mani wajaen braat:Hafiz:
Salamat baatet,
brat zaantkaar wati gappan wat kayant janant mana tai dastoonk e sara hamen maaret keh tao qaafiya bandi e johud kotag nata tai man peysaregen' ham perband wantagan' o man zaanan' keh toa sharren shaahiree a chey sarpad e.
ey dastoonk e sheraani taha improvement e gunjahish sak baazen'
edaa bechar:
mehrani bagh e dar bigaij
Dil dagh dagh e dar bigaij
braat baaG o daaG e dargeyjag a wat ma wat rabt wa neyst. padaa dohmii band angata wata gishshenag ham louTit.
bay dual zird e droshumint
Pur darden ragay dar bigaij
braat agan' "raag" edaa saaz o zeymul e terminology ent goRa zerd e droushaman' goun ishiye chey rabt hast?
(3) zangaa majan syahen shapay
Par wat chiragh e dar bigaij
Ey sher washshent
(4)bay zanagaani majlisint
Dauldaren pag e dar bigaij
braat "zaanagani majlelsa" yaa zaantkaarani majlesa mardom sharren pegr dargeyjage johd kant "Dauldaaren' paagey " e wahag mani cham nizara naadan kanant lolz
(5) dunya taharent ai atta
Mehr e chiragh e darbigaij
ey sher chounahiya rad wa naent bale kul hindustani shaahiraani "saamne kee baat hai kuch is meN kashish naheN hai"
agan mani gappey del a atk pahel bekan.
shome ey dastoonk e sara revise version e wadaareegan'

banuken guhaar raji
drah o salamat bate
shume chamshank dest o dil baaz wash boot ke ai majlis hushka wah wah e majlis e nae balke eshee taha islaah kanoak hum hasten,
(1)mehrani bagh e dar bigaij
dil dagh dagh e darbigaij
mun pa wati naqisen aqla ai matlab kashitag ke agan mehrani bagha pattag loate guda dagh daaghen dil e dar bigaij,
noo eshi taha mun chincho kamyabaan eshiy e faisalaha shuma o aidega waanok jwantir kanant parcha ke har kasi galatiya doomi jwantir nishan kut kant
(2)bay daul zird e droashument
purdarden raag e dar bigaij
eda hum mun wati mannan hame gushag lotitag ke bakaul e urdu waalayaniya (samaan badal jana )misdaqa gon purdarden raage yaa saut e chist kanit balken zirdaa taaheer biraseet
(3)bay zanagani majlisint
dauldaren paage darbigaij
nazantkarani deewanaa rawe gudaa aa taee zahiree soorata chaarant ,
(4)zangaa majan syahen shap e
par wat chirag e darbigaij
alhamdulillah ke ai bachchet
(5)dunya tahaarent ai atta
mehr e chiraagh e dar bigaij
boot kant ke shumaa raast gushagaet ke eshi taha kashish nest ,
bale mani matlub hame boota ke dnya e janjaalani tahariya agan hatam bikant guda aa mehre chiraghentnt
shume baaz baaz minnat waaran
allah e mayaar o baahota bate
hafiz aaskani zamurani