AAPNE

KUM NIGAHI AAR HAI WARNA MERI
JIS TARAF DEKHON KHUDA MAUJOOD HAI

ISS INAAM-YAFTA TEHREER PER DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE  

NOHANI Bhai Aadaab,

aap ko meree Hamd pasand aayii yeh jaan kar bohat Khushii hoovii. daad aur Khat ke liye bohat Shukriyah

Sada Khush rahiye

mamnoon-o-talib-e-dua

Your sister

Raji  

[ناہید بلوچ Naheed Baloch]

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salam sister Raji
app ki khobsurat teHrer peR ker meiN kho si gayi hon ..her akk lafz mein bohot gharayi haY ,,lagta hay bohot dob ker likha hay aur bohot khob likha haY  :)meri taraf sey mubarik bad key phool hazir heiN kabol ki jiye ga                          

[Nuno]

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waoo            
dont want to say any thing else

[Zahida Raees Raji]

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salam sister Raji
app ki khobsurat teHrer peR ker meiN kho si gayi hon ..her akk lafz mein bohot gharayi haY ,,lagta hay bohot dob ker likha hay aur bohot khob likha haY  :)meri taraf sey mubarik bad key phool hazir heiN kabol ki jiye ga                          

Azeezah Naheed Sis:
      
PurKhulooS tasleemaat,
      
aap ka Khat dekh kar Khushii hoovii.
aap ne jin lafzooN se meree taKhleeqaat ko saraha unke liye dil kee gherahiyoN se mamnoon hooN.
aap ka kehna bajaa hai keh in taKhleeqaat ko bohat doob kar likhaa gayaa hai.
sach poochiye tu maiN Sirf qalam chalatee rahii hooN yeh dekhe baghair keh kyaa likhna hai kaise likhnaa hai,  hosh tab aayaa jab ek hee nishast meN yeh taKhleeqaat do muKhtalif auqaat meN takmeel ke maraHil tak pouNcheeN.
      
      aap ke toHfe ke jawab meN ham bhi aap ko
      
        
               
                  
                   
                     
                        
                          
      pesh karte heN.
      
      Khush rahiye
      
      dua go wa talib-e-dua
      
      Yours sister

[Zahida Raees Raji]

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