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too faqat parhti rahi apni khayalaat ka rang
too ny deki hy kahan pyar k jazbaat ka rang?

yon hi honton pe tabassam ki  ziahen   pao
Rab deklay kabi tuj ko na    halaat  ka  rang

kaisy manon k gulestan me  bahar  aa,e  hay
phool mehky hain na badla hy ksi paat ka rang?

muj sa pagal jo nesabon me parha sach mana
shokria samja dia too  ny  mosawaat  ka rang

kion jesy chahon to pher toot k chahta hon usy?
lakh chaha b  na  badla  meri  aadaat  ka  rang

phool jarhty ty  kabi  jen  k  haseen  honton  pe
Ab k lagta hy khadang jesa hr ek baat  ka  rang

too hi Ghalib  ki  negahon  me  kabi  jank  sahi
ks ki soorat me lpet jaty hain den raat ka rang?[/i]

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Re: too faqat parhti rahi apni khayalaat ka rang by Gulab Ghalib Baluch
« Reply #1 on: March 05, 2009, 02:26:14 PM »
Wajah Gulab Ghalib Baluch:
Salam o drouth,

kyoNkeh Ghazal Urdu kee hai isliYe baat maiN urdu meN hee karna munasib samajhete hooN.
aap kee Ghazal dekh kar andaza hota hai keh Ghazal ke tamaam bunyaadii uSoolooN se aap waaqif heN aur aap kee Ghazal un tamaam lawazmaat ko pooraa kar rahii hai.
zameen bhi zarKhez hai aur ashaar bhi aap ne ache baandhe heN. meree jaanib se dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

Ek baat yeh kehna chahooNgii keh Ghalib ka taKhaluS Mirza Asadullah Khan Ghalib ke naam se manSoob hai. kyaa hee acha ho keh aap apna ek munfarid taKhalluS rakheN jo aap kee apnii pehchaan bane?

Yeh ek mashvara hai maanna na maanna aap par munHaSSir hai. agar meree kisee baat se aap kee dil-aazaari hoovii ho tu iske liYe bohat ma'azrat khwah hooN.


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Re: too faqat parhti rahi apni khayalaat ka rang by Gulab Ghalib Baluch
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2009, 11:55:12 AM »
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Re: too faqat parhti rahi apni khayalaat ka rang by Gulab Ghalib Baluch
« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2009, 09:05:59 PM »
Gohaar Zahida
Salaam

Gohaar ! shoma,e lakh minnath k mani paime,an nazaanth karia saro soj kan ith. shoma,e gapp wathi jahaa barabar inth o man ham hamy marethag, Bala,e ida gapp esh inth k man sakk de,ar inth k Balochi labzaank,e taha gon hamay naam o pannaama pajjarag baan, Mani kadd,e wath nebeshthaank o aa deg,e mawaad  ham,e pannaama gon sheng boothag anth, pameshka noon paman aishee,a badal kanag kammo graan inth.

Yak bar,e pada ghazal dost kanag,e o saro sojaani minnathwaar,

shoma,e braath
G.G Baluch

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Re: too faqat parhti rahi apni khayalaat ka rang by Gulab Ghalib Baluch
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2009, 09:43:14 PM »
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