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Offline Saima Baloch

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Saima Baloch's first try waiting for your feedback...
« on: December 03, 2007, 08:31:19 PM »




Offline Zahida Raees Raji

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Re: My first try
« Reply #1 on: December 03, 2007, 08:46:39 PM »
Salam dada Saima:

baaz deyren' taraa baask e saraa nadeysta. :) ometein tao wash joor' buttage.

sis taee johud wa sharrent bale tara chey yak chizzey pash kapta. bey aahiye taee ey graphic kammo incomplete jaa kayagayan'

shoma edaa she'r zorta:

tranp traponkey hor rechan'
ey shalmen' kaur tachan'

shoma hor e tranp o kaur doen' daata bale aazmaan (aasmaan) e saraa jambar neyst.
bey jambaram' (baadal) hor nabii. pameshkaa edaa yak artificial look peydakent'

ometein shoma manii ey gappa dil a nayaare.

wati neiken' wahaganii tookaa wati ey gohar a ham yaad bekan'

best regards
yours sister
Zahida


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Re: My first try
« Reply #2 on: December 03, 2007, 08:57:02 PM »
 :hehe:..ye to meine dekha hi nahi... :mrgreen:...
InshaAllah  ek aur koshish karon gi.....kuch din baad...

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Re: My first try
« Reply #3 on: December 03, 2007, 09:16:37 PM »
Gohaar tai ask baaz jovan o doldar enth,

Koshish Beka k balochiya naveshta baken
Revolution Revolution Till Victory

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Re: My first try
« Reply #4 on: December 03, 2007, 09:53:49 PM »
Baaz jwan ... modam cho try bekante
O wati goma degran ham e try a bepermae
Shomay mennat


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Re: My first try
« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2007, 09:57:49 PM »




Ji sis abhi check karin ab sahi hai ya ? :)

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Re: My first try
« Reply #6 on: December 04, 2007, 05:24:49 PM »
 (y)
nou degaa assignment bedayan'????? 8)
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Re: My first try
« Reply #7 on: December 04, 2007, 08:02:10 PM »
Wonderful Creation Saima :)
Keep It Up...


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Re: My first try
« Reply #8 on: December 04, 2007, 10:55:52 PM »
Beautiful creation,keep it up.