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Teree Judaai Mein... A Ghazal
« on: April 09, 2007, 11:46:19 PM »
Apni Aik Nayi Ghazal Aap Sabke Saamne Pesh Karne Jaaraha Hoo,n.Omeed Karta Hoo,n Keh Aap Sabko Pasand Aayegi Aur Agar Nahi Aayi To I am Sorry...  :)


Teree Judaai Mein, Ab Seh Nahi Paawunga
Ghum-e-Hijar K Samandar Mei Dhoob Jaawunga

Teree Yaado`n Ko Dil Mei Basaya Hai Maine
Ye Na Samajna Keh Tujhe Bhool Paawunga

Khudara! Ab To Mere Haal Pe Rehem Kara Zara
Warna Teree Judaai Se be Mout Mar Jaawunga

Apne Haal Pe Ab To Taras Aata Hai Mujhe
Zamane Ka Har Waar Saha Ab Aur Seh Nahi Paawunga
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Re: Teree Judaai Mein... A Ghazal
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2007, 04:31:50 PM »
very decent poetry ,keep up it ,we r so thinkfull 2 u for sharing a wonderfull urdu gazal.
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Re: Teree Judaai Mein... A Ghazal
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2007, 04:37:45 PM »
Quote from: Ramzi khan on April 13, 2007, 04:31:50 PM
very decent poetry ,keep up it ,we r so thinkfull 2 u for sharing a wonderfull urdu gazal.
Thankx Dear Brother....
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Re: Teree Judaai Mein... A Ghazal
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2007, 10:04:37 PM »
Great !!! Fahad keep it up  (y)
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Re: Teree Judaai Mein... A Ghazal
« Reply #4 on: April 14, 2007, 08:27:43 PM »
Quote from: Deep-Things on April 13, 2007, 10:04:37 PM
Great !!! Fahad keep it up  (y)
Minnat Waara`n Tayi Deep Things...
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Offline ناہید بلوچ Naheed Baloch

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Re: Teree Judaai Mein... A Ghazal
« Reply #5 on: April 19, 2007, 09:46:05 AM »
bohot khob :)


Teree Judaai Mein, Ab Seh Nahi Paawunga
Ghum-e-Hijar K Samandar Mei Dhoob Jaawunga

ye sher mujey ziyada acha laga :)
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Re: Teree Judaai Mein... A Ghazal
« Reply #6 on: April 19, 2007, 04:16:28 PM »
Quote from: Naheed Baloch on April 19, 2007, 09:46:05 AM
bohot khob :)


Teree Judaai Mein, Ab Seh Nahi Paawunga
Ghum-e-Hijar K Samandar Mei Dhoob Jaawunga

ye sher mujey ziyada acha laga :)

Dear Sis Naheed Thank You So Much.. Its all Due to Ur Help..
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