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Women Of My Nation
« on: August 22, 2007, 02:31:30 PM »
Women Of My Nation
Lion-Of-Desert

With thick and joint Eyebrows
Having Goshan on her head
Hidding her face because of Shy
That is Woman of my Nation

They stand behind their Men
Support them in every Struggle of Life
They Sacrifice alot
That is Woman of my Nation

They know their Boundries
They are obedient of their Elders
They know How to be Respected
That is Woman of my Nation

Simplicity and Shy are their Jewelery
They are very Innocent
They look very nice in their Traditional Dress
That is Woman of my Nation

They are Beautiful like Hani & Shireen
They are Brave like Durbibi
They are Bold like ShakarGanj
That is Woman of my Nation

They dont speak Alot
Because they know alot
They are Protectors of their Culture,Nation & Generations
That is Woman of my Nation

Salute to my Sisters
Salute to their Charactors and Baluchiat
They are mothers of Dr Khalid & Colonel Doda
They are Sisters of Dadshah
They are Baluchi Women
God Bless Women of my Nation


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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2007, 10:03:52 PM »

My dearest brother Lion of Desert,

I am so glad to read your simple but so beautiful feelings about women of our nation.  8)
sketch of a standard Baloch woman's personality is amezing:-)

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #2 on: August 22, 2007, 10:52:47 PM »
Beautiful poem. Please send it to balochi_cultre.
Ameeri
ھُدا مُرزی ناکو عبدالصمد امیری نوں گوں ما ھمراہ نہ اِنت ۔ اللہ پاک جاہ ءَ وش بہ کنات ۔

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2007, 11:22:25 AM »
YOU ARE GENIOUS MAN LION YOU ARE GREAT KEEP IT UP MAN.

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2007, 07:13:32 PM »
Welldone Lion of Desert.
Really an excellent creation.
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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2007, 07:45:50 PM »
 o|||  u have done a great job full of efforts !!
but if u add the finishing touches , it would be awesome !! avoid spelling mistakes like "character" , by mistaken u have misspelled it , and i think "baloch women" must have been used instead of balochi women , in a nutshell it was fabulous   E:D3
Blind are your eyes , your heart unfeeling . Your mind devoid of understanding , for lust , anger and burning desires, you are drowning without water .

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #6 on: August 26, 2007, 12:50:07 AM »
o|||  u have done a great job full of efforts !!
but if u add the finishing touches , it would be awesome !! avoid spelling mistakes like "character" , by mistaken u have misspelled it , and i think "baloch women" must have been used instead of balochi women , in a nutshell it was fabulous   E:D3
i agree with u lion plz think abt it.

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #7 on: August 27, 2007, 06:49:33 PM »
excellent lion you showed a perfect image of a perfect baloch women  |||o :clap: (y)


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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #8 on: August 28, 2007, 08:10:46 PM »
 :$ :$ :$ amazing peom  :$ :$ :$

allah bless ur hands (F)



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but what goes on around me...deserves not being spoken about


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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #9 on: August 30, 2007, 04:14:03 AM »
 Mehrbaani va Mehr!....I read your poem and I love it!  I thank you for your enner enjonuity and feeling. I agree with you that our maas and gohars are growns of our heads. They are alike sun that gives energy to us. Keep up with the good work!   sabz baate Balochistan...Hamid

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #10 on: September 14, 2007, 01:51:31 AM »
NICE    !


         
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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #11 on: September 14, 2007, 03:11:59 AM »
Baaz Jowaan biraat lovely poem  o|||
You can chain me, you can torture me, you can even destroy this body, but you will never imprison my mind.

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #12 on: September 15, 2007, 12:14:52 AM »
well done sangat, baz juan .

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Re: Women Of My Nation
« Reply #13 on: October 23, 2007, 05:20:43 PM »
Women of my nation is sign of respect..............
symbol of glory...............
nature of love................

motivator for hardship...................
make impossible to possible ..................
critical and postive thinker .................
friends with a friend............
hospitable for enemy...................
diligent by birth................
i cant describe them...................................
they r  mother of Balach
they r sisiter of hammal
they r respect of bibakar
i proude to say all these ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
my word power is limited
my knowlege is nothing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i dont have guts to praise,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i m helpless to desribe ,,,,,,,,,,,,,
they are the facilitator  of first school of thought ..................
they are the greatest ...............
i love my NaTioN WoMeN

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Re: Women of my nation is sign of respect..............
« Reply #14 on: October 23, 2007, 08:45:36 PM »
Women of my nation is sign of respect..............
symbol of glory...............
nature of love................

motivator for hardship...................
make impossible to possible ..................
critical and postive thinker .................
friends with a friend............
hospitable for enemy...................
diligent by birth................
i cant describe them...................................
they r  mother of Balach
they r sisiter of hammal
they r respect of bibakar
i proude to say all these ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
my word power is limited
my knowlege is nothing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i dont have guts to praise,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i m helpless to desribe ,,,,,,,,,,,,,
they are the facilitator  of first school of thought ..................
they are the greatest ...............
i love my NaTioN WoMeN
Well said my dear brother  (y):clap:
I proud brave MEN of my nation because they know how to respect women :)
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