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Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« on: August 28, 2008, 03:49:31 PM »
poll recheet wahde tao bost kane baamsaara (F)

man aatare geraan bassaan poleen tai dedara (ff)

hama wahda toneegee dile hosham  prosheet (yh)
goo aaski deedagaan tao kame bechare mara ^o)

he dil mudam zareet pa tai sohreen bashanaga  :$
man neshtagaan angat pa tai kaol o   qararra :x:x

dil mani trakkeet hazar randa hama   sahtta :''(
goon washnayatkaan agaan begendaan tara bazara :E

jeedhaa   dila man jost kana  bare   bare  :?
tao neshtage  habib adha  pa kai wadara :?
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« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2008, 10:14:35 AM »
»•¤©§|§©¤•»Amaiye Nama«•¤©§|§©¤•«


•.¸¸.•Nou Taee Mehrani Man Talabgaar    Nabaa. •.¸¸.•
•.¸¸.•Daa Zindagaan Gumani Badd o Baar Nabaa   •.¸¸.•

•.¸¸.•Waahag       Mortagaa       Ishqe Lezatani   •.¸¸.•
•.¸¸.•Nou Taee Jotaeya Man   Gumwaar    Nabaa  •.¸¸.•

•.¸¸.•Diljame Balkeen Taee Yataan Man    Kapaa   •.¸¸.•
•.¸¸.•Sadeqaa Taee Ishqa Cham Khumar    Nabaa  •.¸¸.•

•.¸¸.•Goun Tao Nou Dostiye Kissa   Nabet     Mani •.¸¸.•
•.¸¸.•Baawer Bekan Dila Keh Taee Rahchaar Nabaa •.¸¸.•

•.¸¸.•Aah Keh Dilani Dost    o    Humsafar Habib     •.¸¸.•
•.¸¸.•Na Drohant Dege  Baagani Bahaar Nabaa        •.¸¸.•

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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2008, 01:02:09 PM »
Baaz jwan brat.

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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #3 on: October 13, 2008, 01:23:32 PM »
 :x  dil e seken mardoma rong rahan bart,,, gaar o gumsaar kant,, wahdi chari k paade chere zameen gar ent,,,goda aa wahda na mardom jahani bet na aakhirty,,,,,anga door nashotage habib watar kan..................

      
     
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lacha
« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2008, 04:29:49 PM »
dile tawaar.... :?
dile tawaara kadi goshdare tao?
noun nahet goun,goun manaa
intezare shap
noun bas ent mani chamaan aagai
chont shap o chont roch
zinde zawal bareen?
kotag tai intezara man
o chincho ars cha deedagaan reetkag
o chont wahd gowazentag
tahnaeya man
bale. na nenda
man tai wadara noun
noun sabr o hoparage
karna jatag
noun bel manaa goun zende
shakaleen rochaan
keh zinde chont roch gowazeentag
goun tai kochaleen yaataan man
   habib almiraan ...goun_neiken_wahagan
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Re: lacha
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2008, 06:07:43 PM »

wah baz washen ..... keh zinde chont roch gowazeentag
                              goun tai kochaleen yaataan man



miraani agan naite goda sochee yaate makan kalami dapay dae :)():(
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Re: lacha
« Reply #6 on: November 07, 2008, 12:41:51 AM »
namhuda tao na tai shayri  (ff)
Man Balochian Agan Man Bolotan Estaal Karan..

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Re: lacha
« Reply #7 on: November 07, 2008, 12:41:48 PM »
banok .hudae dostiaya chosh magoash mani dil na sagget..........
tai menat waaaar...........almiraan E|
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Re: lacha
« Reply #8 on: November 07, 2008, 12:43:15 PM »
brat azad baaz baaz menat waaar. (F) (F) (F) E|
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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2009, 03:06:47 PM »
                   Dastoonk
Rahe   mosafer  diljam  pa   manzele  rasag
Rahshoni aasan  bit moshkel  rahe  darbarag

Zindmane tun wahd e aasar  keh bit  daema
Kaet shahoore alam bit bani adam   begama

Darbegeej techkeen rahe gowank bejan manzila
Rongrahe mosafer jost  bekan   waty  tao  dila

Tankad nende wadare karar dereen  proshtagaan
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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #10 on: July 26, 2009, 04:27:55 PM »
Wajah Almiraan:
Salam o drout,

shome perband deyst del wash but keh shoma sak deera rand ey diwwan a atkage.

yak habar e goun shoma kanag louTan bale ishiye hech paem dela mayaare.

ey lachchah wa gwashag but kant bale dastoonk hech paem gwashag nabi.

lachchah e waasta ham laazument keh aahiye tooka yak subject e bibi o hama subject aahiye title bi.

"dastoonk" shairee e hama sinf a gwashant keh aahiye tooka ey panch chizz allama maan bebant:

radeef
qaafiya
matla'
maqta'
wazan


ghazal / dastoonk e tooka durah sher yakk beher e tooka bayant o yak wazane e tooka goshag bant.
chush but nakant keh yak misrah e kasaan bibi o dohmii misrah mazan bibi.


qaaafiya : ham tawaar en labzan' goshant.

anchush banuk Baanul Dashtiyaarii e ghazalen'

"mani haale makan josta mani dost
Ghamaan baazenan' del proshta mani doust"

ishye tooka aahiya qaafiya zortagan' "josta, drushta, prushta, bargashta and so on..."

radeef : ey dastoonk ke hamok sher e dohmii misrah e aakhir e lawz goshag bi o kullen dastoonk a ey yak bi. banul e gwashtagen' dastoonk e tooka "mani doust" radeef en'

matla'a = dastoonk e awalii sher a goshant o ishiye har doen misrah e tooka radeef maan bi.

maqta'a = dastoon ke aahiree sher en' o ishiye tooks shaair geyshter wati gulnaama hoor kant keh aa dastoonk e sara aahiye naam e tappa belaggi.

Diwwan e tooka zaantkaar o nouk bahend e sak baaz dastoonk hastan' shoma aahan bechaare allama sarpad bae keh dastoonk chiyaa gwashant o chey paem lekkag bant.

goun neiken wahagan'

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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #11 on: July 26, 2009, 11:09:09 PM »
salam o dro brat Almiran cha dele johlankiya mennat war ke tara balochi hob o wahag hast omit kanan ke gohare soj tara game dem tera bebart  hech chiz be mehnata hasel nabeet kamo mehnat a rand tara har chiz raseet balochi belek balochi mae manzel ent omitend ke dem tera ham wati shayerian deem bede baaska  sbz bate

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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #12 on: July 27, 2009, 12:13:50 PM »
 salam-o-drout banokee gohar baaz man tai menata gera keh tao mani rahshooni kot .bekaksh man perband ya nazm  eshtapia jaldi nebeshta kota ami waja a radi betag.man cha tao paheli lotaan. bazeen labz man cha eshtapia naleketagaan. man cha koleen baaskan paheli loota . o bawar kanag lootaan keh deem tera choshee radi goman nabi.

waja  abdul hameed  (F)tai hum dilbadi e menatwaar.daem shad o gal bebate
shome kaster ..........almiraan E|
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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #13 on: July 27, 2009, 09:25:00 PM »
ay mani  farzent ke sharren chiza sharr bgoshan

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Re: Habib Al Miraan e balochi sher o perband
« Reply #14 on: July 28, 2009, 12:36:44 PM »
door maro keh mani tao sah o dele. (ff)
bare tao  zahre  bare shat o  gale

gume   koorchata  made  daor  mana
patao kaoligaan maru mana chakas bale :''(

zindagaan  aosta  tai mehr o wafa ae
man tai shaer o gazal tao mani zemale :(:)

deloon taheer nageept rawe door chedaa
tao mani zinde humsafar! geheen mahale :'[

man  habib  sheda o tai  ishqe  ganookaa (yh)
shaer goshaan patao!tao mani bage bulbule

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