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Offline ناہید بلوچ Naheed Baloch

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takdeer ki devi
« on: July 08, 2005, 04:49:10 PM »
ak Lamba safer jo dishwar bohot hay
koyi hamrahi bhi Nahi
musafir chalNey ko tayar khara
dhoNd raha tha humrahi
mager maNziL ki dori key tasawer sey
kadam agey Na bara saka
khowaboN ki dehLeez  per
khowaish ko dafna diya
Na khod per atebar tha
Na aradooN meiN Pukhtagi
wo Be-arada musafir,
hath ki rekhayoN meiN takdeer dhoNd raha hay
rekhayoN ko pertey pertey biNayi kho raha hay
mager as musafir ko kiya maLom ,
rekhayooN ko takte takte takdeer nahiN badaLti
rahooN meiN rukNey waloN ko tabeer NahiN miLti
takdeer ki devi to as per mehrbaN hoti hay
jo bager maNzil ki umed key
ziNdagi ki dishwar rahooN per
gum-wa-khoshi  sey begaNa
kisi adhorey sapNey key saharey
tapti dhop meiN chaLta rahe
ye sochey bager ki kitNi door jaNa hay
sahiLoN ki ret per
NaNgey payoN chaLta rahey
ak Be-Nam maNziL ki jaNib gamzuN
yoNhi Be-Aasra chaLtey chaLtey
ak roz takdeer ki devi
as key der per dastak dey gi
dusht wa bayabaN ko guLastaN mein badaL dey gi,
Naheed Umer Baloch

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takdeer ki devi
« Reply #1 on: July 11, 2005, 03:15:21 PM »
Azeezi Naheed Sis
PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Umeed az mizaaj bakhair. Aap kee nazm takhayul ke leHaaz se bohat hee powerful hai so meree janib se dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
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Re: takdeer ki devi
« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2008, 02:13:28 PM »
lovely poem sis naheed.  (ff) (ff)

iT rEaLLY HuRtz WhEN i BReAtH
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Re: takdeer ki devi
« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2008, 10:41:15 PM »
MoHtarama Naheed SaHiba, aadaab !

bilaa shubah aap ki nazm meiN jo taKhayyul kar farmaa hai voh nehaayat jaandaar hai ! meri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool kejiye ! shukriya

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Re: takdeer ki devi
« Reply #4 on: March 03, 2009, 03:37:34 PM »
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nice

Offline ناہید بلوچ Naheed Baloch

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Re: takdeer ki devi
« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2009, 12:04:10 PM »
meri poetry pasand kerney key  liye Aap sab ka bohot shukriya......
Naheed Umer Baloch