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poem
« on: December 17, 2007, 09:23:56 PM »
salam alaikom wa rahmatullahi wa barakatuh

the following poem is the first that my fingures sailed
* may be when i was 13 *
it is meant for  (ff)my father  (ff)

hope u'll like it


a morning with ur face is blessed

a night without ur face is lessed

not a word from ur mouth is missed

ur cheeks never left unkissed

 

a sun that brightens my day

ur happiness is all  i pray

 

a heart of crystal u have

though u r soo brave

 

u r light of my sight

ur the path of my flight

 

the flower of my day  (F)

any one else wipes my tears away ?

 

u spread smiles over my face

who else shall fight my case

 

 

my eyelids facing the ground ... see nathine but u

my eyelids facing the sky ... see nathine but u

yet my love is best undescribed to u

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nazgol (ff)



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Offline Meeren-Bluch

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Re: poem
« Reply #1 on: December 20, 2007, 01:06:11 AM »
Very Good
God bless you and your Brave father

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Re: poem
« Reply #2 on: December 21, 2007, 01:07:36 AM »
thnx brother meeren-bluch



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Re: poem
« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2007, 10:48:46 AM »
Welldone Nazgol.  (F) (F) (F)
    Very nice poem keep it up
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Re: poem
« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2007, 07:01:50 PM »
thnx once and again :)



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Re: poem
« Reply #5 on: January 17, 2008, 05:27:55 PM »
MASHALLAH MASHALLAH.
Very Nice Nazgol..


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Re: poem
« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2008, 04:48:41 AM »
thnx  :)


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my silence does not mean that im not aware of what goes on around me
but what goes on around me...deserves not being spoken about