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muHabat kiya haY..?.....by...Naheed Baloch
« on: August 13, 2005, 04:04:18 PM »
sun ker nam muHabat ka
es dil ko
a"jab be-karari si hoyi
keY Aakhi
kis jaZbeY ka nam haY muHabat
muHabat ki Hakikat es dil neY
ek samander seY pochi
samander bol aTha
muHabat ghrayi ka nam haY
sager ki lehrooN meiN
Dob ker dekho
khod jan lo geY
muHabat kiya haY
ph~ir es dil neY
gulab keY phol seY pocha
muHabat kiya haY
gulab ki ph~unkhaRiyoN neY kh~iltY hoye kaha
muHabat khoshbo haY
jo khod-ba-khod
apneY wajod ka aHsas dilati haY
mager
ph~ir bhi
as dil ko tasali na hoyi
mun ki taskeen keliye
as dil neY
ek pojarun seY pocha
muHabat kiya haY
as pojarun neY kaha
bundh~anoN ki qued seY Aazad ho ker
jub ye dil
mun mundir meiN
kisi morat ki poja kerta haY
mager
as pojari ko
kh~uch paneY ki amed bhi nahi hoti
aur
ku~ch   kh~oneY ka Dar bhi nahiN hota
aur
be- munzil ki amed keY
wo apna wajod
as ki poja meiN qurban ker deta haY
dar Hakikat
muHabat ka dosra nam
qurbani hay
as pojarun ka jawab sun ker
ye dil lajawab ho gaya
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muHabat kiya haY..?.....by...Naheed Baloch
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2005, 05:55:55 PM »
BUHOT KHOOUB NAHEED BAHI  (F)


MOHABAT AISA DARYA HAI
K BARISH ROOTH BHI JAYE
TO PANI KUM NAHI HOTA

Mere haath mein haq ka jandaa hai, sar pe paansi ka panda hai, mein moot se kab darta hoon ,mein toh moot ke khatir jeeta hoon ,,Voice of Baloch

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« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2005, 08:39:40 PM »
Quote from: ZORO
BUHOT KHOOUB NAHEED BAHI  (F)


MOHABAT AISA DARYA HAI
K BARISH ROOTH BHI JAYE
TO PANI KUM NAHI HOTA

Aap ko meri poetry pasand Aayi ass keliye bohot shokriya :)
ZORO brother meiN Aap ka bhayi nahi Aap ki bahan ho  :)
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Re: muHabat kiya haY..?.....by...Naheed Baloch
« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2005, 10:38:34 AM »
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dar Haqiqat
muHabat ka dosra naam
qurbani hay
      

      
Azeezi Naheed Sis
PurkhulooS tasleemat
      
aap kee yeh nazm meiN aap kee kitab 'Mann Mandir' meN paRh chukii hooN.
choNkeh yeh aap kee puranii takhleeq hai iss liye isske ba'ad ke kalaam meN aap ke ziyada pukhtgii miltee hai.
yeh Haqeeqat hai keh Saubat aur mashq-e-sukhan hee aage baRhne ka zariyaa hotee heN.    
      
mujhe iss nazm ka concept bohat pasand aaya hai specially quoted lines are nice.
      
meree janib se daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
      
aap kee deegar takhleeqaat ka bhi intizaar rahe gaa.
      
wassalam
      
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muHabat kiya haY..?.....by...Naheed Baloch
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2005, 03:26:13 PM »
Mohabbat wo ehsaas hai jo mehsoos tho kia ja sakta hai par kisi ko mohabbat ka ehsaas nahi karaya ja sakta, yani" agar main kisi se mohabbat karta hoon or wo mujh se mohabbat nahi karti tho main usey apni mohabbat k liye majboor nahi kar sakta or na he main us ka piyaar is tareeqay se paa sakta hoon.

Mohabbat or chahat mein bada farq hai, kisi ko pasand karne ka matlab ye nahi hai k aap us se mohabbat kartey ho... Mohabbat or zidd alag cheezein hain, agar aap kisi ko har soorat mein hasil karna chahtey hain tho ye mohabbat nahi zidd hai, agar aap ko koi acha lagey tho ye mohabbat nahi chahat hai, agar aap ko koi khoobsurat lagey tho ye mohabbat nahi passand hai,, agar aap ko kisi ki koi baat achchi lagey tho ye bhi mohabbat nahi bal k achchai hai us ki, kisi ki muskurahat or passandedagi ko mohabbat samajhna bohot badi naadani hai or is ka anjaam pachtavey k siva kuch bhi nahi.

mohabbat tho wo phool hai jis ki mahek kabhi khatam nahi ho sakti; mohabbat tho ishq hai, mohabbat tho azeem hai, mohabbat tho baylos hoti hai, mohabbat laalichi or harees nahi hoti, mohabbat tho sadakat hoti hai, mohabbat tho sahadat hai or sab se badd kar mohabbat tho qurbaani hoti hai. or ye falsafa mohabbat ka sirf wahi samajh sakta hai jis ne kabhi sacchi mohabbat ki ho.



Sis Naheed aap ne tho anth kar dia is nazm se.. :mrgreen:  meri janib se dehron daad qabool kijiye. (F)

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« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2005, 06:08:41 PM »
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Aap ney to meri nazam ka baGhor jayiza liya aur mera jo sawal tha...muhabat kiya hay ?  app neY bher por dilayil sey jawab diya  :) app key her lafz meiN gherayi mehsos hoyi mujeY ,,
Brother app ko meri nazam pasand Aayi ass keliye bohot shokriya :)
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« Reply #6 on: August 16, 2005, 06:25:46 PM »
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Quote from: Naheed Baloch

dar Haqiqat
muHabat ka dosra naam
qurbani hay
      

      
Azeezi Naheed Sis
PurkhulooS tasleemat
      
aap kee yeh nazm meiN aap kee kitab 'Mann Mandir' meN paRh chukii hooN.
choNkeh yeh aap kee puranii takhleeq hai iss liye isske ba'ad ke kalaam meN aap ke ziyada pukhtgii miltee hai.
yeh Haqeeqat hai keh Saubat aur mashq-e-sukhan hee aage baRhne ka zariyaa hotee heN.    
      
mujhe iss nazm ka concept bohat pasand aaya hai specially quoted lines are nice.
      
meree janib se daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
      
aap kee deegar takhleeqaat ka bhi intizaar rahe gaa.
      
wassalam
      
Your sister
Raji

salam zahida sis
Aap ko meri kavish pasans Aayi as keliye bohot shokriya  :)
ji meiN boHot jald apna taza kalam post karoN gi ,,,,
sis ji ha ye poetry meri book mun mundir meiN mojod haY ...yakinan app neY paRi ho gi ...wo kiya ha khabi khabi asa hota hay hum jitna hi naya aur pukhta likh leiN lakin hameiN apni porani takhleek ziyada pasand Aati haY .....asi tara mujey Aapni ye nazam pasand haY ....asi liye socha yaha sub logoN seY shair karoN .....
ji bohot juld Aap ko  mera naya kalam peRneY ko mileY ga ...bher por pazirayi keliye meiN dil sey Aap ki mumnon hoN
ur sis
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muHabat kiya haY..?.....by...Naheed Baloch
« Reply #7 on: August 17, 2005, 02:37:04 PM »
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Quote from: ZORO
BUHOT KHOOUB NAHEED BAHI  (F)


MOHABAT AISA DARYA HAI
K BARISH ROOTH BHI JAYE
TO PANI KUM NAHI HOTA

Aap ko meri poetry pasand Aayi ass keliye bohot shokriya :)
ZORO brother meiN Aap ka bhayi nahi Aap ki bahan ho  :)


OH MAFI CHAHTA HOON SISTER .

Mere haath mein haq ka jandaa hai, sar pe paansi ka panda hai, mein moot se kab darta hoon ,mein toh moot ke khatir jeeta hoon ,,Voice of Baloch

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« Reply #8 on: August 20, 2005, 07:10:10 PM »
ZORO Brother
no problem :) baReY baReY charoN mein choTi choTi galtiyaN ho jati heiN  :)
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« Reply #9 on: April 04, 2006, 11:04:40 PM »
Aik din kaantey ney phool sey poocha k aaye phool' mujhe tumhari mohabbat sey kya haasil howa mujhe dekhtey hi har koi apney teevar badal leta hai shayad iss liye k mein unhain zakhmi kar deta hoon or Duniya tum par marti hai tumhari khushboo leney ko tarasti hai lakin mujhe tumhari mohabbat se kya milla- Phool yeh sab sun kar phool muskuraya or kehney laga tumhain to khush hona chahiye jiss par duniya marti hai woh tumharay baghair aik pal nahin reh sakta'jab mujhe koi tum sey juda karta hai to mein mar jata hoon kyun k mein sirf aur sirf tum sey mohabbat karta hoon ,,,,,,