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              NA SAE SAKE JAB MUSAFTHO KE AZAB SAARE
                    THO KAR GAYE KOOCH MERE AANKHO SE KHWAB SAARE

                     BAHAR AAYI HAI TUM BEE AAHO YAHAN SE GUZRO
                    TUME DEKHNA CHAHTHE HAI GULAB SAARE

                    YEH SANEA THA KE WAHEZO SE ULAJ PARE HUM
                     YEH WAQIA THA KE PEE RAHE THE SHAARAB SAARE

                     BALA HUA HUM GUNEGAARO NE ZIDH NAHI KI
                     KE SAMET KAR LEGAYA NAASIH SAWAB SAARE

                    FARAZ KIS NE MERE MUQADAR MAIN LIKH DIYE
                    AIK DARYA KI DOSTI MAIN SARAAB SAARE
"SUCCESS" IS NEVER PERMANENT...."FAILURE" IS NEVER FINAL........SO ALWAYS DO NOT STOP EFFORT UNTIL UR   "VICTORY"  MAKES A "HISTORY".

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Re: NA SAE SAKE JAB MUSFATHO KE AZAB..........................MAHEER
« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2008, 07:13:55 PM »
kyaa yeh Maheer kee Ghazal hai?
agar naheeN tu phir aap ne title meN "NA SAE SAKE JAB MUSFATHO KE AZAB..........................MAHEER" kyoN diyaa hai.

agar yeh Ghazal Ahmad Faraz SaaHeb kee hai jo maqta se zaahir hota hai tu phir maqta out of meter hai :) jo Ahmad Faraz SaaHeb ghalat^ii se bhi naheeN kar sakte.

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« Reply #2 on: October 03, 2008, 07:09:59 PM »
 :$ :$ :$ :$ :$ :$ :$ :$ I M SORRY ..................IT WAS BY MISTAKE  :$ :$ :$ :$ :$ :$ :$

                           GHAZAL  AHMED FARAZ KI HAI MAGAR SHAHYED MUJE SAHEE YAAD NAHI
"SUCCESS" IS NEVER PERMANENT...."FAILURE" IS NEVER FINAL........SO ALWAYS DO NOT STOP EFFORT UNTIL UR   "VICTORY"  MAKES A "HISTORY".

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Re: NA SAE SAKE JAB MUSFATHO KE AZAB..........................MAHEER
« Reply #3 on: October 03, 2008, 07:30:31 PM »
Koyi baat naheeN. Khayaal mat keejiye gaa.
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