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Offline mahhgonag

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Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #15 on: November 20, 2006, 10:48:00 PM »
i said the poems are nice...
but lagta hay k pehhley bhi ye baaten sunni hain
New one is a good one
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Offline Aazar Baloch

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Re: My own English poem.....hope u like it...
« Reply #16 on: November 07, 2008, 02:09:19 AM »
very nice very touchy
suno aa sakinane khak e pasty
nada kiya arahi ha aasaman se
k azadi ka aik lamha ha behter
ghulami ki hayat e jawidaan se