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Title: Saima Baloch's first try waiting for your feedback...
Post by: Saima Baloch on December 03, 2007, 08:31:19 PM
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Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on December 03, 2007, 08:46:39 PM
Salam dada Saima:

baaz deyren' taraa baask e saraa nadeysta. :) ometein tao wash joor' buttage.

sis taee johud wa sharrent bale tara chey yak chizzey pash kapta. bey aahiye taee ey graphic kammo incomplete jaa kayagayan'

shoma edaa she'r zorta:

tranp traponkey hor rechan'
ey shalmen' kaur tachan'

shoma hor e tranp o kaur doen' daata bale aazmaan (aasmaan) e saraa jambar neyst.
bey jambaram' (baadal) hor nabii. pameshkaa edaa yak artificial look peydakent'

ometein shoma manii ey gappa dil a nayaare.

wati neiken' wahaganii tookaa wati ey gohar a ham yaad bekan'

best regards
yours sister
Zahida


Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Saima Baloch on December 03, 2007, 08:57:02 PM
 :hehe:..ye to meine dekha hi nahi... :mrgreen:...
InshaAllah  ek aur koshish karon gi.....kuch din baad...
Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Baluch on December 03, 2007, 09:16:37 PM
Gohaar tai ask baaz jovan o doldar enth,

Koshish Beka k balochiya naveshta baken
Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Meeren-Bluch on December 03, 2007, 09:53:49 PM
Baaz jwan ... modam cho try bekante
O wati goma degran ham e try a bepermae
Shomay mennat

Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Saima Baloch on December 03, 2007, 09:57:49 PM
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Ji sis abhi check karin ab sahi hai ya ? :)
Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on December 04, 2007, 05:24:49 PM
 (y)
nou degaa assignment bedayan'????? 8)
Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Perozai R!nd on December 04, 2007, 08:02:10 PM
Wonderful Creation Saima :)
Keep It Up...
Title: Re: My first try
Post by: Ghulam bin Shaban on December 04, 2007, 10:55:52 PM
Beautiful creation,keep it up.