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Offline Imraan saaqib

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Jashn E Shikast
« on: October 20, 2008, 01:47:29 PM »
''Jashn E Shikast''

Khanjar ba dast apne hi tahaaqub men

Apni hi jaray'n kaatnay kay darpay hum

Apne hi sar qalam kiye huay faateh

Apni hi maut par hain khoob nazaa'n bhi

Apni hi haar par manaae'n jashn e fateh

Wo jashn kay jis kay tamaashbeen bhi hum

Sab shaadmaan zard mujassim laashay

Shashdar zada huay kay ajab manzar hay

Haatho'n men liye tan se juda sar apne

Shurka tamaam sar katay thay mehfil men

Har haath se tapak raha tha khoon e watan

Sab soorato'n pe surkhiyo'n kay cheentay thay

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Re: Jashn E Shikast
« Reply #1 on: October 28, 2008, 04:18:36 PM »
Janab Imraan Saaqib SaaHeb:
Aadaab o tasleemaat,

aap kee is naZ^m meN maujood insaaniyat ka dardnaak manZ^ar bilashubah aaj ke daur ka sab se baRaa almiyaah hai.

jabtak insaan ke andar kee yeh be-Hisii Khat^m naheeN hogii insaanooN ke haatooN insaanooN ka yahii anjaam ho gaa.


Allah(swt) sab ko apne Hifz o amaan meN rakhe (Aameen)
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Re: Jashn E Shikast
« Reply #2 on: December 07, 2008, 01:29:54 PM »
Aadab Imran saqib ji

Aap ki nazam mein dard aur bebasi ka manzar nazar ata hy ajkal waki halat asey hein k insan hi insan k khon ka piyasa hy ,,, kheny ko  to to sab hi insan hein mager na janey kiyo insaniyat khatam ho gayi hay her koyi ak dosrey k khon ka piyasa hay , her taraf nafrat hi nafrat hay diloN mein atni ranjish hy k dosti Aaman muhabat ab ak khuwab meHsos hota hy .....
khuda humeN  es nafrat ki fiza sey bachayee .......(Aameen)
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Re: Jashn E Shikast
« Reply #3 on: December 16, 2008, 12:17:17 AM »
Imran bhaa'ii, aadaab !

kaise mizaaj haiN ?

janaab aap kii nazm hameN bahut pur-acar aur dil-gudaaz lagii ! is meiN maujood insaanii dard ka samandar kalaam kii Soorat maujzan hai !
meri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool kejiye ! shukriya

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Re: Jashn E Shikast
« Reply #4 on: April 19, 2009, 05:48:42 PM »
Janab Imraan Saaqib SaaHeb:
Aadaab o tasleemaat,

aap kee is naZ^m meN maujood insaaniyat ka dardnaak manZ^ar bilashubah aaj ke daur ka sab se baRaa almiyaah hai.

jabtak insaan ke andar kee yeh be-Hisii Khat^m naheeN hogii insaanooN ke haatooN insaanooN ka yahii anjaam ho gaa.


Allah(swt) sab ko apne Hifz o amaan meN rakhe (Aameen)
 goun_neiken_wahagan

 wati raaj e heyr loutouk


Aadab Imran saqib ji

Aap ki nazam mein dard aur bebasi ka manzar nazar ata hy ajkal waki halat asey hein k insan hi insan k khon ka piyasa hy ,,, kheny ko  to to sab hi insan hein mager na janey kiyo insaniyat khatam ho gayi hay her koyi ak dosrey k khon ka piyasa hay , her taraf nafrat hi nafrat hay diloN mein atni ranjish hy k dosti Aaman muhabat ab ak khuwab meHsos hota hy .....
khuda humeN  es nafrat ki fiza sey bachayee .......(Aameen)
Imran bhaa'ii, aadaab !

kaise mizaaj haiN ?

janaab aap kii nazm hameN bahut pur-acar aur dil-gudaaz lagii ! is meiN maujood insaanii dard ka samandar kalaam kii Soorat maujzan hai !
meri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool kejiye ! shukriya

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sab se pehle moazrat kay mujhe is nazm k response men bheje gae teen saahib ur raa'ay dosto k taasuraat ka shukrya ada karne ki taufeeq itne arsay tak na hui,,,
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