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Yaad Aata Hai Mujhe Vo Chaman --By FNR
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Re: Yaad Aata Hai Mujhe Vo Chaman --By FNR
« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2008, 10:30:11 PM »
wah Fahad tai Shahr e !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Patha patha , bota bota hal hamara jane hai
jane na jane gul he najane bag tu sara jane hai.

"I do not believe in God and I am not an
atheist."(Albert Camus).

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Re: Yaad Aata Hai Mujhe Vo Chaman --By FNR
« Reply #2 on: April 16, 2008, 02:13:23 PM »
wah Fahad tai Shahr e !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Patha patha , bota bota hal hamara jane hai
jane na jane gul he najane bag tu sara jane hai.



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Mein Hamesha Koi Bhi Cheez Likhta Hoo,n Ya Post Karta Hoo,n Baask Mein Tho Ye Kehta Zaroor Hoo,n Keh Na Mein Es Qadar Qaabil Nahi Hoo,n Kuch Likhne Ke Aur naa Hee Mujhe Itni Shaaoor Hai Shairy Ke Baare Mei,, Mein Jo Likhta Hoo,n Dil Karta Hai Aap Logo,n Ko Dekhawo`n.. Mujhe Pata hai Meri Shairy Achi Nahi Hai Magr Mein Kabhi Bhi Es Cheez Se Katrata Nahi Hoo,n Keh How Much My Poetrt Is Worst,,, I Do Post Them Whatever They Are...

Khair Gap Aga`n Dila Aart Mana Maaf Kan.. This Msg Actually Was Just To Tell All Of U That Mein Apne Aapko Acha Shaayir Nahi Samajta Aur Naa Hee Mein Hoo,n.. Magr Jo Mein Likhoonga Zaroor Yaha`n Post Karoonga Baask mein... Pasand Aaye Kisi Ko Tho Achi Baat Hai Aur Agr Na Aaye Tho Tanqeed Karne Ke Bajaye Naseehat Kare Tho Well & Good..


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Re: Yaad Aata Hai Mujhe Vo Chaman --By FNR
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2008, 04:59:34 PM »
Nan Tai Shaheri Shok ent Mashalah...................................Keep walking.......mani wadeen murdomani Postan care makan................Tum apne karne kar gozroooo/Jo hoga dayka jae ga......................Bas nebeshta bekan.........
"I do not believe in God and I am not an
atheist."(Albert Camus).

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Re: Yaad Aata Hai Mujhe Vo Chaman --By FNR
« Reply #4 on: April 17, 2008, 08:26:20 PM »
Jee Qasum Jan..... Thankx

As Brother Junaid Qadir Said Please Criticise For The Betterment Not Just For Criticism....


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Re: Yaad Aata Hai Mujhe Vo Chaman --By FNR
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2008, 03:22:09 PM »
Man angat tai sara criticize nokotag........Mani dila tu Balochi shahr belek sharter ent .................agan urdu lek ey Guda Raji a ya Naheeda paish esh bedar....................
 
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Re: Yaad Aata Hai Mujhe Vo Chaman --By FNR
« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2008, 04:03:44 PM »
Man angat tai sara criticize nokotag........Mani dila tu Balochi shahr belek sharter ent .................agan urdu lek ey Guda Raji a ya Naheeda paish esh bedar....................
 

Brother I Know U Did Not Criticise That Was Just to Tell All Of you...
Balochiye Taha Waja Man Koshish Baaz Kutag Bale Go`n Mana Nabit Baaz Mushkil int O Man Ee Qabil Naya`n Tanya Keh Balochi Belikka`n, Khair Koshish Jaari Beet INSHALLAH...

O Wahde Man Chizzein Likka`n Guda Zaroor Sis Raji O Sis Naheeda Peshe Daara`n Chya Ke Aa Mani Ustaad Ant O Be Aahani Kumakka Man Ech Likkit Nakana`n... Man Eda Hame Waasta Post Kutaga`n Keh Duraahein Mai Zaant Kaarein Members Wati Feedbacks a Bidiyant.
I Welcome Sis Raji & Sis Naheed If they comments They Are Most Welcome Thousands Times Welcome.. I need Their Feedbacks & Comments.

Waj Qasum Jan Tao Wat Zaant Kaarye O Qabile Mani Goma Aga`n Radi e Beet Mana Bogosh Pa Goshaga Kassi Kamtiri Zaahir Nabit Balkein Aayi Sharri Beet...