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Offline Dua Baluch

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After Five Years!!!!!!!!!!
« on: October 24, 2006, 10:45:58 PM »
It is time to move on
As I have a life ahead of me
I don't love you anymore
I am glad the heart can see

I am sorry for I told you
You are the person I adore, I love you forever
but you couldn't read my heart in five years
I don't think you will ever

I never lied as I still love you
But now our paths are separate.
I loved you every second of my life,
Yet in your heart there was just hate.

I can not find a day,
In which you were nice to me.
My every heart beat was in your name,
Yet you would say "there is no we"

Painful, but I let you go
Washing my heart by the tears
I will break the chain of your love
And flyaway after five years

Goodbye again and again,
Yet I pray for your happiness.
You can just ignore me like you did,
since I don't need your kindness.

NA POOCH HAQEEQAT MERE FASANE KI....US K BAAD WAQAT BADAL JAANE KI.....LOG POOCHTE HAIN MAIN KHUSH KION NAHI HOON....KIA KAHOON MERI TO ADAT THI US K SANG MUSKURANE KI!!!!

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Re: After Five Years!!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2006, 10:05:11 PM »

Nice sharing dear Dua sis, its full of inspiration.

Surprisingly thought behind this poem is same as one of my urdu poem. inshaAllah whenever I get time I'll share it here at www.baask.com

I specially liked your following verses.

It is time to move on
As I have a life ahead of me
I don't love you anymore
I am glad the heart can see

I never lied as I still love you
But now our paths are separate.


Painful, but I let you go
Washing my heart by the tears
I will break the chain of your love

Goodbye again and again,
Yet I pray for your happiness.
You can just ignore me like you did,
since I don't need your kindness.


Please keep it up  E:D3

I am looking forward for your more stuff.

Regards

ZR

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Re: After Five Years!!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #2 on: October 30, 2006, 04:05:51 PM »
Good work.
Keep writing

Offline Aazar Baloch

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Re: After Five Years!!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #3 on: November 07, 2008, 02:21:46 AM »
nice dua keep on sharing
suno aa sakinane khak e pasty
nada kiya arahi ha aasaman se
k azadi ka aik lamha ha behter
ghulami ki hayat e jawidaan se