Author Topic: Raji e awalii Balochi dastoonk (kujaa gaarent mani manzil marouchii) (Read 27723 times)

Zahida Raees Raji · « **on:** April 07, 2009, 10:14:00 AM »

shaairee chounahiya goun mana wat sara kanag hejbar nabi bale nazaanan' doushii chey paem mani Baaskani Diwwan e braatanii seken o dilbadiyaa wati kaar kurt o man chizzey sher bandag e himmat kort.
nazanan ey chap o raasten' band sher gwashag e qaabil ent agan naaN bale omaiten mana sar o souj kanag a mani radiyaanii kashag a ey diwwan e zaantkaar hech paem pushta nakenzant.

man minnavaran' wati waajen braatani( Manzil, Noor Jamal, Qasum Faraz o Imran Saaqib) keh eshaani dil badi a Balochi dastoonk e medaan a ma wati awalii gaam deyma burtag nou bey shome sar o souj a man deyma rapt kot nakanan'

shome neiken sar o soujaani o wahaganii daahima chamdaar

shome gohaar
Zahida

Dastoonk (version 2):

kujaa gaarent mani manzel marouchii
bede Halaan' mabu mahtal marouchii

mana har-neymaga gaptag azabaan'
mani hambrah mabu, hambal marouchii

azaab e tranag-a hoppaarag-e kurt
jagar buttag pada, tal tal marouchii

ma nouken kissah ey, byaaran kujaa chey
hama paem ent, ghamaan chey, del marouchii

ey chamman haur gvaarag, yal nadatag
daan' arsaan' shal nakut, kanjal marouchii

khata buttag manaa chey, bas hamincho
kutag dushmen, wati hambal marouchii

mayam chamman' nakut, maara kayaa jat
mayaareeg tao nabahe, kaatel marouchii

kanan' jostey Baloch e wajahaan' man
mani shaahr-ant chiyaa, jangal marouchii ?

tao daatag chey mani qauma pah waanag?
magosh raaja mani, jaahel marouchii

azaab e saaheg a rust o mazan but
mani raaj a kutag, ey jal marouchi

sar-e-saudaa kutag, ey sar-macharaan'
buro dushmen, eshaan noo, jal marouchii

del e, ey pattaraa, gwaata bede nou
bekaan' tush tush ghamaan', gachchal marouchii

tara :Raaji: kasey sarpad chito bi?
del e gappan' tai kuchchal marouchii

Zahida Raees Raji

manzil · « **Reply #1 on:** April 07, 2009, 10:54:26 AM »

mani banokeen guhaar adda zahida 100 Aapareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen
man tai he dastonk e Amenchoo sata a bekan angan kam ent tai shier man shier man want mana baz washi bot man ancho gala che baal botan tai juhleen hayal o labzani kamhag man tara marchi mazaneen shirehe naam dayan,,,,tao dastonk e mazaneen shirah ey anchoo ki tao pesara gushtag at tai balochi sap o salah na int baly mani guhaar tai balochi anchoo sap o palgaar tao wati AEY shaira taha zagreen balochi kaar marz kortha tai balochi shier sakk baz wash o wazandaar ant ...tai AEY shier hamuk lazb ph wati kaleb e taha pa Ancheen wadeya trashag o geg o gawr heer kanag botag ant ......hame tai shaierey mastreen sepat both kant Ae tai Awli gaam int mana anchoo bawar int kj tao deemtera washtireen sheir nebishta kany mazaneen shaeirani srapa naam darkary
o man tara marchi ham yak mazane shairah e naam a dayag lotaan
man anu jaldi jaldi he chandeen habar kortan agan moh raset pada chezy gushang lotaan ........tai wati kastereen bratok ,,,manzil

ناہید بلوچ Naheed Baloch · « **Reply #2 on:** April 07, 2009, 11:36:03 AM »

Guhaar Zahida mana tai Dastoonk baz wash bot:)
wati zuban ye aber deger yeN .....
very nice

keep it up

mgm · « **Reply #3 on:** April 07, 2009, 04:14:02 PM »

gohaar zahida;
shomay baaz washen o jwanen pagro hayaal anth.
ey dastoonk sataa karzeth.

Henjeer · « **Reply #4 on:** April 07, 2009, 05:22:38 PM »

Quote from: :Zahida Raees Raji: on April 07, 2009, 10:14:00 AM

del e, ey pattaraa, gwaata bede nou
bekaan' tush tush ghamaan', gachchal marouchii

tara :Raaji: kasey sarpad chito bi?
del e gappan' tai kuchchal marouchii

Zahida Raees Raji

Baanoken Gohaar Zahida Raees
Drout o DrwahBaatet...

Man Tai shair want , baaz jowaanen Shaire o Sataa karzit, bale man Tai Golnaam dist Heyraan boot o Bah mant oun parcha ke ey Golnaame Poshta Baluch Raaje yak naamdaar o kamaashen waajahy Shaaeri kanaga ent ke maan Mazanhour o Sarjamen Baluchistana pa "RAAJI" Naama zaanag bit , hamy haatera man goun shoma dazbandi kanaan ke shoma choshen Toohen mardomaani naame poshta Shaaeri makanet o pa wati waasta degy yak sharren o dorren golnaamy gechyn kanet Shome baaz mennatwaar baan , parcha ke waaja "Raaji", baluch raaje yak mazanen Naamy o shomara aaee naame zoorag zyb nadant ... Mehrabaani o Mennatwaar

Baluch Raaj o Baluch dyh Sabz o Aajou bebaat... (Hanchosh Baat)

Henjeer

Zahida Raees Raji · « **Reply #5 on:** April 07, 2009, 06:19:29 PM »

Quote from: Henjeer on April 07, 2009, 05:22:38 PM

Quote from: :Zahida Raees Raji: on April 07, 2009, 10:14:00 AM

del e, ey pattaraa, gwaata bede nou
bekaan' tush tush ghamaan', gachchal marouchii

tara :Raaji: kasey sarpad chito bi?
del e gappan' tai kuchchal marouchii

Zahida Raees Raji

Baanoken Gohaar Zahida Raees
Drout o DrwahBaatet...

Man Tai shair want , baaz jowaanen Shaire o Sataa karzit, bale man Tai Golnaam dist Heyraan boot o Bah mant oun parcha ke ey Golnaame Poshta Baluch Raaje yak naamdaar o kamaashen waajahy Shaaeri kanaga ent ke maan Mazanhour o Sarjamen Baluchistana pa "RAAJI" Naama zaanag bit , hamy haatera man goun shoma dazbandi kanaan ke shoma choshen Toohen mardomaani naame poshta Shaaeri makanet o pa wati waasta degy yak sharren o dorren golnaamy gechyn kanet Shome baaz mennatwaar baan , parcha ke waaja "Raaji", baluch raaje yak mazanen Naamy o shomara aaee naame zoorag zyb nadant ... Mehrabaani o Mennatwaar

Baluch Raaj o Baluch dyh Sabz o Aajou bebaat... (Hanchosh Baat)

Henjeer

Wajaen braat Henjeer:

Salam o drouth,

braat shome namdi e minnavaraoun'

shoma mani takhalluS( Golnaam ) e sara objection kotag.

braat agan shomara bawar kanet man wajah Raaji Baloch e babata kesaas saaley bi hamen diwwan a chey sarpad buttagoun' chah ishiya peysar man nazaantag keh Balochi e tooka ham ey naam hasten' (man Balochi zantkaar nayan pameshkaa ey mani radient keh man ishiye sara research nakotag)

mani ey naam pah mana Urdu Shaairee e haatirah mani pet a 1989 a daata butta o ey darey zoban e labze a chey zourta buttagi keh aahiye matlab "Optimistic" ent.
chizzey indians an recently ishiye saraa agree kotag.

mani kullen Urdu shaairee e tooka Raaji, Zahida Raeesi e pajjar ent. mana Zahida a chey geyshter maaluk Raji e namaa chey tawaar janant.

nou kissah eshent keh man wa hejbar Waja Raaji e hamsari kot nakanan' bale hao
nou mana balochi a haaitraa yak degaa naam e shohaaz kanag kapit o kas mani sara ey objection makant keh Raji parcha do naam eyr kanagaen'.

tao wati ey gohaar e saraa pah dil daahima diljam bibu keh ishiya nah hejbar degere kaar wati jind e naama kotag o nae keh kasey naam. ma wa hama chizza ham wati nagoshan keh dege kasey pah droug aahiya wati jind e bekant.

bale mani pajjar mani jind ent o

hamen bi.

Shome neiken wahagani daahima chamdaar

Zahida

P.S. ey degeranii namdiyaanii passav man dega wahad e dayan. dila mayare.

Henjeer · « **Reply #6 on:** April 07, 2009, 11:55:33 PM »

Meni Haatoonen Gohaar
Drout o Drwahbaatet...

Tai Por Mehren Passoe Gon Mazanen doorchaari o Zaantkaariya Mennata Geraan! pa Golnaame Bezaante baabata Loutaan ke tara chosh Sarpad bekanaan ke ( RAAJ ) mean ( Nation ) , "Raaji" e bezaant "Raajdousti" ent, Hamaa mardom ke aa Raaji mardomy o Raaje mehr o dousti ee dele Toukaayant o Raaji waahagani sara jadd o Johd kant. Ey labz hech wahda Hendi yaan ke Sanskrit Labzy Boote nakant ey Balouchi chekketag o Paalaatag o Majgen Labzy.
Chosh ham Tara Pouh kanag loutaan ke waaja "Raaji" wat Shome Golnaame baabata chosh ke man Bezaanan hech chiz Saig nah ent O Waaja Raaji Marchigen Mardomy nahy O Agan To waaja Raaji Baabata chizzy sarpad nahe Man Tara mayaarig Nakanan parcha ke Waaja Raaji wat cha Hamaa kasaan ent ke Taan marchigen Roucha Haazer nah ent ke wata Mahtaak o Routaak o Media e Touka zaaher bekant o ey chizza man wat ham nazaanan ke waajaha parcha cha Mediaya wata door daashtag bale Man chont randaan waajahe Golgedaar wantag ant ke aa Golgedaarani Touka waajaha Gwashtag: " ke man Naame Shohaaza Nah oun o Mana Wati naam Mazan kanagig nahent, pa Hamy haatera Man Eshtaap nakotag ( Parcha ke Kochak Zoote kant Kotti Kour kaarit,,, Hoshter dyr kant Herre Por Zour kaarit ) O harch wahdy ke Baluch Raaj, Baluchiyat o Baluchi Tachken syaahage raast nobisage Rahbanda sarpad bebit Goda aa wahda pakkaayia man Meydaan dor kanaan. " O waajahe Gwashag ent: "ke Yak rouchy Allama mani Kortagen kaar Baluch Raaje dyma Kaayant."
Mani waahag o Moul o Moraad hameshat ke Bass Loutet oun Shomaara sarpad bekanaan ke cha shoma o saari ey Golnaame sara waaja Raaji Baluch Shaaeri Kanaga bootag o Angat ham kanaga ent o Inshallah agan mena mouh berasit esh wajahen Dorren Gaalaan Yakky dar gyjaan o Baaske diwaana janaan o agan Mani gap shoma dela Aaortag ant Goda cha shoma Pahelli loutaan o Omyt ent ke Modaam Hanchosh wati Nyken baluchi waahagani saraa Souben baatet...

Baluch Raaj o Baluch Dyh Sabz o Aajou bebaaat... (Hanchosh baat)

Henjeer

manzil · « **Reply #7 on:** April 08, 2009, 01:13:47 AM »

chonya wa bayad Ash int kh naam e sara o naamani zoraga kass kassi sara objection majant cheya ki naam wa naam e harkasa hama naam dost beet o ha naam che mutasir beet pa wata zoreet ya pa wati choke a o kasea pir ish kant agan ma bechaar guda chosheen naam baz int ya hama ya pad naam (takalus) yak bant baly Ada zaida raees raji ya pilan raji ya bogoshan zamin murad ,sadiq murad, mubarik qazi ,saeed qazi digah bazeen qazi asta ant baly ha mubrik qazi int o he saeed qazi ,gul mohd wafa ,sadiq wafa , wahid wafa fazal wafa o digah bazeen ast ant non mani gushag e matlab Amesh at ki naamani sara bayad mardom kas e kaseara he habara makant ki pelani mani naam zurtag ..............omeet int kh shoma mani habara dila nayar it wati juhdan pa balochi o baloch o balochistan e wasta deema baret ...
shome kastir manzil

SN baloch · « **Reply #8 on:** April 08, 2009, 01:47:18 AM »

Nice Controversy................. Names are not so important we should focus on the work that she did................................................... Nice Keep it up Sis Rajje

sabir · « **Reply #9 on:** April 08, 2009, 02:03:05 AM »

mashalla man want tai dastonk mani banoke gowar baaz wash laget eshie nibisag e war gon harzane labzan mana sak baaz dost buta o ey muche kaar sata karzit omeed kaneen k dema am shome dastonk pa wanaga mellit
Shome berat
Sabir

Wadareeg وداریگ · « **Reply #10 on:** April 08, 2009, 02:50:32 AM »

Baaz jowan .. keep writting in Baluchi

Rind Baba · « **Reply #11 on:** April 08, 2009, 05:02:44 AM »

Baaz Juwaan Manii adda manii dordanagen gohaar Zahida Tae Avalii Balochi dastoonk mana hon baaz doust bot Baz wash .. o dege Raast Goosht biraat manzila pa namaani zoragaa ma baheden kase sara objection majane harka wate pajjaar watteN

Mahgul · « **Reply #12 on:** April 08, 2009, 01:26:35 PM »

Maney banuken gohar taie dastoonk baaz baaz wash a..o man hamey umeed kana shoma watii juhuda jarii kaney o demtera hum balochi dastoonk sara kar kaney...

just keep it up

Zahida Raees Raji · « **Reply #13 on:** April 08, 2009, 02:25:38 PM »

Quote from: Henjeer on April 07, 2009, 11:55:33 PM

Meni Haatoonen Gohaar
Drout o Drwahbaatet...

Tai Por Mehren Passoe Gon Mazanen doorchaari o Zaantkaariya Mennata Geraan! pa Golnaame Bezaante baabata Loutaan ke tara chosh Sarpad bekanaan ke ( RAAJ ) mean ( Nation ) , "Raaji" e bezaant "Raajdousti" ent, Hamaa mardom ke aa Raaji mardomy o Raaje mehr o dousti ee dele Toukaayant o Raaji waahagani sara jadd o Johd kant. Ey labz hech wahda Hendi yaan ke Sanskrit Labzy Boote nakant ey Balouchi chekketag o Paalaatag o Majgen Labzy.
Chosh ham Tara Pouh kanag loutaan ke waaja "Raaji" wat Shome Golnaame baabata chosh ke man Bezaanan hech chiz Saig nah ent O Waaja Raaji Marchigen Mardomy nahy O Agan To waaja Raaji Baabata chizzy sarpad nahe Man Tara mayaarig Nakanan parcha ke Waaja Raaji wat cha Hamaa kasaan ent ke Taan marchigen Roucha Haazer nah ent ke wata Mahtaak o Routaak o Media e Touka zaaher bekant o ey chizza man wat ham nazaanan ke waajaha parcha cha Mediaya wata door daashtag bale Man chont randaan waajahe Golgedaar wantag ant ke aa Golgedaarani Touka waajaha Gwashtag: " ke man Naame Shohaaza Nah oun o Mana Wati naam Mazan kanagig nahent, pa Hamy haatera Man Eshtaap nakotag ( Parcha ke Kochak Zoote kant Kotti Kour kaarit,,, Hoshter dyr kant Herre Por Zour kaarit ) O harch wahdy ke Baluch Raaj, Baluchiyat o Baluchi Tachken syaahage raast nobisage Rahbanda sarpad bebit Goda aa wahda pakkaayia man Meydaan dor kanaan. " O waajahe Gwashag ent: "ke Yak rouchy Allama mani Kortagen kaar Baluch Raaje dyma Kaayant."
Mani waahag o Moul o Moraad hameshat ke Bass Loutet oun Shomaara sarpad bekanaan ke cha shoma o saari ey Golnaame sara waaja Raaji Baluch Shaaeri Kanaga bootag o Angat ham kanaga ent o Inshallah agan mena mouh berasit esh wajahen Dorren Gaalaan Yakky dar gyjaan o Baaske diwaana janaan o agan Mani gap shoma dela Aaortag ant Goda cha shoma Pahelli loutaan o Omyt ent ke Modaam Hanchosh wati Nyken baluchi waahagani saraa Souben baatet...

Baluch Raaj o Baluch Dyh Sabz o Aajou bebaaat... (Hanchosh baat)

Henjeer

Salam o drouth Manee wajaen braat:

shome passav e minnavaran'

braat mani gapp hesh nayat keh mana Raaj o Raaji e matlab noo maloom naent. noo wa haatman ma ham chah wati Diwwan e zaantkaaran chey baazen Balochi labz dar burtagan' man wati nazaantkaarii Balochi adab e babat gwashtaga keh angata man Balochi adab e babata haaka chey pur nazanan'.

haatman ey Naam/labz Balochi ham hasten o Balochan dari zoban a chey nazortag bale mani naam e bindat Hindi zoban e labz Raji a chey buttag.

shoma google e sara search bekan shomara "Raji" geyshter indian cast o mardomanii naam gendag kaet pameshkaa man chah awalii rouch a chey beger daank rouch marchi suddi mardomani ey jost e juwaab a dayagayan keh mani gulnaam e matlab chey ent.

http://bazm.urduanjuman.com/index.php?topic=3354.msg20441#msg20441
http://bazm.urduanjuman.com/index.php?topic=3354.msg20524#msg20524

ma star wajah Raaji Baloch e babata hech mazaanan' bale shome haal dayag a rand aahiye raaj doust bayag, aahiye mazanen naam e bayag e tooka mana hech shak neyst, maa aahiye deyma yak tiflen' keh bey masterenaanii sar o souj a yak gaam e deyma burt kot nakanen'.

chah shomara dazbandient keh shoma Waja Raaji Baloch e sher o perband o ey degaa nebeshtaankaa Diwwan e sara byaaret bate manee paemaa baazen nazaantkaar chah aahiye johud a chey pah wata raah e dar geytk kot bekanant.

Eyukaa Wajah Raaji enna balken ma aa durah Balochanii babata zaanag louTen keh aahan pah ey Raaja mazanen kaar kotag bale media e deyma chey cheyrant.

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mana shome awalii namdi e tooka kotagen gapp haatman dela atkag o aahiye sawab shome eyr janag e andaazat.

braat, deyme mardom a sarpad kanag o deym e mardom a eyr e janag e tooka labzaanii burz jahalii kaarmarz biten' o ey gappa chah mana chey sharter shoma sarpade

Quote from: Henjeer on April 07, 2009, 05:22:38 PM

Baanoken Gohaar Zahida Raees
Drout o DrwahBaatet...

...
parcha ke waaja "Raaji", baluch raaje yak mazanen Naamy o shomara aaee naame zoorag zyb nadant ... Mehrabaani o Mennatwaar

Henjeer[/center]

ingo shoma mana ey labzaanii tooka shegaan jatag o aango mani kerma point minus a daur daatag

(pahel kane ma ey babata droug bast kot nakanan')

Bale heyrent shoma wati jagayaa sharr ate. nou mana chah shomara chey hech gilaa nesyt.
bale hao ey wahag hallama hasten keh agan mani ey awalii dastoonke tooka radi e maanent ishiye sara mana allama sar o souj bekane daank dege barey ey radii mani sheranii tooka maan mabant.

shome neiken wahaganii daahima chamdaar

Zahida

BiRousK · « **Reply #14 on:** April 08, 2009, 02:46:31 PM »

Tho baaz wash o zebdaar e dastoonk e nibashta kotag , bale man tara che chezze sikkag lotaan e babaata ke tho wathi dastoonk e taha chezz e laoz karmarz kotha ,O man balke tangaae sarpad naya ke e laoz balochi e taha karmarz banth ya enna .Ancho ke tho liketta Qatil ,jangal ,O pada tho likketh a jigar ,E Jagar likagg be .Pada yak jaah e ya tho sar e 'sauda' karmarz kotha .Choo ke tho yak Urdu e shaair e hame waastha thai gooma raddi bothaa ya man sarpad naya ke e laoz hum balochi e labzaank o dastoonk e taha durshad banth.

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