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My First Ghazal aap sab kee naZr ... Fahad Rind
« on: February 22, 2006, 03:42:19 PM »
Salam To All My Baloch Brothers & Sisters,
I am Going to post my One Ghazal.I Hope U All Like this One INSHALLAH.But Before Posting it I wanna Say Something That I am So much thankful to Sis Naheed.She helped me So much in writing Of Poetry.Thank you So Much Sis Naheed for Helping Me So Much..


main sirf tum se muhabbat karta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney
har dhadkan main tuje pokharta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney

kar key mujh ko barbaad tum kitni khush ho
main khoon ke aansoo rota hon kabhi ye jana tum ney


Aye kash! tum dil key zakhmo,n ko mehsoos kar sakti
main kis karab sey guzarta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney


hazaro,n shikve hain magar main zaban par lata nahee
pal pal teri judaai main marta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney

chorro fahad , ab kaise ye giley shikvey kisee sey
main kanch ki tarah thoot kar bikharta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney


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« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2006, 05:00:26 PM »
Good job Fahad  bahut khoob great
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« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2006, 06:51:23 PM »
Wow Fahad Kia Bath Hain Tumaray Bohot Khoob Weldone Keepit Up (y)
You can chain me, you can torture me, you can even destroy this body, but you will never imprison my mind.

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« Reply #3 on: February 22, 2006, 08:34:26 PM »
Dear brother Fahad:
Jeete raho Khushi raho,

yeh daikh kar bohat Khushii hoovii keh BalochooN meN ek aur Urdu shaahir ne janam liyaa hai.

tumhaaree yeh pahlee koshish qaabil-e-ta'areef hai.  :)  so daad HaZir hai.

ek baat hameshaa yaad rakheN keh qalam kee taceer, soch kee gherahiyee,  jazbooN kee shiddat  aur apne eHsasaat ko bharpoor tareeqe se man-o-a'an bayaan karne se HaaSil hotee hai aur yeh akcar laa-shaouree aur kabhi kabhi shaouree koshish kaa nateejah hotee hai.


voh shaahir jinheN apne eHsaasat-o-jazbaat ke izhaar kaa fan (art) aataa hai vohii zamaane meN apnaa muqaam banane meN kaamyaab ho jaate heN vernaa kehne waale tu be-shumaar heN dunyaa meN lekin Ghalib, Meer, Jigar, Faiz, Faraz yaa Qateel shifahii ka muqaam sab ko naSeeb naheeN hotaa.

shaahiree nah Sirf jazbaat-o-eHsaasaat ke izhaar kaa zariya'h hai balkeh yeh ek fan bhi hai aur ise seekhnaa meree naZar meN har us shaahir ke liye laazim hai jo apnee taKhleeqaat dunyaa ke saamne pesh karnaa chahaataa hai. (dont worry maiN bhi abhi class one kee student hooN :mrgreen: )

apnee dairy meN likh kar ZaaYa'a karne waale eHbaab is zimmedaari se mustasnaa heN.   :((

brother, yeh bhi sach hai keh fan seekh kar ek insaan shaahiree ke lawaazmaat tu pooraa kar letaa hai lekin agar us ke andar qudratee SalaaHiyat maujood naheeN hai tu voh apne kalaam meN kabhi bhi kashish yaa ta'aceer naheeN laa saktaa.

iskee zindaaa micaal be-shumaar logoN kee online yaa aKhbaaraat-o-jarahid meN maujood shaahiree hai jinheN ek baar naZar d'aalne ke ba'ad dobarah paRhne kee koyii zeHmat naheeN kartaa.


brother, shaahiree kisee bhi shaahir kee zaati meeraac (property) hotee hai keh voh hameshaa apne liye she'r kehtaa hai jabkeh qalamkaar (afsanaa nigaar yaa maZmoon navees ) apne qaari ke liye likhtaa hai. isliye apnee shaahiree par aap jitnee meHnat kareNge aap andar se utne hee mut'maheen hoNge.

seekhne kee koshish aur likhte rehne se waqt ke saath saath insaan ke qalam aur kalaam meN puKhtgii aatee jaatee hai aur mujhe yaqeen hai keh aap kee taKhleeq roz ba-roz nikhartee jaahe gii keh aap kee pahlee entry hee Khoob hai :)

go keh maiN Khud ek nau-mashq hee hooN aur shaahiree kee bohat see baareekyoN se na-waaqif bhi :( lekin jis qadar ho saktaa hai aur maiN kar saktee hooN aap kee rehnumahii kar ke mujhe Khushii ho gii.

aap kee deegar taKhleeqaat ka bhi intizaar rahe gaa

dua go

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« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2006, 11:27:53 AM »
WOW FAHAD JAN ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
BAAZ JWAAN AANT
BAAZ SHAR AANT
 

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« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2006, 08:23:56 PM »
Thank you So Much All Of u.Really I am So Much happy That u Liked MY This Ghazal.And haan Thank you So Much Sis Raji For Such Nice Informative Things.


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« Reply #6 on: February 23, 2006, 10:40:15 PM »
Fahad brother
 app ki shayiri ka shok aur zoq dekh ker mujey bohot khoshi hoyi ,bohot khobsurat gazal likhi hay app ney  :) meri taraf sey mubarik bad key phool kabol kijiye (F)  (F)  (F)  (F)  (F)  (F)  (F)  (F) aur meiN umed kerti hoN app likhney ka safar jari rakho gey ,hameiN app ki deger takhlikat ka intezar rahey ga ,
hamesha khosh raho  :)
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« Reply #7 on: February 24, 2006, 12:16:36 PM »
Thank U So Much Gohaar Naheed.INSHALLAh I will try To write more Lakin Sirf kabhi kabhi Mood hota hai likhne Ka aur kabhi tho Kuch Zehen main aata hee Kuch nahee lakin Kabhi kabhi jat se aajate hain khyalata zehen main.Anyway INSHALLAh U All see my new Shairy too.


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« Reply #8 on: February 24, 2006, 07:15:52 PM »
Fahad zabardast... keep it up.. mein bhi ek sher harz karna chahta ho ...I hope ke aap sab ko pasand aaye ga....

     Bagair jane pehchane ikrar na kijiye,
     Muskura kar dil ko bequarar na kijiye,
     Phool bhi de jate hai zakhm ghera kabhi kabhi,
     har phool par yu aetbaar na kijiye..
I dont know how to descrive about my self.you can judge me better.

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« Reply #9 on: February 24, 2006, 08:41:12 PM »
Quote from: kabeerbaloch
Fahad zabardast... keep it up.. mein bhi ek sher harz karna chahta ho ...I hope ke aap sab ko pasand aaye ga....

     Bagair jane pehchane ikrar na kijiye,
     Muskura kar dil ko bequarar na kijiye,
     Phool bhi de jate hai zakhm ghera kabhi kabhi,
     har phool par yu aetbaar na kijiye..




Thank you So much Kabeer.MASHALLAh Nice Shair Brother.Good


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Re: My First Ghazal aap sab kee naZr ... Fahad Rind
« Reply #10 on: February 25, 2006, 02:23:26 AM »
Quote from: fahad
Salam To All My Baloch Brothers & Sisters,
I am Going to post my One Ghazal.I Hope U All Like this One INSHALLAH.But Before Posting it I wanna Say Something That I am So much thankful to Sis Naheed.She helped me So much in writing Of Poetry.Thank you So Much Sis Naheed for Helping Me So Much..


main sirf tum se muhabbat karta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney
har dhadkan main tuje pokharta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney

kar key mujh ko barbaad tum kitni khush ho
main khoon ke aansoo rota hon kabhi ye jana tum ney


Aye kash! tum dil key zakhmo,n ko mehsoos kar sakti
main kis karab sey guzarta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney


hazaro,n shikve hain magar main zaban par lata nahee
pal pal teri judaai main marta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney

chorro fahad , ab kaise ye giley shikvey kisee sey
main kanch ki tarah thoot kar bikharta hon kabhi ye jana tum ney


waoo... we  r proud of u fahab brother..
tum log insan ho yah jin
itney harfan mola main ny ajj tak kaheen nahi dekhy..
....... :) great jobbbb
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« Reply #11 on: February 25, 2006, 09:53:18 AM »
Thank You So Much Sis Nuno for Liking it.Anyway What U Mean Eer nuno.U think Keh Main Jin Hoooooooooo,n.hahahahahaha.


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« Reply #12 on: February 26, 2006, 08:15:40 PM »
hummm great work,,i liked that too
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