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Title: Jabar Askani جابر آسکانی ءِ شئر و پربند۔
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 02, 2011, 11:33:00 PM
                             Emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
                             marg  mae  deedaga  rock maan kanth
 
                             pa zaanth  wathi raha gaar kanth daim
                             dil gushe sarpade thepliye deedag inth
 
                             haak  mani  dehh e sadd  satha karzith
                             naapag  mani  rosthagg  ma  peshgaha
 
                             dedagani wahde nehenge haar mallanth
                             hushke kanig musaferani raaha charanth
 
                             marg  repeenith  Bani  aadam   aa  daim
                             mardum   zindaga   inth   Qabrani  thaha
 
                             proshith     nehenge     hoshaam    zinde
                             aga kasse  tharampani hesaaba bezaanth
 
                                                                                                                  shome_baaz_minnatvaran
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: Thangi Baloch تنگی بلوچ on February 03, 2011, 02:15:49 AM
برات جابرآسکانی تئی اے آزات لچّہ باز جوان اِنت۔ سوبین بات ات
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 03, 2011, 08:12:43 PM
wajaen beraath thangi shumaa shaad baathe,,,
  mani beraath mann shaer e naha bass bare bare gun dila o pekra  jang kana gun.thai lafzani rang dayege sakk baaz minnath wara jan,mana saro sooj kaneth aga radiye booth inth.mann shume saro soojani rahchara daema.....shume kasther jabar askani
                                                                                    washnaam_baate
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: daniel on February 04, 2011, 04:34:44 PM
BAAZ JOWANIEN SHAERIE WAJA...
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 04, 2011, 05:15:56 PM
SALAM wajahe beraath daniel jan..
mann sakk baz minnath wara ke shuma wathi polle deedagani shank bakshaath..
                                                      washnaam_baate
Title: Re:Mani {dasthonk} shume Eslah e chamshaanke luteth.
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 05, 2011, 04:27:40 PM
                              cho   thepliye  paema   pa  galahag
                              arwah  nimmon kanth pa darahaga
 
                              cho  mehre   drachka   bae   wahde
                              chamma bakshaa mann thai sahaga
 
                              narr mageske thai jeega naneshtha
                              paake  daamon  thai sheer  mahaga
 
                              dasthe  lakeera  mann  thara  ginda
                              hasth chedage janthe thai chahraga
 
                              thai    thalab    dile    pollani    sara
                              cho   nood   sabaahe   bith  guaraga
 
                              shapp hanul e ,roch sadoo we ranga
                              sadd  sdakka  pa  thai  dile  daaraga
 
                                                                                              shome_baaz_minnatvaran
                             
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: Adabi Hakim ادبی ھکیم on February 05, 2011, 11:59:20 PM
salounken braat jabaar askani
salam o pollen droud
brat taei dastounk e wahag baz jowanent balay agan ara man benobeshten man chosh nobeshtagat , pahelly loutan .
emrouz pa dazmoushi gwazeet harch kasi
AA kas ke bandaat e shouhaza makant
Raha modama gaar bekant
Delgoush goun didagan makant
Haak mani deih e sata karzeet
Napag rodeet man peishgahi
Neheng harch wahd haar malleet
Mosaper hoshken kaneega chareet
Marg rippeineet ensana daem
A kasa ke zend e kadra mazant
Proushit zend e houshama neheng
Gar zend tramppani hosaba bezant
cha shoma pahelly loutan ke bey shomay josta man shomay dastounka nagdkary kot.
souben bebatet.
shomay brat
adabi hakim 
 
 
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 06, 2011, 08:24:12 PM
salam wajahe beraath,,
shuma shaad baathe,o mann dile juhlaankiya shume mannath wara ke shuma wathi polle deedagani shaank pammana bakshetha anth.zaanthe o pekre juhle zarr aa mann thaninga door aa ,angath thayaaba ha.hame waastha bootha kanth mani guna radiye bebith.shuma mani lachcha eslah kurthag mana doosth booth.o mana shuma shaath hamm nabe ke mann dega ozer e ya ke ethraaze bekna.........
 
aga shuma dila mayareth mann wathi hayaal hamm gun shuma bahr kana aga dila kaare guda gunahgaar bae.chiyya ke mann shume baaz ehtharam aa kana.omid dara shuma mani gappa sarpad bae..minnath w
mani ee lachcha e thaha booth kanth lafzani poshtho deem hasthe,bale aga hayaale baabatha bechaare guda  mann rad naha chiyya ke mardum yakk shaere likkith guda yakk pekre ye daamon aa nendith.
mesaale....emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
               marg  mae deedaga  rock maan kanth
awwali banda mann dunyahe habarkuthag.ke dunya yakk aazmaeshe pamma. eda mara chezze ekhtyaar dayag boothaga cha allah e neemaga.ma ekhtyaar darre bale chizze haddo band hasth anth.maa serf yakeen e daamon aa ee safar e mosafer inth.mae deema hech chiz paddar nahenth,maa wathi chamma hech nagendinth sirf yakeen o emman deedaga chaarenth.bale marga chaa rand mae deema ee pardag cheesth bith o harr chizz paddar bithinth. yaani dunya o aakherath zaaher banth.haqeekath mae deema ooshthith,,,,,,hame paema mani shaere harr bande yakk droshume daarith,encho wazaahath kanag nabith shuma wath zaane,,shuma wathi hayaal daathag wathi jagaha barabarenth. mana doosth both.
mann yakk dega chizze raa daya shuma wathi chamshaanka zaroor bedyeth.mana do sharre teacher hasthenth,,{waja thangi baloch o waja adabi hakim}no mann zana ke mani ee safar aasan boothe..
    thai kasther jabar askani..shaad baathe...minnathwara
                                                                                          washnaam_baate
 
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on February 06, 2011, 08:37:46 PM
Wajaen braat Jabar Askani:
Assalam o alaikum,

diwwan a shome jind e perband dist del baaz vash bit.
goshant sharren' waanok laazum naent keh sharren' adeeb o shaair bebant bale agan' sharren' qaari ya waanok nebeshta kanag bina kanant goRa aa allama sharr lekkag e johud kanant o mana shome perbandani taha shome pegr e johlaankii gendag atk o ey baaz juwaanen' chizzen'.

Shoma chiyaa keh pah sar o souj delmaang et pameshka ma wati chamshaank a techkaka dayagayan' omaitent ishiya masbat zooret.

Cha shoma yak jost e hast keh mani jind a angata na URDU e tooka o nae keh Baluchi e taha Aazaat dastoonk wantag bale awali randen' keh shome perband e sara gendagayan' o cha shomara rand man Wajah Khaliq Arman e ketab chaaret hooda ham ey chiz dist. agan' mara shoma ey babata chizzey bogoshet keh ey shaairee e kojaam sensf ent o ishiye raah o rahband (rules and regulation ) chey ent ey ham bogoshet mennatvaar bayan'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
marg  mae  deedaga.n  rock maan kanth
(deedaga = deedagan')
 
pa zaanth  wathi raha gaar kanth daim
dil gushe sarpade thepliye deedag inth

(dohmi tahar e sara man zoor janagayan keh balken' chush bibit)
del goshe sarpaden tepl-iYe deedag int


haak  mani  dehh e sadd  seta karzith
naapag  mani  rosthagg  ma  peshgaha

(man shome ey sher e sawaba ey perbanda Ghazal gosht nakanagayan' agan' azaat ghazal e rahbandan' bezanan' balken mani sar ham per bibit )

dedagani wahde nehenge haar mallanth
hushke kanig musaferani raaha charanth
(ey band kammo mani sara sar gwazagaen' agan' shoma techkter kotent gehter at. 

marg  repeenith  Bani  aadam-a  daa,em
mardum   zindag- ant   Qabrani  thaha


proshith     nehenge     hoshaam    zinde
aga kasse  tharampani hesaaba bezaanth

ey sahen' sheraani pegr sharrent.

Wazhnaam baatet
Title: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 06, 2011, 08:56:00 PM
                                        THAI SHUHAAZA  DARKAPA JENDE PADA  GERA
                                        WAHDE PATHO RASA  MANN RAHA GAAR KANA
 
                                        ROOCH O SHAPP  AGA   MAANAE  BULOTANTH
                                        MANN  DEEDAGA   BAND  KANA O PACH  KANA
 
                                        RANG    ZARD  O  THAAM   SHAKKALA    INTH
                                        BEENAGG    MAGESKAANI     DAPEEL     ANTH
 
                                        SHEER  MANI CHAMMA DAR  NAETH  HECHBAR
                                        MAATH  KOHHE  WAHDE  SAAHAGA   NENDAA
 
                                        AA   MANA  ANCHOSH    LOTITH   PA  WATHA
                                        CHO    AAHOGE     HAZITH     MANI    BOOWA
         
                                        HAAK   MAE    HOORIYA    THARR   BOOTHAG
                                        SAKK      DOOSTH     BAE     THAU      MANA....
 
                                                                                           shome_baaz_minnatvaran
 
 
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 06, 2011, 10:57:00 PM
salamath baathe bebe shuma...
mann minnathwara shume chamm shanke shume dasth dard makanth..mann wathi pekr aa shairy ya sakk balahen darjahe dayan,ee harkasi wasa dannenth.rasthi baaz ketaabe waanaga mardum khayaale wazna sarpad bith khayaala hamm yakk haddiya sarpad both kanth bale shair nabith. noo mann hamm hame rama guna gun.bale shume wade rahshon hamrah bebanth guda mae waden nook bahande shair aani ee safar arzaan bith.....shume saro soojaani minnathwara......
 
shuma drusth kurthagath ke AZAAD gazal babatha mana sarpad bekaneth..mann wathi pekre o wajhani gushthagen sarhaalani baabatha kammo habar kana aga radiye both pehl kaneth...
HAZAR minnath pa waja { sabah dashthyari } aa ke aahiya  [1999] Azaad gazal e naama awwali bara {maahthaak}, balochi lubzaank,habb e thaak, africi baloch no, e thaha ,,maah augest o suptember a[1999]aa shing boothag.waja sabah dashtyari e azaad dasthoonke thaha naeke baher o thange paabandi kanag bothag o naeke red peeshred e ,albath hamokshaerwathi juthaen yakthai o maane daranth. shaer e darwara begendeth.....
 
thai   juthaiya  haar  arsaani
mani baalada malletha chicho
baare thau zende nooken rahsara
mana thahthaale baanzula bande
mann thai dathage durhen waaba
wathi Qabre saronna shakk kana
thau hama dard bakshathag dilbar
mann cha dugnyaha grastha aajo
angath begaha sormage thau mani
dile darwazaga samare o guaze
ee  sabah,,  e dil  ganooke ke
omre guazenth bewafaha pa....wahh
 
Azaad dasthonke thajrubath[ Manzoor besmill ]shaere deewan {aap rang}e thaha o gindag bith,besmill a wathi shaer e thaha thang{bahr}paasdari nakurthag bale thawame shaer a peesh rede pabandi gindag bith.hamuk shaer wathi paband dasthonk e wadawathi yakthai o juthaen maane daranth.
azaad dasthonke darwara begendeth........
mahnowe enjeer e saahaga  ya mureed e dagaani daryahen neshaan
marcha  maara  deer  perren  nanth  thai  nazzikye  deeren  gumaan
noobathe    anche   ke  saah o  saahag  kessah   nabith
che   dega  lutith   thara   besmill,, wathi  jindaa bezaan..wahh
 
Azaad dasthonka balochi ye thaharewaaj dayaga Manzoor besmill e kerd drustha burzinth.aaiye shaer e deewan {saach}e naama chaap boothag.baaske thaha hamm hasthen shuma chamm shaank bidyeth.ee balochi lubzaank thani wahdi bendaathi teekiyenth.saach e thaha azaathen dasthonk  aani red o peesh red e pabandi kanag boothag bale cha {bahr } o wazna azaath anth .ee wada balochi lubzaanke awwali sarjamen thajrubathe gushth bith ke ketaabi e wada athkag......
duraahen dunya zerr e laapa inth
zingai geraan inth boojegani thaha
rooch namahramani  sethra kanth
sahaga  wash   washa   kenzinith
kaaya baalo mani qabre sara
baanula    wathi   chaaranth...wahh
...................
hushke    thaakani      paema
guaatha guna anth bani adam
besmill  aasa  roock    makan
kaah o booch kudohe   banth...wahh
 
shuma {saach }waanagi  ha buwaaneth shuma geshther sarpad baeth......aga radiye boothag ,,pehl kaneth..washnam baathe,,,,jabaraskani washnaam_baate
Title: Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on February 07, 2011, 09:10:47 AM

wajaen braat Jabar Askani:
Assalam o alaikum,

Shome ey perband e sara mani chamshaank randter kaet keh annu dazgatti sak baazent ey sahata do gapp janag louTan omaitent dela nayaaret.
1. shoma ey perband nebeshtank e section a daatag bahed ey Shaairee e section a butten' (man ishiya move kanagayan' shairee section e taha)

2. Shoma ey sarhaal e sara Islah e wahag darshaan kotag ey babata chizz gap techk kanag louTan'

IslaH dayag har kasi kaar naent

iSlaH dayuk e bahed ent keh aa ey kaar e taha balad bibit

aa sher e pegr a sarpad bibit

aa sher e vazn a sarpad bibit

aa islaH dayuken' perband e sinf e raah o rahbandan' bezaant. yani lachcha a lachcha e paema o dastoonka dastoonk e paema o saut ya zaheerookan' hama rangan' bechaarit

agan' dastoonk ent bahed islaH dayuk sherani radeef o qaafiy, vazn o beher o matla'a maqta drustan' bezaant

agan sher balehaaz e mana radent goRa aahiya kulli tarrenag e hak wa bitten bale anchush keh aa cha behra dann mabit cha vazn a dann mabit cha pegra dann mabit
ey ham hama soorat a keh shaair ishiye ijaazat bedant.

pada labzaani raddo badal hama wahada kanag ISlah kanouk e waasta zaloori ent keh chush kanag a chey sher e taha sur peda bibit, mooseeqiyat paeda bibit o sher e taam geyshter bibit nae keh sher e arwah biproushit.

baaz randa anchen perband pah Islah a deyma kayant keh aahani sara zaantkaar ham iSlah daat nakanant ishiye sawab agan' man rad maban' do (2) bayant.

yakkey  wa eshent keh perband e jind cha rah o rahbandan' dar bibit o shaair e sara laazum bibit keh aa ey perband e wat yak naaqid e bibit o aahiya kullan shar bekant.

dohmi sawab eshent keh perband e jind e taha iSlah e gunjahish maan mabit. yani agan aahiye taha yak labz e ham burz jahal kanag bit aa perband seren send bitten' pameshka chushen perbandani sara zaankaar ham hech nagoshant.

agan' mani ey gappani sara kasiyaa aetraaz hast aa allama mana sarpad bekant daan' maan ham wati iSlah a bekanan'

daan' insaan zendagent aahiye sekkag o dar barag e amala jaari ent.

Zaant e peRa cha drustan' kamter
 wati raaj e heyr loutouk
Title: Haalath e haazra parr ikk GAZAL peshe khidmath hai,,,,,
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 07, 2011, 11:04:25 PM
                thera enthezaar shaam e gamm ka kessah puraana hai
             naya   gazal   naya   khayaal   naya    zamaana      hai

              jhoote    lafzoon  ka   lebaas    gazal    ko    pehnaiye
              bass  daad  lijiye   shaer   ghoi  tho  ekk   bahana  hai
 
              kalejaa   nekhaal   karr   rakh   diyaa   kaagaz    parr
              janaab   ne   kehh    diyaa   chooriye     deewna    hai
 
              mere    thakhayull     kaa   meyaar    jaane    bagaer
              wo  ye  kehh  gaya   bass   wakth   kaa  gawaana   hai
 
                  Meer,  ke  geet   aur  parween,   ka   khayaal   lekar
               aaiye    hamm    ne   aap  ko   shaeri  sekhana    hai
 
               leejiye    aap    bi   hugae    GAZAL    goo       jabar,
                aap   ka   mezaaj   bi    aaj   kall   aashqaana    hai
 
                                                                                      shome_baaz_minnatvaran
Title: Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
Post by: Mahmood Baloch on February 08, 2011, 05:31:50 AM
sallaM , jabar jaan tai shaery shar ent ....  chonke aida ghap   AZAAD ghazale bohaga en goda allam man wati chaar habar add kana gon dewaane taha ...
 azaad ghazale basically bedath cha urdu zubaane shaery e rahbandan hor kanag botag , ahiye subab amesh en k urdu shaery kanok sak baaz ant, sak rush gendaga kait, urdu zubaane daneshwarani mutabika  harchi k  tu nebeshta kaney tara ame ehsaas bit k baaz en chizz pesara cha dohranag botaga , pameshka

O balochi zubaane  tokka manzor bismile ( aap rang ) e taha azaad ghazal goshag nabotag balken manzoor bismile domi chaap  ( saach) tewaga azaad ghazalani ent ....baley balochi zubaane baaz naam daaren o deerigen shaer gon manzoora mutafiq nayan .
                 
 
Title: Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
Post by: Mahmood Baloch on February 08, 2011, 05:53:02 AM
Jabar jaan , azaad ghazal chonha isla kanag nalotit , chiya k ich pabandi nest aishye taha haan albata wazn horen gon  ancho k wazn harch kisme shaery taha shamil en ... ancho mirza ghalib goshit " aatey hein gaib se ye mazamen kayal mein " ancho balochiya yake goshit o mubarik kazi pada har wahda ame habara kant " shairy allahi daad e ", mani goshage mol o moraad aishen k agan shairy allahi daad e goda wazn hum cha borz che gonene gon ...pameshka kujaam hum shaera wazne zaa diyag nabit  ...baki labzani gechenkaari o kafiya bandi azaad ghazal naloti k sher tankeed neshana bot bikant ...
Title: Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 08, 2011, 08:14:13 PM
salamath baathe mahmood jan,,,,
mann baz wash both shume khayaal wanth. o mani ee habar ham baaz doosth booth ke mae baaske thaha zaanthkaaren mardum hasth inth..wathi khayaala harr wahda mae guna bahr bekanaeth. mann shume baaz minnath wara braath,,,shaad gall baathe,,shume kasther...
                                                                                                     jabaraskani....
Title: Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
Post by: hafiz_aaskani1 on February 13, 2011, 03:12:19 AM
Jabar jaan , azaad ghazal chonha isla kanag nalotit , chiya k ich pabandi nest aishye taha haan albata wazn horen gon  ancho k wazn harch kisme shaery taha shamil en ... ancho mirza ghalib goshit " aatey hein gaib se ye mazamen kayal mein " ancho balochiya yake goshit o mubarik kazi pada har wahda ame habara kant " shairy allahi daad e ", mani goshage mol o moraad aishen k agan shairy allahi daad e goda wazn hum cha borz che gonene gon ...pameshka kujaam hum shaera wazne zaa diyag nabit  ...baki labzani gechenkaari o kafiya bandi azaad ghazal naloti k sher tankeed neshana bot bikant ...



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شمئے چمشانک ءِ پہمگءَ اگاں من رد نہ آں گڈا شما چہ غالبے اے شعرءَ(بے بلاھے)غلط فائدہ چست کنگ لوٹگءَ ئے، غالب گشیت :
آتے ہیں غیب سے مضامیں خیال میں
ادءَ مراد چہ مضامینءَ خیال اِنت پدءَ خیالءَ شعرءِ رنگ دیگءِ واستا شاعری ئے راہءُ رہبندانی زانگ الّمی اِنت،
خیال چہ برزءَ کئیت بلے آئی وزن چہ برزا نئیت،پمشکہ منءُ تو گندیں کہ یکیں خیالءَ ہر شاعرے دگہ رنگءُ دگہ بحرے تہا بیان کنت۔ْ
خیالءَ ہر کس وتی وڑءَ درشان کنت،خطیب وتی خیالءَ خطابتءِ تہا درشان کنت ءُ قلمکار دگہ رنگے ءُ شاعر شعرءِ تہا،لازم نہ اِنت کہ ہر وشیں خیال شعرے بہ بیت،بلے اے المی اِنت کہ ہر خیالے کہ تو آئیءَ شعرءِ پوشاکءَ گورا دئے گڈا تو چہ شاعری ئے راہءُ رہبنداں بلد بہ بئے،
اگاں نہ تئی خیال وش گشگ ءُ ساڑایگ  بیت بلے آ شعرے گشگ نہ بیت۔

اگاں دلگرانیءِ لبزے چہ زبانءَ لگشتگ ،گڈا پہلی لوٹاں۔
ءُاگاں ردی ئے بوتگ گڈا چہ زانتکاراں امیداِنت کہ آ بے بہر نہ کننت۔


شمئے کستر:
حافظ آسکانی
Title: Jabar Askani جابر آسکانی ءِ شئر و پربند۔
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 09, 2011, 10:51:45 AM
sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Nadr pa BAASK aan..!!

(http://baask.com/literature/jabar_askani/imroz-e-drachkani-bar.jpg)
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: ¨°•√♥ BaReKaHeeR ♥√•°¨ on April 09, 2011, 11:13:29 AM
باز جوان  |||o ، منتوارا تئی
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 09, 2011, 11:22:09 AM
             
  salamati.
 
                                                Tai minnath mae SARR O CHAMMAN int...BARekAHeer (ff)
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: Thangi Baloch تنگی بلوچ on April 10, 2011, 12:17:50 AM
Braat Jaaber AaskaniDrouhbaat

Baaz Jawaanen Dastounke Omeitent Hamok Wahd o Damaan Wathi
Morwareden Daankan Pah Hamy Wad o Payema Darshaan Kanet Mennatwaran

Shomy Kaster
thangi
                                                                       washnaam_baate
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 10, 2011, 08:54:29 AM

       Salamati waja thangi ....
             
                                                    shume dil baddi o tauseep aa mana sharap bakshetag ,  (ff)
                                                   mann tai washen mareshtani sakk baaz minnatwar o
                                                    rahchaaran , wati zaante chammaga maar aa harwahda
                                                  seeraab bekann......!!
 
 
                                                                                     tai beraat jabar askani.. [agree]
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: be_zubaan on April 10, 2011, 11:35:05 AM
واجا جبار آسکانی
         باز وش منی گؤرا لبز نیست کۂ تئ دستونک؛ تؤسیپءَ بکنءَ پمیشکءَ پھیلی لوٹاں چۂ ترا امیت کناں کۂ وتی دستونکاں زاھر کنہت
                                                             
 
                                                                    واھگانی لنجیں زرءَ سوچ برو تیابءَ وان
                                                                        نگاھانی تاکاں  لیٹیں دل؛ کتابءَ وان                                                        [baloch o baluchi labzank zind
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 10, 2011, 06:13:58 PM
salamati waja be_zubaan...
 
   shume minnatwara dast shume dard makant.mani hayaal o khaer enchuk nakarzit bale shume negah o zaanag sakk baaz sata
  karzit. shuma mana dil baddi daat mann wash haal botta ..chiyya ke mann nookh bahanndiya.shuma gushtagat ke mann wati
   kull dastoonk aana zahir bekna jee zaroor,bale yakk gapp e ke baaz allamy int gushag aa esh int ke mana baaz wahd nahint ,
  mann shaery bendaat kurtag ,ee mani 5 oomi dastoonk int.mana 3 maah int mann shairy kann gaah aa.bale hubb o waahag aa
20 saal int.mann wati zind aa fakat wantag,  nebeshtaank nakurtag......
 
mann nalotetag ke mann gun wata yake dunya haa fakat {LAPPAAZI } bekana.anno ke maaretag mann hamm chizze gusht kana
  guRa mann kalam zoortag..bale mana shume beraat guhaarani hoosla dil baddy lutit......minnathwara
 
                                                                                JABAR ASKANI...... (ff)
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: Thangi Baloch تنگی بلوچ on April 15, 2011, 04:59:02 PM
madadaren braat
Jaaber Aaskani

Hamok wahd o damaan washo wazhdel baat et
o pah balochi keh mae Maati Zobaan ent ey keshk
e pada souben baat et................................

thangi

 [baloch o baluchi labzank zind
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch on April 23, 2011, 12:11:52 PM
vaajaheN braat Jabir Askani, saalamat baat-et !!

shumay ey pulleN dastooNk manaa cha dil e juhlaaNikyaaN doost bit !!
har she'r sad hazaar tauseep karzeet !! shumay hayaal e raNg o pigr e burzii manaa sak doost bittant !!

mudaam shumay perbaNdaanii rahchaar

shumay kaster

Zia Baloch
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 24, 2011, 12:23:32 AM
salamti waja Zia Baloch..
 
mani dastoonk yakk hayaal o maareshte...bale shume daad o taoseep yakk ARRWAH e paa yakk bejaanen murdage waasta. mani hayaal yakk tunn e bale shume daad o taoseep yakk nook aape chammag e .. shair wati shaer aa gushit bale gooshdaarok maaresgta gushit. tai taoseep
e mann sakk baaz minnat waran..washnaam baatet..  (ff)
             
                                                                                              tai beraat  jabar askani.. [agree]
Title: Re: Sallaheen DASTOONK ,,Ndar pa BAASK aan..!!
Post by: BASHAAM BALOCH on April 24, 2011, 02:35:49 AM
BAAZ WASHAIN DASTOONK HAY
OMAITH DARAN THAO DAIMTHIRA O ANCHO WATHI DASTOONK O PIRBAND AAN DAIM DAHAY O MAA
CHIZAY HAIL KANA
BAAZ BAAZ BAAZ JOAN PULLAIN BAASK
Title: Jabar Askani جابر آسکانی ءِ شئر و پربند۔
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 27, 2011, 10:06:20 PM
     
                      SallaHEEN Dastoonk,,,,nadr pa pollen baask an..
 
 
                                                               
Title: Re: SallaHeen Dastoonk,,,,,nadr pa pollen baask an.
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on May 02, 2011, 08:59:44 AM
waja Jabar Askani,
Salam o drout,

chounahiya mani jind angata sallaen' dastoonk e wazn o louTa sarpad naent pameshka ma ey dargata shome perbanda chakkaset wa nakanan' bale yak do chizz keh mani cham gindagayan' aahani sara allama chamshank dayan'
awali gap eshent keh shome johud seta karzit keh shoma zitta wata shaairee e peRa maan tarrentag o naamhuda shoma rouch pah rouch washter nibissagaet.
kammo shomara Baluchi raahband e neymaga chaarag louTit keh angata shoma ھمزہ ءِ o  hamzah drajen yeh ئے a sarpad naet.

tao kae? = who are u?
تؤ کئے؟

tao kaa e = are u coming?
تؤ کائے؟

ketab e sara
کتاب ءِ سرا

yak ketabay
یک کتابے


pah ey chizzani sarpadi ya sayad haashmi e ketab syahag o raast nibissag baask e sara hast shome buzooret o agan download louTet aa ham hast.
http://baask.com/diwwan/index.php/page,syahag_o_raast_nibissag.html

dastoonk e dohmi she'r

tao aajooyii e pergra mani koshag louTe
tao waab gende waab e waRa proshag louTe

ishiye pegr zabr ent o seta karzit bale yak gwanden' badli louTit (mani cham nizara )

tao aajooyii e pergra manaa koshag louTe
tao waab gende o waab e waRa proshag louTe

 goun_neiken_wahagan
 wati raaj e heyr loutouk
Title: Re: SallaHeen Dastoonk,,,,,nadr pa pollen baask an.
Post by: jabarasKANI on May 02, 2011, 10:20:17 PM
salamati bibi shume sara baat ..

mann gun dil E juhlaankiya shume minnatwara, shuma wati chamm shaank mani nezooren hayaal aa daat.

mann baaz wash haal boota,ke mann wati radiya sarpad bootan . mann harr wahd aa shume sarr o sooj aani

rahh chaarana..mann shume labzaani ehtraam aa kanan o kooshish kanan ke deem tera radiyye mabitt.

agan boot guRa shume soojaani dilmaang bayaan..  ALLAH SHUMARA WASHNAAM BEKANT ,, SHUME JUHDAANI

TAOSEEP AA MANI KERRA LABZ NEEST,,DUAA KANAN KE SHUME HARR KAARE TAHA ALLAH KAAMIYAABI BEDANT.

                            MINNATWARAN,,,,JABAR ASKANI
washnaam_baate
Title: Re: SallaHeen Dastoonk,,,,,nadr pa pollen baask an.
Post by: ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch on May 05, 2011, 11:08:41 AM
vaajaheN braat Jabir Askani, salaamat baat et !
shumay juhd allam-a sitaa karzeet !! . cha Banuk e soojaaN maara ham paai'dag bitt ! ummeet vaaraaN keh hamii vaRa pulleN diwwan-a sambaheyn-et !

shumay kaster

Zia Baloch
Title: HAYAAL E NADR INT PA GUUL EN BAASK AAN,,,!!!!
Post by: jabarasKANI on October 06, 2011, 06:33:48 PM
                                                                        MINNATWARAN    (ff)

Title: Re: HAYAAL E NADR INT PA GUUL EN BAASK AAN,,,!!!!
Post by: SN_sadam on October 06, 2011, 08:26:15 PM
salamath bate Jabar Askani
baaz zabardasteen ferbande
sata karzet wah
Title: Re: HAYAAL E NADR INT PA GUUL EN BAASK AAN,,,!!!!
Post by: kamran_haider on October 06, 2011, 08:38:22 PM
JABAR ASKANI Salamat baatay,,,
                                 Bass nibeshta kan,,nibeshta kan,,,aah roch deer na ent,,ke tou jowanein shahir ey a ranga maa'n labzaanka zanag o pajja aarag bay,,,jowan ent....
Title: Re: HAYAAL E NADR INT PA GUUL EN BAASK AAN,,,!!!!
Post by: sangeen baloch on October 09, 2011, 03:16:08 PM
Baaaaaaaaz Jwaaaaaaaaaaaan ent waja tai share kutage shahr
Title: ........................CHAKKAAS BAND...................?????
Post by: jabarasKANI on November 09, 2011, 09:22:48 PM
                                      BAASK WATI HAYAAL O ZAANTA KAAR BEBANDANT
                                                                         
Title: Re: ........................CHAKKAAS BAND...................?????
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on November 11, 2011, 08:22:23 AM
Salam o drout wajah Jabaar Aaskani,

Shome ey chakkas band e mennatvaaran'
bale eda bazen gap techki louTant gendaga shomara ey chakkas band dayuka shome jind ham techk nakotag

Chakkas band dayag e chizzey raahband bayant taan' aa deyma eyr mabant hech sher e band pah chakkas bandiya dayag nabant.
Urdu e tooka chushshen bandan' miSraH e taraH goshant
yani hama band keh aahiye zameen e sara perband nebeshta kanag a dayag bitten'
taraHee Mushairah a chakkas band goshag a mani sar per nabit. chakkas band e labzi mana wa esh ent keh hama band aahiye chakkas kanag a dayag bibit.

pah taraHee bandan' yak laazumen' gappey esh ent keh aa rawaan bibit, sheriyat maujood bibit, aahiye zameen hamencho zreng bibit keh aahiye tooka sak baaz sher kashshag bebant, aahiye tooka peyshred meHdood mabant.
pa hamen haatera chushen sherani diwwan barja kanook zaantkaaren' shaairaani banda deyma yaarant. aahiye vazn a goshant aahiye tooka hasten' pesh redan' goshant.
chushen chakkas bandani yak misaal e esh ent bahed BALOCHI chakkas band vat saren mabit.
http://www.bazm.urduanjuman.com/index.php?topic=6603.0

mani dela chushen kaar hast at o mani iradah Mubarek qazi e band e zoorag at bale mani aa durah baask keh ma aahan' chizzey raahshooni kanan' hama pah rad dayag a laank bandant.
haer parva neyst.

wazhnaam baatet







Title: Jabar Askani جابر آسکانی ءِ شئر و پربند۔
Post by: jabarasKANI on November 24, 2011, 05:24:43 PM
                                                                                                   (ff) (ff)
Title: Re: ................ RAMM LACHCHA e NADR int...........!!!
Post by: Tahir lal on November 26, 2011, 12:59:44 AM
 [pullen_salaam] baaz jowan jabar aaskani
Title: Re: ................ RAMM LACHCHA e NADR int...........!!!
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on November 27, 2011, 09:04:55 AM

واجہ جابر آسکانی
شمئے رم لچہ لک ستا کرزایت۔ یک جوانیں ھیالے شما پربستگ۔
اُمیت اِنت دیمترا ھمیں رنگ ءَ نبشتہ کن ئے


گوں نیکیں واھگاں
وتی راج ءِ ھیر لوٹوک
Title: Re: ................ RAMM LACHCHA e NADR int...........!!!
Post by: Asghar Zaheer Baloch on November 27, 2011, 10:50:09 AM
 
واجہ جابر آسکانی!۔
شمئے اے ترازتگیں رم لچہ باز جوانءُ ڈولدار اِنت،وتی جہدانی راہءَ سوبین باتئے۔
آشوبی
Title: Jabar Askani e sher o Perband. جابر آسکانی
Post by: jabarasKANI on November 28, 2011, 02:10:22 PM
                                                               MINNATWARAN ...!!!
 
Title: Re: .................. DASTOOONK ...................!!!
Post by: Tahir lal on November 29, 2011, 11:38:27 PM
 [pullen_salaam] mashaAllah [baloch o baluchi labzank zind tae dastoonk baaz baaz jowan int
Title: Jabar Askani e sher o Perband.
Post by: jabarasKANI on January 17, 2012, 05:03:23 PM
                                                                           (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff)
Title: Re: Hayaaal e Nadr int .....!!
Post by: SN_sadam on January 19, 2012, 09:44:30 PM
baaz juaan int
Title: Re: Hayaaal e Nadr int .....!!
Post by: DurouShom on January 20, 2012, 10:17:06 PM
baaz juwaan braat. . . Hudae bahot bat et. . .
Title: Re: Hayaaal e Nadr int .....!!
Post by: BASHAAM BALOCH on February 17, 2012, 09:41:00 PM
BAZ WASH JABAR ASKANI
THAI KAR SATHA KARZI O THAHI E DASTOONK MANA SAKAAN DOSTH BOOTH BAAZ WASAIN DASTOONK E O AMAY PAIM NIBEESTAG K SEEDA GON DILA HUMGRINCH BEETH
MINATWARAN PULLAIN BAASK
JABAR ASKANI

SHUMAY KASTIR .............. BASHAAM BALOCH
Title: Re: Hayaaal e Nadr int .....!!
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 18, 2012, 03:48:29 PM





salamthi baat mani baask ani sara ........

                       sharapdaren baask . waja Basham baloch....waja duruoshom ...waj SN_ sadam

                       shume Gissad guaaren hayalani mann nadr an.....shume dilbaddi e hazaaar minnat...

                                   washnaam baate .....shume kaster JABAR ASKANI (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff)
Title: Jabar Askani e sher o Perband.
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 18, 2012, 04:28:13 PM
 [baloch o baluchi labzank zind [baloch o baluchi labzank zind [baloch o baluchi labzank zind [baloch o baluchi labzank zind [baloch o baluchi labzank zind [baloch o baluchi labzank zind
Title: ;;;;;;; DASTOONK ;;;;;;;;;
Post by: jabarasKANI on March 12, 2012, 05:46:04 PM
                                                                                                               (ff) (ff)
Title: Re: ;;;;;;; DASTOONK ;;;;;;;;;
Post by: Gulljan.Rind on March 28, 2012, 03:59:09 PM
baaz washen dastona ge ..minnat war an wajah
Title: Re: ;;;;;;; DASTOONK ;;;;;;;;;
Post by: Liaquat Aminلیاقت امین on April 09, 2012, 09:07:33 PM
SALAM O DROTH,,,  SAKK BAZZ WASHEEN PARBANDEY,,,ZABARDASTT ENTT,,
Title: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: jabarasKANI on December 19, 2012, 11:20:01 PM
                                                                       (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff)
Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: jabarasKANI on December 19, 2012, 11:24:48 PM
                                                                (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff)
Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on December 22, 2012, 07:31:05 AM
برات جابر آسکانی
سلام ءُ دْروت،
شمئے دئیں دستونک آھانی زمین ءُ ھیال سک ڈولدار انت  ءُ ستا کرزانت۔
امیت انت ھمیں رنگ ءَ بلوچی شاعری ءِ گاماں دیما بران کنئے۔
سوبمند باتئے
Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: jabarasKANI on February 14, 2013, 10:24:29 PM
                                                          (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff) (ff)



Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 22, 2014, 12:36:38 AM
منی لہتے چاربند ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں

چار بند
شپ دیدگاں تران ءَ نئیں
وابے گوشئے مانا نئیں
کئیت اِنت کپوتے بیگھاں
دل باتن ءَ تھنا نئیں

جابر آسکانی
 (F)

چاربند
سباھ ءِ بے وپائیں ساھگانی
نبشتگ نام پرچا واھگانی
بگر نام ءَ منی بس یک برے تؤ
مں نازیناں ترا داں زندگانی
 
جابر آسکانی

 (F)


چاربند

دل کپوتے بانزلے پُرشتہ گُشئے
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 22, 2014, 12:51:29 AM
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: jabarasKANI on April 22, 2014, 12:58:05 AM
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Title: Re: جابر آسکانی ءِ لھتے گچین پربند ۔ ندر پہ باسک ءِ وانوکاں
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on April 23, 2014, 07:53:23 AM
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