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Offline BiRousK

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Your Departure ............I MOURN
« on: April 24, 2008, 10:17:16 PM »
YOUR DEPARTURE...I MOURN.



IT was not like your great and gracious ways!
Do you Never, my Love, repent
Of how, that July afternoon,
You went,
With sudden, unintelligible phrase,
And frighten'd eye,
Upon your journey of so many days
Without a single kiss, or a good-bye?
I knew, indeed, that you were parting soon;
And so we sate, within the low sun's rays,
You whispering to me, for your voice was weak,
Your harrowing praise.
Well, it was well
To hear you such things speak,
And I could tell
What made your eyes a growing gloom of love,
As a warm South-wind sombres a March grove.
And it was like your great and gracious ways
To turn your talk on daily things, my Dear,
Lifting the luminous, pathetic lash
To let the laughter flash,
Whilst I drew near,
Because you spoke so low that I could scarcely hear.
But all at once to leave me at the last,
More at the wonder than the loss aghast,
With huddled, unintelligible phrase,
And frighten'd eye,
And go your journey of all days
With not one kiss, or a good-bye,
And the only loveless look the look with which you pass'd:
ITwas all unlike your great and gracious ways.
Blind are your eyes , your heart unfeeling . Your mind devoid of understanding , for lust , anger and burning desires, you are drowning without water .

Offline Mehhlab Baloch

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Re: Your Departure ............I MOURN
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2008, 10:16:09 PM »
Dear Brother,
It is a nice stuff unlike ur another poem "Dont Think I Ever Loved U".... which couldnt draw me away as the "Departure" did...
keep writing and offcourse share it as u r doing that...

May u succeed....
Hey nezoreen baskani nokteren beday bara!!!
Gulzmeen soth e kuth azmank pa tu perbast.

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Re: Your Departure ............I MOURN
« Reply #2 on: August 18, 2008, 07:30:17 PM »
Your Excellency !! these poems are not written by me , i am simply sharing them
Blind are your eyes , your heart unfeeling . Your mind devoid of understanding , for lust , anger and burning desires, you are drowning without water .

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Re: Your Departure ............I MOURN
« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2008, 10:02:24 PM »
Tauqeer,,
I bet she couldnt get a single word out of those poems but, Mehhlab, do confirm the things and comment ok  E|
 Tauqeer u have not written the poems then y u shared the poems????? and u didnt mention the name of the poet............... but let me tell u that u have got a beautifull choice though i couldnt get a single word out of them like mehhlab did.......... :hehe:
             

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Re: Your Departure ............I MOURN
« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2008, 10:30:00 PM »
@Sassi

Well , that is not necessary to share your own stuff only i guess.As for that purpose we have a separate thread created by our admins.Thus we can share something which we find good and worth commendable.I must not be startled wondering that you didn't get a single word yet passing comments like beautiful , thanks indeed.
Blind are your eyes , your heart unfeeling . Your mind devoid of understanding , for lust , anger and burning desires, you are drowning without water .