its my first urdu ghazal which i am going to share with u all....plz read and reply me with ur suggestions....
neend nahi aathi humko chain nahi aathi
betaab hai dil kab se dil daar nahi aathi
thi humein pehle tho nafrath sharaab sai
ab na hoon ge hum agar mai(sharab) nahi hothi
janaza na manao mere dil-e-murda ki ae doston
raheinge zinda jab tak zalim-e-be rahm nahi aathi
hogaya hoon ab tho be zaar zindagi sai
jahan bhi jathaan hoon chain magar nahi aathi
gham - e - ishq seekh lee *SAHIL*
ab koyi gham safar nahi aathi
f u like it or let me know....and if i had a mistake plz correct me so that i dnt repeat it again...