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Title: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: HABIB MOHAMMED SAEED on August 13, 2008, 01:11:31 PM
mahekanee shappaan k man tahary gendaa. mahgole maheen dema mulory gendaa.dil hazar tukora bit mani hama sahta. tara k man go malgaan hazary gendaa.many sah go malkamoota goazi kant.tara k banoory wahda man betawari gendaa. noo tao wafa ae  nahe raha shar zanaa.ganookaa k angat tara pa wadari gendaa. nahet may zinda washiyani ah daor habib. zerde baga maroocha man bebahari gendaa. ...habib almiraan :$
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on August 13, 2008, 01:51:17 PM
Wajah Habib Al-Miraan
Salam o wahag,

shoma hamaen' ey diwan a atkag e shoma wati mavaad post kanag a yak radii kanagae.
anchosh keh tao ham zaane Ghazal (dastoonk) yaa aazad nazm (lachcha) o paband nazm (dastanag) e nibissag (lekkag e) yak tareeqa e bi. hamok perband baheden' yak rid e tooka bibi o dohmii perband dohmii rid a bibi
pada ghazal e hamok sher a rand yak line e gap bayag ham laazum en' bale shome hamok nazm o ghazal durah yakken' line a peragaraph e Soorat a post bayagayan'.

pameshkaa waanouk taee nibishtankani saraa wati opinion daat kot nakanagayan'

tao agan' "full stop " e jagaya yak ENTER KEY press bekane taee pointer wat ey dege line a kaet.

man taee ey dastoonk ey saahata correct type kota.
noun' goun tao dazbandien keh deyme randa ey gappey hayaldaariyaa wat bekan'

goun' wahagan'

wati raaj e heyr loutuk
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Dastoonk

mahekanee shappaan k man tahary gendaa.
mahgole maheen dema mulory gendaa.

dil hazar tukora bit mani hama sahta.
tara k man go malgaan hazary gendaa.

many sah go malkamoota goazi kant.
tara k banoory wahda man betawari gendaa.

noo tao wafa ae  nahe raha shar zanaa.
ganookaa k angat tara pa wadari gendaa.

nahet may zinda washiyani ah daor habib.
zerde baga maroocha man bebahari gendaa.

...habib almiraan
Title: Re: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: HABIB MOHAMMED SAEED on August 13, 2008, 02:13:30 PM
banok zahida raisi  man chato che paheli lotaa o omeet zaher kana k dege bare choshee radi nabit o man tai menata gerag lotaa k tao mani rahshooni kot tai baaz baaz menat waar. tai kaster habib almiraan baloch E| E|

Title: Re: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: Aazat Baloch on August 13, 2008, 02:39:04 PM
poooo habib bejan zalim  |||o tao na tahe dastoonk baz wash en  (yh)

tara goshan habib tao peer e k adda zahida bogoshe taee kaster tao man pet amsaro baye tara tump e kalat mage hahahahahahahaha
Title: Re: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: HABIB MOHAMMED SAEED on August 13, 2008, 02:48:31 PM
he yak ahterame nekba sar tai bare bare fuz watsa shat bant man tai pete na tai bon peeroke balkee humsaro aa tao man sharter zane E| E| E| kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Title: Re: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: ~Mahrang~ on August 14, 2008, 03:57:07 AM
 E:D3

mashallah very nice.
Title: Re: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: HABIB MOHAMMED SAEED on August 14, 2008, 09:13:17 AM
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Title: Re: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: ღ° NaZgOl ღ on August 14, 2008, 07:36:29 PM
v.nice....
i ussually dun understan deep balochi but i copped up wid this...
very very nice...

bless u
NaZGoL AsKaNi
Title: Re: mahekaani shappaan' k man tahary gendaa.(gazal)
Post by: Rind Baba on August 15, 2008, 06:21:18 AM

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Dastoonk

mahekanee shappaan k man tahary gendaa.
mahgole maheen dema mulory gendaa.

dil hazar tukora bit mani hama sahta.
tara k man go malgaan hazary gendaa.

many sah go malkamoota goazi kant.
tara k banoory wahda man betawari gendaa.

noo tao wafa ae  nahe raha shar zanaa.
ganookaa k angat tara pa wadari gendaa.

nahet may zinda washiyani ah daor habib.
zerde baga maroocha man bebahari gendaa.

...habib almiraan

Baaz wash habib Jaan Tae e dastoonk mana ham baaz wash bout keepit up