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Balochi Literature بلوچی ادب => بلوچی شئیر ءُ پـِربَـنـد Balouchi Poetry => باسکانی دیوان ءِبلوچی شائر Baask's Poets => Topic started by: بلوچ on February 12, 2006, 09:27:57 AM

Title: O mani kom e janen chukk... by Maahal Baloch
Post by: بلوچ on February 12, 2006, 09:27:57 AM
noutak baloch" <ameerism@yahoo.co.uk> wrote:

I received a Balochi poem from a Baloch
daughter who wants to remain anonymous.
She says that she was shocked while
watching a hot debate between Senator
Sanaullah Baloch and Ms Zubaida Jalal
on a Pakistani TV channel. According to
her although she was until then a fan of
Ms Jalal because of her efforts for the
education of women but she felt pain in
her heart when she saw how the daughter
of the soil was against the truth. She says
and I quote here her words that:

"I don't know how to express my
condolence to my nation who lost their
brave daughter in dreaming of fame.

She expressed her feelings in this Balochi
Poem:

c=ch, i=ee

O mani kom e janeyn chok tao cosheyn kaar makan,
pa daraamad wati braataani sar a gaar makan,

ey daraamad ke tai raaj e padaan aas dayant,
pa cosheynaan tao wati raaj e saraa gaar makan,

ey ke tai kaar o tai naam e na-mannant hejbar,
pa eshaanan' wati braat o petan' laacaar makan,

tao mani gohaar-e agaan gohaari bezaane baanok ?
tao agaan gapp a bozure wat a camdaar makan,

aas baan e sar a kaptag nou na-hellit hec chiz,
chush wati polleyn zamin a, gham e anbaar makan

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balochi culture" <balochi_culture@yahoogroups.com>
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: بلوچ on February 12, 2007, 02:45:04 PM
This is Maahal Baloch's Creation.
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Mahgul on February 13, 2007, 10:08:55 PM
very nice .... really i like it so much.
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Wadareeg وداریگ on February 14, 2007, 01:36:37 AM
 (y) Too great
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Sheh Mureed on February 14, 2007, 11:00:27 AM
She is rite its a good thing she realized she was wrong.
Thank u Rouzard 4 sahring a great poem  E:D3
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Zahida Raees Raji on February 14, 2007, 12:23:41 PM
She is rite its a good thing she realized she was wrong.
Thank u Rouzard 4 sahring a great poem  E:D3

braat who was wrong? Ms. Zubaidah Jalal or Ms. Maahal Baloch?
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Sheh Mureed on February 14, 2007, 02:18:19 PM
 According to
her although she was until then a fan of
Ms Jalal because of her efforts for the
education of women but she felt pain in
her heart when she saw how the daughter
of the soil was against the truth. She says
and I quote here her words that:

[/quote]
she realized because she was zubida's fan
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Mehhlab Baloch on February 14, 2007, 08:11:53 PM
Balochi a yakk batal ey ast inth k "deedaa deeda nadeeda goreeda"
Bibi Zobaida ey Qasoor na inth...
Banokaa anagaha rasita goraa bardashtaa donn bootha...
 
the creation (the poem) is nice wid very personal feelings....
Title: Re... O mani qaom e janeyn' chok tao chosheyn' kaar makan'
Post by: Maahal Baloch on March 17, 2007, 01:28:35 PM
dousten' baaskan'

man chah dil-e-johlaa chey shome minatvaran' keh shomaraa manii nazaantkaariye tookaa nebeshtagen' awalii Baluchi Perband doust bit.

man nazaantaga keh manii ey feelings appreciation-e- kaabil hastan' ya inna bale bada ham man Baluchi Cultur-e-tookaa deym daataga.

shome appreciation-e-baaz baaz mehrbaanii

Best Regards

Maahal Baloch
 
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Perozai R!nd on March 17, 2007, 04:17:16 PM
dousten' baaskan'

man chah dil-e-johlaa chey shome minatvaran' keh shomaraa manii nazaantkaariye tookaa nebeshtagen' awalii Baluchi Perband doust bit.

man nazaantaga keh manii ey feelings appreciation-e- kaabil hastan' ya inna bale bada ham man Baluchi Cultur-e-tookaa deym daataga.

shome appreciation-e-baaz baaz mehrbaanii

Best Regards

Maahal Baloch
 

Gohar Maahal Tayi Ee Per Band Baaz Joinent O Baaz Sata Karzit. Per Bande Taha Raastein Gapp To Bayaan Kutagant. Omeet Kana`n Keh Tao Har Wahda Wati Mehnata Jaari Kane.

Go`n NaikeiN Wahaga`n
Tayi Braat
Fahad
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Maahal Baloch on June 26, 2007, 02:11:28 PM
dousten' baaskan'

man chah dil-e-johlaa chey shome minatvaran' keh shomaraa manii nazaantkaariye tookaa nebeshtagen' awalii Baluchi Perband doust bit.

man nazaantaga keh manii ey feelings appreciation-e- kaabil hastan' ya inna bale bada ham man Baluchi Cultur-e-tookaa deym daataga.

shome appreciation-e-baaz baaz mehrbaanii

Best Regards

Maahal Baloch
 

Gohar Maahal Tayi Ee Per Band Baaz Joinent O Baaz Sata Karzit. Per Bande Taha Raastein Gapp To Bayaan Kutagant. Omeet Kana`n Keh Tao Har Wahda Wati Mehnata Jaari Kane.

Go`n NaikeiN Wahaga`n
Tayi Braat
Fahad


ordoken' braat Fahad:
Sabz o aabaad baate,

dil baaz wash but wahade keh man shome ey namdi deyst.
shome sak baaz mehrbaanii keh shoma manii ey yak nabaladen' fikr doust daasht o maraa dil baddi daat.

wash wash baate. :)

salam
Maahal Baloch
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Baluch on June 27, 2007, 06:34:35 PM
Gohaar Mahaal,

trha huda sabz o abaad bekant.... zubedaya Islamabade sarteen govaat wartaag

no ahiya makuran'e levar wash nabit....

Gohaar thai perband sakh baaz wash enth ... trha bayad enth to har wahda ancho

nevis... o raaje muskilana padar bekan... wati harch diwana bogosh o pesh daresh

kay raast enth.. mae chagerda baloch janenay mayar sakh baaz enth... bale ma

gende raaji daptaara har wahda raaj muskil gendit gorra mae looghani janen baneeri

bayan chon SHAHEED DADSHAH ie gohaare ga... go braata ham kopag bant, chon

hanif shareef, wahid kambar o ie degha sarmcharani gohaara.. wati gepa gowand

geran o trha yak rande pada shabaashi kane o omeet kanen dema ham ancho mara

bahrmand kane

Thai Braat

Jawad
Title: Re: Poem from anonymous for Zubaida Jalal.
Post by: Tehhzeeb on January 13, 2008, 11:26:27 PM
keep it up  
but ppl still blind v need more years ...........................
Title: Re: O mani kom e janen chukk... by Maahal Baloch
Post by: ~Mahrang~ on August 25, 2009, 03:31:55 AM
very nice .... i like it
 shome_baaz_minnatvaran
Title: Re: O mani kom e janen chukk... by Maahal Baloch
Post by: Maahal Baloch on September 08, 2009, 04:23:30 PM
braat jawad, gwar tehzeeb o mahrang, ma chah wati dil e johlankiyan chey shome minnavaran'
salamat baate
Title: Re: O mani kom e janen chukk... by Maahal Baloch
Post by: Hafeez Baloch on September 08, 2009, 06:25:08 PM
Very nice dear Sister

Marchi mae wasta e pahre gappe mai gwahar wati bratani goma azadiye juhda yak wada gon ant
Title: Re: O mani kom e janen chukk... by Maahal Baloch
Post by: Hameed Maoj حميد موج on September 15, 2009, 10:45:48 AM
baz eashen shaeri mahal balocha nabeshtag gohar omitent ke dem tera ham ancho wati shaerian baask e tha air kane baz wash cha dele johlankyan mennat war gohare
Title: Re: O mani kom e janen chukk... by Maahal Baloch
Post by: lucky on September 17, 2009, 02:33:48 AM
Guwaar MAAHAL tai waa amincho sataa biknaa kamme..

man tai sakkkk baaaz mazne fan aan..

tau hur wadhe chu MaadRE watan pame hawaaR ae..

WAJA HUDA taRa 100 saal ae umeR paa salamati gon ame socha AZAAT BALOCHISTAN Aa bebakshi ..AAMEEN..

Keep it uP