sometimes it happens to me
I find u close to me
You sit near my fire
and i can feel the depth of Your feelings
you say nothing to me
just look and smile
i want the moments
to be still for good
I dont stretch my hands to you
For i believe you are not there
but want my mind to work
as long as it can
creat your image
warmth of your love
never lets me to let u disapear
A thought you are
do not exist
but i can not resist
to feel you near to me
to feel u close to me...
Wow... cant say anything else....
they are good poems but lagta hay k ideas churaye huwey hain...
SORRY!!!
Well.. bibi.. ur comment needs to be substantiated with some proof....
ur observation has a fallacy of providing proof...its like saying that...
Jin siya nayanth gulabi rang-e gaa'n..and u left this comment to be proved by the readers...
tao wati kaara degarana transfer makaan...i dont blame u... its the easiet thing to do in this world....
However, u can divert ur comments in a positive direction either by providing the proof or coming up with a quality poem tht u commented on...