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gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« on: June 03, 2009, 10:37:49 PM »
bismillah

 [assalam]

its my first urdu ghazal which i am going to share with u all....plz read and reply me with ur suggestions....

neend nahi aathi humko chain nahi aathi
betaab hai dil kab se dil daar nahi aathi

thi humein pehle tho nafrath sharaab sai
ab na hoon ge hum agar mai(sharab) nahi hothi

janaza na manao mere dil-e-murda ki ae doston
raheinge zinda jab tak zalim-e-be rahm nahi aathi

hogaya  hoon  ab  tho  be  zaar  zindagi  sai
jahan bhi jathaan hoon chain magar nahi aathi

gham - e - ishq  seekh  lee *SAHIL* 
ab  koyi  gham  safar  nahi  aathi

f u like it or let me know....and if i had a mistake plz correct me so that i dnt repeat it again...

 
shome_baaz_minnatvaran

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2009, 11:26:26 PM »
Gud job....  E:D3  washnaam_baate




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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2009, 11:28:26 PM »
Gud job....  E:D3  washnaam_baate




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thnx >>naaz<<....i am glad that u like it....

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2009, 12:57:46 AM »
very nice poetry |||o

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #4 on: June 15, 2009, 02:54:10 AM »
very nice poetry |||o

thnx for encouraging.... (ff)

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #5 on: June 16, 2009, 02:20:31 PM »
 :% baaz wash nam  huda  (ff) .... |||o
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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #6 on: June 16, 2009, 02:24:08 PM »
:% baaz wash nam  huda  (ff) .... |||o

menath waaran tai dadaani..... (ff)

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #7 on: June 16, 2009, 02:24:31 PM »
Mazaar jan baaz sharen chizi tao be ashiqi zany hahaha (ff) bale balochi belek washtere urdu may zobaan nahe  :)():(
Man Balochian Agan Man Bolotan Estaal Karan..

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #8 on: June 16, 2009, 02:31:49 PM »
Mazaar jan baaz sharen chizi tao be ashiqi zany hahaha (ff) bale balochi belek washtere urdu may zobaan nahe  :)():(

prince jaan korbana tho fekr makan...man yak balochi shair'e inshallah bandan...bus shome dua goon bibith... (ff)

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #9 on: June 17, 2009, 02:55:27 PM »
Balochi belek baba.Nahi hathia faheda nest
"I do not believe in God and I am not an
atheist."(Albert Camus).

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #10 on: June 17, 2009, 04:18:10 PM »
Balochi belek baba.Nahi hathia faheda nest

inshallah qasum jaan.....ey nahi aathia mani hayala faeda nesth...

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #11 on: June 20, 2009, 01:28:12 AM »
Dear Mr (Sahil) Mazar Rind
dont ever be DILPROSH at any time or any circumstances....
Balochi wa mai shahden zubane... bale... donya e drosten zubana aga mardom yad begereet mani hayala baden gappey nahen...
bale ey Gahzal e post kanaga pesar tao Banok Zahida ya Banok Naheeda consult bokoten mani hayala ayan tamdar o washter kotag ath pa tao !!!
che khayalen tai ????
any how wati dastan madar... yak na yak roche lazom " kuch na kuch zarur aayegi "
thanx
Sherjan Askani

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Re: gham-e-ishq by Mazar Sahil
« Reply #12 on: June 27, 2009, 09:42:20 PM »
"kuch na kuch tho zaroor ayegi" baaz menath tai del badeeyani braath SHERJAAN ASKANI.. (ff)

bale man wa nazantha k kaya consult bekana chya k man daniga deewana nokaan pameshka man sahi nabithaga..inshallah deem'e randha man hanch kana....baaz menath...