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Imraan Saaqib e Baluchi sher o perband
« on: March 29, 2009, 03:24:38 PM »


زِردءِ    جہان   دائم ءَ   تاوان ءِ   قیدی  ایں
مارشت ءِ   مسافر   وتی   زندان ءِ  قیدی ایں

درچکے کہ  وتی ساھگ ءَ بندیگ نہ کنت ایں
انسان   گُڑا   پر چیءَ   انسان ءِ   قیدی  ایں

زِردءِ  مسیتءَ  مہرءِ  حُدا  چاپ جاں گوں من
چونیں  شُمئے  حُدائے  کہ  ایمان ءِ  قیدی ایں

استال  ءُ  ماہ ءُ  پُل ءُ  بہاراں گوں تران کنت
ہر کس  کہ  وتی   یوکی ءِ دیوان ءِ قیدی ایں

ارواہءِ   مزن  شان ایں   نمیرانیءِ   نہ  زانت
ثاقب   ھما   بدن   کہ   زندمان ءِ  قیدی  ایں


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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2009, 04:16:02 PM »
درچکے کہ  وتی ساھگ ءَ بندیگ نہ کنت ایں
انسان   گُڑا   پر چیءَ   انسان ءِ   قیدی  ایں
  brat gonageen imran saqib tai hayal baz wash ent pesara geshter tai urdu shaire wantaga .... baly man tai balochi shaire wantan baz wash boton omeet kana ki demtera ham mara gon wati balochi shairea mutaser kany .....baly nazana bareen adda zahida raji kadi balochi shaire kant  ma wadeeregeen keh add zahidae balochi shaire begindeen ,,,,
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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2009, 11:39:15 AM »
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زِردءِ  مسیتءَ  مہرءِ  حُدا  چاپ جاں گوں من
چونیں  شُمئے  حُدائے  کہ  ایمان ءِ  قیدی ایں



.... baz jowan brath""""


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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2009, 04:05:43 PM »
baaz jowanen johudent waja Imraan Saaqib.

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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2009, 09:49:30 PM »
izzat manden
manzil
shoaib
rozard

shomay baaz baaz minnat waaro'n kay shoma mani waday nazantkary ay sheraani toseep  kutag.
shomay sar soj o dilbadiani mudaami wahagdaaro'n.
minnat waar

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« Reply #5 on: April 01, 2009, 10:24:36 PM »

تروینی

بارے چُنت کرنءَ چے بنی آدم
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Re: Trivini by Imraan Saaqib
« Reply #6 on: April 06, 2009, 12:24:21 PM »
baaz mehrbani braat Imran Saaqib chushen washen' تروینی darshan kanag e.
ma shome dega perbandani ham wadaarigen' omaiten maraa dilproush nakane.

goun neiken wahgan'

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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #7 on: April 06, 2009, 04:40:02 PM »
درچکے کہ  وتی ساھگ ءَ بندیگ نہ کنت ایں
انسان   گُڑا   پر چیءَ   انسان ءِ   قیدی  ایں
  brat gonageen imran saqib tai hayal baz wash ent pesara geshter tai urdu shaire wantaga .... baly man tai balochi shaire wantan baz wash boton omeet kana ki demtera ham mara gon wati balochi shairea mutaser kany .....baly nazana bareen adda zahida raji kadi balochi shaire kant  ma wadeeregeen keh add zahidae balochi shaire begindeen ,,,,

Mani wajaen braat, tao mana gwaank daat pameshkaa Braat Imran Saaqib e sarhaal a passav dayag a atkoun omaiten aa dila nayaarit.

braat tao mana Balochi shaahiree e babata sekeen daat ey pah wati gohaar a shome mehrent bale tara yaqeen bawar kant mani wati dil baaz loutit chizzey Balochi e tooka ham nibisset kot bekanan' bale angata mani Baluchi sak nizourent o wati hayalaan balochi e tooka darshan kanag angata mani hopey naent. ingo qalam larzit o aango labz tursant pah qalam e sara chey bunaa aayag a.

bale inshaAllah johud kanan' keh shome waahish a poora kot bekanant.

 shome_baaz_minnatvaran

shome neiken wahaganii daahima chamdaar
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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #8 on: April 06, 2009, 11:19:33 PM »
salamat baty adda zahida
            ancho kh shoma gushtag at ki shome kalam o labz larzant mana ancho guman beet ki agan tao balochi shaire nemaga kamo juhd bekane tao sharr nebishtag koth kany ancho kh man gindagaon kh shome balochi sap o wash ent baly man he gushag lotan ki ha nad pa shareen nekeen kareya chist beet ya ha juhd pa raj o kome o zubane nekeen rahea chist beet ha kadi be samar nabeet tao juhd bekan tao kamayaab bai inshallah mai sekeen o dilbadi harwahda shome hamrah ant ... ...
                        shome kastir ,manzil
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Re: Trivini by Imraan Saaqib
« Reply #9 on: April 08, 2009, 06:56:09 PM »
baaz minnat waar adda

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Re: Trivini by Imraan Saaqib
« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2009, 09:21:13 AM »
vaajaheN braat Imran Saqib , salaam o vaahag,
shume تروینی manaa sak baaz dost bot ! maashaa Allah shuma Balochi tahaa ham baaz jvaan nibishta kaney ! . Allah shumaa raa pa muraad a sar bekant Aaameen

Balochi Labzank zindag baat !

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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #11 on: April 16, 2009, 04:17:16 PM »

vaajaheN braat Imran Saqib, salaam o vaahag,

man sak baazm gal o shaataN keh shuma marochaaN vati shaai'rii e asp e mahaar Balochi e neemag a tarrentag ! man ummeet kanaaN keh shuma zoot Balochi e naamdaareN shaai'raaN shumaar bey ! inshaa Allah :)
shumey ee dastooNk ham manaa sak baaz dost bit ! Mubaarakbaad o daad !!!
vahdii man shume miSraani  "taqtee' (segmentation) kut , mana lahti miSra' "out of meter" ma'loom butt ant ! ummet ent k ishaanii "highlight" kanag a shuma dil-graan na bey ! parcha keh man zaanaaN shuma yak "Haqeeqii" shaai'ri hastey . hamaa miSra' k "out of meter" ant , aayaaN man suhreeN raNg a "highlight" kanaaN , shuma ee miSra'aaN yak chamshaakii dege bedey ! :)

زِردءِ    جہان   دائم ءَ   تاوان ءِ   قیدی  ایں
مارشت ءِ   مسافر   وتی   زندان ءِ  قیدی ایں


درچکے کہ  وتی ساھگ ءَ بندیگ نہ کنت ایں
انسان   گُڑا   پر چیءَ   انسان ءِ   قیدی  ایں

زِردءِ  مسیتءَ  مہرءِ  حُدا  چاپ جاں گوں من
چونیں  شُمئے  حُدائے  کہ  ایمان ءِ  قیدی ایں

استال  ءُ  ماہ ءُ  پُل ءُ  بہاراں گوں تران کنت
ہر کس  کہ  وتی   یوکی ءِ دیوان ءِ قیدی ایں

ارواہءِ   مزن  شان ایں   نمیرانیءِ   نہ  زانت
ثاقب   ھما   بدن   کہ   زندمان ءِ  قیدی  ایں



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braat Imran jaan , man allamaaN k shumaa dil-graan na bey ! eshii maqSad vatii zaant a geesh kanag a abed digeh hich na ent ! :)

shumey kastir ,

Zia Baloch

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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #12 on: April 17, 2009, 02:35:52 AM »
braat zia

agan mana waanay goshdaaray o dil gwashiit k bezaanay bemaaray ta yak gappaya mudaami tayaar boo kay mani jind zind o zaat cha meter aa zebahr int...........
im a meterless person n i love to be....coz its my nature,,,,,,,,...
guda choshen mardumay ay perbande ay taha tara meter chon raseet,,,,,,,,,haa'n???.
lala mani
arz esh int k mani nebishtank o gushtank aani true reception ay waasta hama wahda tara wati dimaagh ay electricity off kanag kapiit, baaqi kaara'n tai dil wath kanth, mana yaqin int k tai shikayat door beeth :)

o eh dilgraani chi int.........bill yaar!!! :)():(
dilgraan wa mazn o graan naamay ay adeeb baa'n
balay hayaal bekan kay mizaaj ay sak gareeb baa'n

may dil waa laale darya ay harday ushk tharray, bya daur kan o dill e seriya uzhnag kan.........(kidding) bigsmile

bale lala go'n dil e sitk aa
tai mehr o daad o dilbaddi o haas kan soj ay baaz minnat..
salamat
tai kastar
i.saqib

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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #13 on: April 17, 2009, 10:31:09 AM »
braat zia

agan mana waanay goshdaaray o dil gwashiit k bezaanay bemaaray ta yak gappaya mudaami tayaar boo kay mani jind zind o zaat cha meter aa zebahr int...........
im a meterless person n i love to be....coz its my nature,,,,,,,,...
guda choshen mardumay ay perbande ay taha tara meter chon raseet,,,,,,,,,haa'n???.
lala mani
arz esh int k mani nebishtank o gushtank aani true reception ay waasta hama wahda tara wati dimaagh ay electricity off kanag kapiit, baaqi kaara'n tai dil wath kanth, mana yaqin int k tai shikayat door beeth :)

o eh dilgraani chi int.........bill yaar!!! :)():(
dilgraan wa mazn o graan naamay ay adeeb baa'n
balay hayaal bekan kay mizaaj ay sak gareeb baa'n

may dil waa laale darya ay harday ushk tharray, bya daur kan o dill e seriya uzhnag kan.........(kidding) bigsmile

bale lala go'n dil e sitk aa
tai mehr o daad o dilbaddi o haas kan soj ay baaz minnat..
salamat
tai kastar
i.saqib

manii braat Imran jaan ,

shume passav mana baaz dost bit, shumey jazbag o shumey daryaa-dilii sataa karz ant !
manii laala , ee gappa shuma ham sharri saraa sarpad et k shaai'rii e lahtii rahband ant ! har fann o har i'lm e rahband hast ant ! hamii pema shaai'rii a ham lahtii rahband hast k eshaanii saraa English shaai'raaN begir daaN Balochi Shaai'raaN , drahaa ishii saraa kaarband buttag ant !
Shakespeare begir daaN Sayad Zahoor Haashmii a drahaa eshii saraa karband buttag ant !
mani braat, shaa'irii tooka hamincho k jazbag o hayaalani ahmiyyat hast ent , hamii pema "meter(the basic rhythmic structure)" ham sak allami ent ! agaaN maa meter a hisaab ma-kaneeN , goRa "nacr" prose(The ordinary language of men in speaking or writing; language not cast in poetical measure or rhythm; -- contradistinguished from verse, or metrical composition.) o "Nazm" Poem(a metrical composition; a composition in verse written in certain measures, whether in blank verse or in rhyme, and characterized by imagination and poetic diction; -- contradistinguished from prose.) e tooka che farq bit ? agaaN maa sirf jazbagaaN shaai'rii tasleem bekaneN goRaa dunyaa e draa'eN nibishtah kanook shaai'r ant ! parchaa k draai'enaani nibissagaani tahaa allami a jazbag hast ! . bale ee pem na ent ! dunyaa e tamaameN zubaanaani mastireen o mannitageeN zaantaakaaraaN ishaanii taqseem hamii peem kutag !
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Balochi labzaank zindag baat !

shumey kastir

Zia Baloch

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Re: زِردءِ جہان دائم ءَ
« Reply #14 on: April 17, 2009, 12:25:07 PM »
zia jan
very humbly n respectfully
i disagree wid ur perception about poetry
to me
poetry is pure n innocent song of soul not just a human but
the soul of entire universe, which is the source of bondage n interconnection of whole.
i understand ur point
but i intentionally refuse it
as i said its my nature im a genuine outlaw n rule breaker,
bcoz i feel sometime it detach me of my own inner core, for me da soul song is enough.
yaar laaale!! shomay waden zaantkaar, may waden jazbag walahana shaair magoshet na maara kuja zaana farq e kappeet maa wa pesra go k maa wa dil e darya ay jaani :)
umet int k tao mani jaaheli ay qadra kane o mani sarpad kanagay nakaame koshist aa yala kanay. bigsmile
tai minnat