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Offline Mehhlab Baloch

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***All My Dreams...Told I To The Walls***
« on: December 29, 2006, 10:47:04 PM »
When changing moments
scared me
and tears irritated me
a day
all my dreams
told i to the walls
of my room
and now...
sleep I
with peace
and the walls shed tears....

Note: The thought s not mine but i did translation because i liked the verse...
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Sheh Mureed

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Re: ***All My Dreams...Told I To The Walls***
« Reply #1 on: December 30, 2006, 04:15:16 PM »
VERY GOOD SAHRING.

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

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Re: ***All My Dreams...Told I To The Walls***
« Reply #2 on: December 30, 2006, 04:22:31 PM »
Thank U Dear Brother Shehh Mureed
Actually the verse was by some "Yaasir" (available at net) in Urdu and i was asked by a teacher to translate it into english i did the translatnon long ago and thought to share it to the Baasks...
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

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Re: ***All My Dreams...Told I To The Walls***
« Reply #3 on: December 30, 2006, 04:42:23 PM »
these are extremly nice verse.

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

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Re: ***All My Dreams...Told I To The Walls***
« Reply #4 on: January 15, 2007, 10:17:42 PM »
Thank u Yesbarbie :)
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

Offline Aazar Baloch

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Re: ***All My Dreams...Told I To The Walls***
« Reply #5 on: November 07, 2008, 01:58:53 AM »
very nice sharing
suno aa sakinane khak e pasty
nada kiya arahi ha aasaman se
k azadi ka aik lamha ha behter
ghulami ki hayat e jawidaan se