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Re: "27 march " naeem wafa e lachcha
« Reply #15 on: March 28, 2009, 05:49:38 PM »
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Re: "27 march " naeem wafa e lachcha
« Reply #16 on: March 28, 2009, 08:42:10 PM »
waja manzil:Tai juhd washen ent,bale agan tahna seyahen patti a bandag mabeet o bass.


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Re: "27 march " naeem wafa e lachcha
« Reply #17 on: March 30, 2009, 09:21:36 PM »
  wajaen-braat Drout!


Baaaz jwaan!...  (F)
Zendag baatet Waaja!   :)

 
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Re: "27 march " naeem wafa e lachcha
« Reply #18 on: March 31, 2009, 02:26:24 AM »
henjeer  o noor jamal shome dilbadiyani 1000 menat ..
           
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Re: "27 march " naeem wafa e lachcha
« Reply #19 on: March 31, 2009, 12:28:02 PM »
bazz jowwan lak sata karzzi......................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #20 on: July 10, 2009, 08:18:25 PM »
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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #21 on: July 11, 2009, 03:05:11 PM »
baz washen jwanen lachchaen

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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #22 on: July 11, 2009, 05:53:15 PM »
Brat Naeem Wafaa:
Salam o drout,

shome ey lachcha mana han' sak doust but o allama sita karzit.
omaiten deymtera ham shome degaa Balochi perband maraa pah wanag a dast kapit.

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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #23 on: July 11, 2009, 07:03:07 PM »
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tae laabz mana baaz dost bita baly eshea poshta to  BRP a bairak  a jagha Balochistana bairak bokotena daga tae labzane khulasa zaahr bitaga shar en wadea...

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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #24 on: July 11, 2009, 08:47:23 PM »
baaz wash Naeem wafa menat war waja manzil salamat batay (ff)
You can chain me, you can torture me, you can even destroy this body, but you will never imprison my mind.

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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #25 on: July 14, 2009, 02:55:36 PM »
waaaaaaaaaaah NaEm JAN TAI goN BALOCHISTAN AE BaiRAK aa GoN wAfAIyAara sAlAAMae ..

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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #26 on: July 18, 2009, 01:56:08 PM »
mani nizr aa
Shaairi Hama int kay
cha dil dar baeth
o
waanok o goshdaarok ay dil boputreet
Tai eh Lacha
tai Dil aa chay dratkag ay raaji saoth int
o  bezaan kay eh may dil aa pa jowani aa rastag permanent jaaga ay kutag
sak baaz toseep braat Naeem......

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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #27 on: July 18, 2009, 10:35:53 PM »
i dont cosider this poem a good one .............first ......... ae lachah cha wazana kaptag ae wastha nasri nazm e , nasri nazm ham nest goda aeshie matlab ent ae nazm e na ent parcha k wazanan na en.......domi labz baz trampl ant keal muzahimathient aeshi e matlab ae na ent k lacha shar en  mani dila shiar shairi zarorathan pora kanaga na ent o nasri nazm nazmi na ent bakwas e. ae mani dila gapan k Azad Balochistan e Berak e sara nebeshta ant

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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #28 on: July 20, 2009, 04:07:11 AM »
drostan cha pesh salam goshan
 o pada ae lahchah e shaira dad dayan cheya wajahe lahchah mana wash both chonya man shaire repkan malomdar nayan ,,,baly nazana cheya ae lahchah mani dila potert baly man waja qazi qazi gappe sara heran o hubka bota ,,,yake wa ash keh waja qazi qazi english o balochia mix gap kant bayad wa ash at keh balochi a gappe bokoteen cheya waja balochia sakk baladeen .. imran sakib o banok raji e dad naeem wafa ya bass ant cheya keh imran saqib o banok raji jawaneen shair ant .... waja qazi qazi chonya balochi e taha tani wahde shargedaar nest agan tao ae peda byaae sakk kamab bai o balochi e taha geshye ham beet tao wati juhdan ae reda barjah bedaar mae duha tai hamrahan mara ancheen mardomani baz zarorat ent ,,,tai tankeed balkeen wati jagah rast both kant keh ae nazm wazana naheen ......baly mana tai hame gappa sakk dil pa dard kot ke tao goshtag bakwas ant ..mani kayala bakwas e maksada tao anga sarpad naee barhal ae bakwase labz shareen gappe naee ..o tao pada goshtag at keh he lahchaye drosteen labz trampal ant  aaya he labz trapaleen labz ant ......
  berik . julgaheen zameen ,,,mezraneen naqshah ...shahaganeen zirr ...
           koh o mach . zahm ispar . asp ...raj daptar ...sarmachaar , shaheed .. baloch .. aajoi .. mani kayala naeem lahchahe mastereen sepat ant ae labz baly tao goshe trampal ant ....o bakwas ant pameshka bakwas ant keh balochi e zagreen labz,ant ,man chionya shomeen wadeen zantkarani wasareen tankedani sara sakk heran o bazhneeg an keh shoma taiga trampal o bakwas e labz nazane keh kojam jagaya bejaneen ..... bajahe keh keh shoma mae nokbahandeen shairani dilbaddi bekane  baly shoma pa gorr o gap anchoo gapp kany keh mardom dilpadard ham beet o afsos ham kant waja qazi qazi zariri nahee keh harkas atta shad e wadeen shaire bekant ya moneer o bismil e o meer e harkas wati kacha o wati zant o fikr e mutabika ...man ae soginda waran agan ae lahchah mubarik qazi e boteen tao baz sadataga  ya tao ae
chonya mani kayala tao sakkeen mayoseen mardome bai cheya keh tai sajeen post man wnata tao kasara namanetag o kasaa beh nakotha pada tao harcheza bakwase loz a istemal kany o peshdare tai zehna har chez be rang o be manaheen mayoseye mastereen nishani hamesh ant ...sangat cho mayos mabo ..pada yak gappe goshag lotan qazi qazi pa tara balkeen tao shamoshtage ..lahte ancheen chez bant gendag naba baly marag o ihsas kanag bant shaire andari mareshtani darangazi ent agn tao cho lank man jataga goda deemtra bojunz agan tao shagedare beby mani kayala balochi e taha ach shair nabacheet pa wasereen bakwas loz e nebishta kanaga bass naheen tao bayad sarjameen nebishtank e ya ketaab e benwees ..
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Re: Naeem wafa e lachah ,,BERRIK,,
« Reply #29 on: July 20, 2009, 09:53:49 AM »
i dont cosider this poem a good one .............first ......... ae lachah cha wazana kaptag ae wastha nasri nazm e , nasri nazm ham nest goda aeshie matlab ent ae nazm e na ent parcha k wazanan na en.......domi labz baz trampl ant keal muzahimathient aeshi e matlab ae na ent k lacha shar en  mani dila shiar shairi zarorathan pora kanaga na ent o nasri nazm nazmi na ent bakwas e. ae mani dila gapan k Azad Balochistan e Berak e sara nebeshta ant


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hama kasa keh shaairee e tooka vazan a goun garz hasta aahan ishiye fevor kotaga ey degeran’ mukalifat.

Kohaanen Shaairee e washtaamie sawab hamen buttag keh aa sherii usoolan goun hamgranch buttagan’ bale ey dohray tooka nacree nazm e sinf deyma aktag.

Baaz kas nazaant keh paband nazm (lachcha) e ham gwashage e chizzey usool bayant o aa hech paem khaarij az wazan bayag nalouTant.

Bale yak neymaga sehel pasandu mardom o dohmii neymaga jiddat pasund e mardom shaairee e bunyaadi usoolan namanant.

Hama shaair keh ghazal e shaair gwashag bant aa nacree nazm a hech waR kobool nakanant bale hamok dor e tooka jiddat e gunjahish hast.

Ey jiddat a hamok kas namannit bale wahad e gwazag e goona aa nouken sinf pah wata yak jitaaen’ jagahiye dar geyjit.

Anchush keh Mullah Abdullah Pishini a 1928 a Sayad Hashmi a 1950s a Ghazal e sinf Balochi e tooka deyma yaart o marouchi ey darii sukhan Balochi e tooka anchush ham granchent keh bey Ghazal/dastoonk Balochi shaairee mukammal gwashag nabit.

Braat Naeem Wafa yak Balochi e aamaankaarent pameshkaa aahiye nature e tooka nacre bayaan allama hasten’ o ey rang aahiye shaairee e tooka bayag nouken gappe naent.

Maraa wati zehn pach kanag louTit keh anchush Ghazal/dastoonk e Balochi e tooka aayag e wahad a Balochi e kohanen’ shaairaan’ ey qubool nakotag bale jiddat pasund a wati johudaa chey Ghazal a yak muqaam e daat hama waRaa. Nacre nazm (aazaad lachchah) ham pah wata rouche na ruoche yak raahe gishshenii.


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