Unfinished Journey of Life...

[Ambitious Girl]

The acts of men sometimes come so kind
And with such love do well express, yet
The deeds of men sometimes come so mean
And with great disgust is well despised.
These conflicts unresolved for times,
Someday, somewhere resolves to meet.

Between the times of history gone,
And the evolutions of future come
The present presents a balance point
In a mixing grill of settlement, where
Deeds and events do take their toll
In resolutions of investments made.

Mishap could be just a fair reward,
As life fortune is investment gained.
Opportunity could be just a means,
As occurrences are results obtained.
The pendulum swings to and fro,
Just as the clock ticks, tock and tick.

What goes on around and again,
Does come back again and around
Good or bad, it's all our choice,
For all our thoughts and acts today,
Are investments in the big game plan
Of this unfinished journey of life.

[MIR JIHAND BALOCH]

BRILLIANT SIS KEEP IT UP

[Zahida Raees Raji]

My dear sister :Ambitious Girl:

I am sorry dear I could not write you  before just because of my busy schedule but believe me I do read your all creations in this section.  Your selective words, your deep and down to earth thoughts and your realistic vision always inspired me.

In this poem you have expressed a bitter truth of life, all verses are beautifully written  and deserve appreciation.

God bless you

Keep sharing of your poetry

with love

Yours sister

[Baloch Prince]

Very Nice Sister...Keep it up

[fairybaloch]

v.good
  keep it up

[Baloch_Girl]

My life is nothing without you! And my life changed when I met you! You promised me that you will not leave me!!But today you made me see you in my dreams ! You are the special person who walked into my life! And the love we shared nothing else could compare! So many sweet memories of you are flashing in my heart! But now all I can do is sit in the dark and cry!


**!!!~baloch

[¨°•√♥ BaReKaHeeR ♥√•°¨]

My life is nothing without you! And my life changed when I met you! You promised me that you will not leave me!!But today you made me see you in my dreams ! You are the special person who walked into my life! And the love we shared nothing else could compare! So many sweet memories of you are flashing in my heart! But now all I can do is sit in the dark and cry!


**!!!~baloch

Wow Sis You Have Some Really Sad Thoughts in Your Head !!

[Baloch_Girl]

(THIS POEM WRITTEN BY AN AFRICAN CHAILD, WAS NOMINATED AS BEST POEM 2005) 

         "COLOUR"
 colour,when i born , i black...
when i grow up ,i black...
when i go in sun,i black...
when i scared,i black...
when i sick,i black...
And when i die,i still black!
             AND
You white fellows,
when you born,you pick...
when you grow up ,you white...
when you go in sun,you red...
when you cold,you blue...
when you scared,you yellow...
when you sick,you green...
when you die,you grey...
           AND
YOU ARE CALL ME COLOURED???

(HOPE YOU LIKE MY COLLECTION)
   


**!!!~BALOCH GIRL~!!!**

[debbah]

beautiful
keep it up:)

[fairybaloch]

very very nice

[YaaGii]

NiCe one Keep it up