Author Topic: My own English poem.....hope u like it...  (Read 9698 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 586
  • Karma: 74
My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« on: October 21, 2006, 09:20:16 PM »
What remains
with us
for the rest of our lives?
Nothing thus
But the very tender and calm
Voice
Of a dearest one
Which is now still
Can not be heard anymore

What remains
With you,
for the rest of your life?
Nothing
But the soft touch
Of a hand
Which u always found
On your shoulder
Or in your hand
Whenever u needed that
But you are empty handed now

What remains
with me
for the rest of my life?
Nothing
But the moments which I spent
With my dearest ones
Which can not be back to me
They only
Made a place in
The palace of my memory
Can never be removed

Nothing remains
Just memories
Which make us live
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Perozai R!nd

  • Baloch
  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 2685
  • Karma: 75
    • Baask - The Home Of Balochi Language & Literature
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2006, 11:33:37 PM »
Wonderful Sis...


Offline Digital Walk

  • Global Moderator
  • ******
  • Posts: 195
  • Karma: 24
  • www.kechsoft.co.nr
    • Kechsoft
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2006, 01:18:30 AM »
There is a way to re-visit your butiful past...Memories.
Nice work!!!

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 586
  • Karma: 74
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2006, 02:21:31 PM »
thanks dear...
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 586
  • Karma: 74
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #4 on: October 30, 2006, 06:40:37 PM »
sometimes it happens to me
I find u close to me
You sit near my fire
and i can feel the depth of Your feelings
you say nothing to me
just look and smile
i want the moments
to be still for good

I dont stretch my hands to you
For i believe you are not there
but want my mind to work
as long as it can
creat your image
warmth of your love
never lets me to let u disapear

A thought you are
do not exist
but i can not resist
to feel you near to me
to feel u close to me...

Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Perozai R!nd

  • Baloch
  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 2685
  • Karma: 75
    • Baask - The Home Of Balochi Language & Literature
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #5 on: November 05, 2006, 09:19:15 PM »
Wonderful Sis Mehlab...Nice Poem..

A thought you are
do not exist
but i can not resist
to feel you near to me
to feel u close to me...

Good!!!


Offline Zahida Raees Raji

  • Administrator
  • *****
  • Posts: 7100
  • Karma: 356
    • Baask-Home of Baluchi Language, Literature & Culture
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #6 on: November 15, 2006, 11:37:58 AM »
What remains
with us
for the rest of our lives?
Nothing thus
But the very tender and calm
Voice
Of a dearest one
Which is now still
Can not be heard anymore

What remains
With you,
for the rest of your life?
Nothing
But the soft touch
Of a hand
Which u always found
On your shoulder
Or in your hand
Whenever u needed that
But you are empty handed now

What remains
with me
for the rest of my life?
Nothing
But the moments which I spent
With my dearest ones
Which can not be back to me
They only
Made a place in
The palace of my memory
Can never be removed

Nothing remains
Just memories
Which make us live



I don’t know sis, how I missed this beautiful creation :)

It’s simple but so touchy poem.

Please dear keep up sharing of your wonderful creations. 


Yours well wisher

Zahida Raees :Raji:
baaskadmin@gmail.com , admin@baask.com
Learn Baluchi Composing in INPAGE
Learn Balochi Poetry Background Designing
Help Line

Offline Digital Walk

  • Global Moderator
  • ******
  • Posts: 195
  • Karma: 24
  • www.kechsoft.co.nr
    • Kechsoft
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #7 on: November 15, 2006, 08:56:03 PM »
Well done.
Nice poems u have written.
keep it.
Thanks for sharing.

JQ


Offline Mehhlab Baloch

  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 586
  • Karma: 74
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #8 on: November 19, 2006, 06:06:54 PM »
Thank u ALL who have liked my POEMS...and i will try to do better...inshallah
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Sheh Mureed

  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 551
  • Karma: 12
  • you are never a looser untill you quit trying
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #9 on: November 20, 2006, 01:24:07 PM »
very nice mehlab and keep it up.i mshocked and glad our baluch girl r doing such kind of works and i realy appreciate u.

Offline mahhgonag

  • Junior Baask
  • **
  • Posts: 14
  • Karma: 1
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #10 on: November 20, 2006, 01:59:14 PM »
they are good poems but lagta hay k ideas churaye huwey hain...
SORRY!!!
LIFE IS NOT A BED OF ROSES

Offline A Noor

  • New Baask
  • *
  • Posts: 4
  • Karma: 1
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2006, 02:50:06 PM »
they are good poems but lagta hay k ideas churaye huwey hain...
SORRY!!!

aap bata sakti hein ke kahan se churaye hue hein? you seem to be an expert or may be trying to be


Offline Mehhlab Baloch

  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 586
  • Karma: 74
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #12 on: November 20, 2006, 03:36:02 PM »
well, sis mahhgonag
u may have seen some ideas like those ones
but i have told many times that i am not a poetess i only give tries...
well it is ur observation u may be correct but i have created these poems myself...
but u know dear its not bad to steal the good ideas if u wanna creat something from urside...
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline گوادری Gwaduri

  • Baask's Asset
  • ***
  • Posts: 252
  • Karma: 37
Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #13 on: November 20, 2006, 04:38:36 PM »
sometimes it happens to me
I find u close to me
You sit near my fire
and i can feel the depth of Your feelings
you say nothing to me
just look and smile
i want the moments
to be still for good

I dont stretch my hands to you
For i believe you are not there
but want my mind to work
as long as it can
creat your image
warmth of your love
never lets me to let u disapear

A thought you are
do not exist
but i can not resist
to feel you near to me
to feel u close to me...



Wow... cant say anything else....

they are good poems but lagta hay k ideas churaye huwey hain...
SORRY!!!


Well.. bibi.. ur comment needs to be substantiated with some proof....
ur observation has a fallacy of providing proof...its like saying that...

Jin siya nayanth gulabi rang-e gaa'n..and u left this comment to be proved by the readers...
tao wati kaara degarana transfer makaan...i dont blame u... its the easiet thing to do in this world....

However, u can divert ur comments in a positive direction either by providing the proof or coming up with a quality poem tht u commented on...



Maara Tappi Kotag Hama Teera
Anga tai dedage kamaan'a hain

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

  • Creative Baask
  • ***
  • Posts: 586
  • Karma: 74
A New English poem By Me.....hope u like it, too...
« Reply #14 on: November 20, 2006, 10:10:51 PM »
A day
Sit I
To collect
The pieces of the heart
It broke long ago
But
Never alone was I
The pieces I possessed
But today
I am out of a piece
Can not find the precious one
know not the place
Where I can get it back
And complete my existence… 
 
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.