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Offline Mehhlab Baloch

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***Rishta***
« on: October 07, 2007, 08:18:48 PM »
Aao bheto
tumhen bataon
tumse mere chashm-e-tar k os paar
mere khowabon tak ka
rishta samjhaon
k jab
nendon ki gehhri neeli jheel main
lamhon se dil k mail main
tumhari yaad ka
koi chota sa kankar otar jaye
tou daerey se bantey hain
or
bantey chaley jate hain
or jab ye khowab
dhadkan se joda ho jata hay
sach moch ka fana ho jata hay
tou
palkon k kinaron tak
wo pani aa jata hay
jhilmil jhilmil karta hay
meri palkon ko nam karta hay
tou tumsey
ek atoot sa rishta ban jata hay
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Nadir Shah

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2007, 10:51:48 PM »
nice poetry...
brilliant.....


Offline Sheh Mureed

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #2 on: October 08, 2007, 01:17:16 PM »
very good poetry.

Offline گوادری Gwaduri

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #3 on: October 08, 2007, 06:27:37 PM »
 |||o

Inn daerong ko main agar "Tsunami" ka naam doon tho kaisa rahega [:(]
Maara Tappi Kotag Hama Teera
Anga tai dedage kamaan'a hain

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #4 on: October 08, 2007, 08:01:25 PM »
Tara ijazat inth... herch naam k tara pa e Daerahan shatk bith tou bidehey man cha herch cheez a behal bootagon likita... and ofcourse i must thank Sheh Mureed nd Nadir shah... thank u so much everyone...
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline ALBALUSHI

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2007, 09:46:51 PM »
nice (y)

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #6 on: November 15, 2007, 04:37:49 PM »
very nice

Offline HABIB MOHAMMED SAEED

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #7 on: August 04, 2008, 01:43:04 PM »
tai shaery baaz  gehraee  masha alah chasme badoor |||o
MR,BALOCHISTAN

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #8 on: August 12, 2008, 04:58:34 PM »
 
tai shaery baaz  gehraee  masha alah chasme badoor |||o

Minnat waar ...Ey nu tara dost booth???
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Aazar Baloch

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Re: ***Rishta***
« Reply #9 on: November 08, 2008, 03:32:49 AM »
baaz washa
suno aa sakinane khak e pasty
nada kiya arahi ha aasaman se
k azadi ka aik lamha ha behter
ghulami ki hayat e jawidaan se