Hafiz Aaskani e sher o perband

[Thangi Baloch تنگی بلوچ]

mangahin braat hafiz drout tara baat.

beh chaar agaan mardom neshan kan ant o shyr goush eit
godda bezaan shyre jour kanaga eshtaap kort kant o pada
pegr wati chaagerde maareshta wail kan ant.gissar ham beet.
waahage sharrin dare.kushest guna dimrawiya hor ent.
maa drua pah sekag o wanaga atkag ent.

                                                      wazhdel baat et
for example:
kay ent dozhman tai goure loup
chah braata goun sittan baaj loute
pada hama man o pada hama tau
nah waahage jounz eit nah bur taache
 

[hafiz_aaskani1]

mani wajaen braat:Hafiz:
Salamat baatet,

brat zaantkaar wati gappan wat kayant janant mana tai dastoonk e sara hamen maaret keh tao qaafiya bandi e johud kotag nata tai man peysaregen' ham perband wantagan' o man zaanan' keh toa sharren shaahiree a chey sarpad e.

ey dastoonk e sheraani taha improvement e gunjahish sak baazen'

edaa bechar:

mehrani bagh e dar bigaij
Dil dagh dagh e dar bigaij

braat baaG o daaG e dargeyjag a wat ma wat rabt wa neyst. padaa dohmii band angata wata gishshenag ham louTit.


bay dual zird e droshumint
Pur darden ragay dar bigaij

braat agan' "raag" edaa saaz o zeymul e terminology ent goRa zerd e droushaman' goun ishiye chey rabt hast?


(3) zangaa majan syahen shapay
     Par wat chiragh e dar bigaij

Ey sher washshent


(4)bay zanagaani majlisint
    Dauldaren pag e dar bigaij

braat "zaanagani majlelsa" yaa zaantkaarani majlesa mardom sharren pegr dargeyjage johd kant "Dauldaaren' paagey " e wahag mani cham nizara naadan kanant lolz


(5) dunya taharent ai atta
     Mehr e chiragh e darbigaij

ey sher chounahiya rad wa naent bale kul hindustani shaahiraani "saamne kee baat hai kuch is meN kashish naheN hai"

agan mani gappey del a atk pahel bekan.

shome ey dastoonk e sara revise version e wadaareegan'

 

banuken guhaar raji
drah o salamat bate
shume chamshank dest o dil baaz wash boot ke ai majlis hushka wah wah e majlis e nae balke eshee taha islaah kanoak hum hasten,
(1)mehrani bagh e dar bigaij
   dil dagh dagh e darbigaij
mun pa wati naqisen aqla ai matlab kashitag ke agan mehrani bagha pattag loate guda dagh daaghen dil e dar bigaij,
noo eshi taha mun chincho kamyabaan eshiy e faisalaha shuma o aidega waanok jwantir kanant parcha ke har kasi galatiya doomi jwantir nishan kut kant
(2)bay daul zird e droashument
    purdarden raag e dar bigaij
eda hum mun wati mannan hame gushag lotitag ke bakaul e urdu waalayaniya (samaan badal jana  )misdaqa gon purdarden raage yaa saut e chist kanit balken zirdaa taaheer biraseet
(3)bay zanagani majlisint
    dauldaren paage darbigaij
 banuken guhaar mani hayaala shuma ishtaap chaaree kutag parcha ke mun nagushtag ke zaantkaarani majlisaa rawe sharren paage dagaij mun na zaantkaarani habaraayan ke oda taee alfaaz o habaraan kas na chareet balken taee zahiree deela chaarant
(4)zangaa majan syahen shap e
    par wat chirag e darbigaij
alhamdulillah ke ai bachchet
(5)dunya tahaarent ai atta
   mehr e chiraagh e dar bigaij
boot kant ke shumaa raast gushagaet ke eshi taha kashish nest ,
bale mani matlub hame boota ke dnya e janjaalani tahariya agan hatam bikant guda aa mehre chiraghentnt
agaan padaa hum mun galataan guda shume saraa farzint ke may ghalatiyani nishandahiya bikanit.

shume baaz baaz minnat waaran
allah e mayaar o baahota bate


hafiz aaskani zamurani

[hafiz_aaskani1]

بسم اللہ الّرحمن الّرحیم

Salam pa drahen baaskan.
Chonaiya ai ghazal e se sher mun pesaraa hum post kutagat ble aa wahda ai tawaamen ghazal e na at,guhaar raji o dega lahte baaskaan mana hame siken dat ke ishiya tawaam bikanan, mun hum koshist e kut.o pa turs o larz post kutag parcha ke marchaan may bask cha waah waaha bezarant o haqeeqat e nemagaa gaam jananaant.
Allah ish pa manzila sar kanaat
Nu ghazal shume demaaent,
shume dil baddiyo soj o pantaani rahchaar
hafiz atta ur rehman aaskani


(1)اے زبان گنگ باتیں کہ  گشیت ترا وفا نیست
             مناں گپ گپءَ چو روکاں تراپرچہ ہچ سمانیست؟

(2)اے دلانی سیاھیں داغاں پہ زبان مان پوش اَنت
             اے ریاءُروءِشہراِنت اداسِتکءَہچ ستانیست

(3)منی نامءَ دروگیں جرمے منی مہرباناں بنداِت
      ادا  بے گناہی  جرمے ، ادا  قاتلاں سزا  نیست

(4)کس  ءِ پلءِ  ڈولداریں  منءَ کاگدی بدنتیں
        ادا  رنگءُحسنءَ  چاراَنت ادا وشبوءَ بہانیست

(5)منی شہرءِمردمانی نوں ھیال ھم غلام اَنت
             ادءِ  پگر  ھم درامد ، ادءَ ھچ کسءَ وتا نیست

(6)اے ڈگارگپتہ شینزاں کہ کشار گیمران اَنت
        اے زمین نہ اِنت سورگ بلے زانت واجہءَ نیست

(7)منی ژندیں نپسءِ گوانک اِنت،کہ عطا بہ نند پہ شرّی
            نوں جہانءِ ہم زباں بو دگہ راہ ہچ ترا نیست


(1)Ai zubaan gung baaten ke gusheet tara wafaa nest
   Manaan gap gapaa cho rokaan tara parcha hich samaa nest?

(2)Ai dilaani syahen daagaan pa zubaan man poashant
    Ai riya o roo e shahrint eda sitk a hich sataa nest

(3)Mani naama drogen jurm e mani mehrabanaan bandit
    Eda bay gunaahi jurmay eda qatilan siza nest


(4)Kas e pull e dauldaaren mana kagadee bidanten
    Eda rang o huisn a charant eda washbuwa bahaa nest


(5)Mani shahr e mardumaani nu hayaal hum gulaamant
    Ede pigr hum daraamad eda hich kasaa wataa nest



(6)Ai dagaar gipta shenzaan ke kishar geemuranant
    Ai zameen naent sorag bale zaant waajaha nest


(7)Mani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta binind pa sharree
    Nu jahaan e hum zubaan bo dega raah hich taraa nest

[Zahida Raees Raji]

mani wajahen' braat Atta Hafiz:

Salamat baate,

braat ey gap naent keh Diwwan e sara noo techken' o neiken niyyaten' chamshank har kasi nebeshtank o shaahiree e sara dayag bitten' o har kas keh wah wah e wahag daarent aa edaa chey dar baet.

may dela wah wah louTuk o cha zaantkaarani chakkasaan chey dar barouk har doen kas yak paema arzesht daarant parcha keh ey durah may baask an'

bale edaa chakkassag eyukaa hama kasaani nebeshtaank bayant keh
aahani tooka saggag o oopaar hast, pada aa chizzey na chizzey dar barag ham bulouTant.

mani dele wahagent keh Baaskani Diwwan e shaaherok Baluchi e alkaapen' shaahir jouR bebant o har kasey keh wahag hameshent aa wati tooka saggag o oopaar a allama yaarit.

braat ma edaa baazen' kas chakkassetag o chizzey anchen mardom ham distag keh chounahiyaa aa dapa wa ey goshant keh ma del a nayaren bale har wahad keh yak baaskiyaa aahani nebeshtaank o shaahiree e kasanen' ham radiye geptag aahan wati deym mujentag keh maara baask eyr janant noo ma nayaen diwwan a. lolz

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tai dastoonk e zameen wa mani doustigen' beher e tooka en. agan tao ijazat dae man tai ey dastoonk e sara wati chamshaank  dayan'

passav e wadaareeg

tai adda

[hafiz_aaskani1]

baanuken guhaar raaji.
shume a gapp sadd dar sad raastan,
a may wash bahtee beet ke shuma may islaaha bikane .
tahnaa shumaa naa balke harkas watee chamshaanka bidant o harkas k cheez e radee gindeet a aaee farzint k aa nishandahee bikant.
may cham sard bant agan yakk e maraa may gaar kutagen rahaa pesh bidareet
shume kasir
Hafiz Atta

[بلوچ]

baaz juwaneN dastoonk int o sita karzit.

[ali albalushi]

salam wajah hafiz aaskani
tai ae dastonk mana sak baaz wash but sak baaz sata karzit
man shaaire nahan khe radi darbegajan bale mani dila saken washen ghazale
shume kastir
ali zamurani

[ali albalushi]

 
baaaaaaaaaaaaaz washen pir bande
 
 
ali zamurani

[Zahida Raees Raji]

بسم اللہ الّرحمن الّرحیم

Salam pa drahen baaskan.
Chonaiya ai ghazal e se sher mun pesaraa hum post kutagat ble aa wahda ai tawaamen ghazal e na at,guhaar raji o dega lahte baaskaan mana hame siken dat ke ishiya tawaam bikanan, mun hum koshist e kut.o pa turs o larz post kutag parcha ke marchaan may bask cha waah waaha bezarant o haqeeqat e nemagaa gaam jananaant.
Allah ish pa manzila sar kanaat
Nu ghazal shume demaaent,
shume dil baddiyo soj o pantaani rahchaar
hafiz atta ur rehman aaskani

wajaen' braat Hafiz Aaskani:
Salamat baate,

Braat pahel kan keh wati chamshaank dayag a baaz rouch zurt. mani chamshank e sara del warag mabu keh ey eyuka mani pegr en' man ishiye taha raast beban' allami naent. chounahiya tai dastoonk e zameen baaz vash o taamdaaren' o ishiya anchush pah wat sara deyma barag sobak naen' pada tao sher ham vash perbastagan' o allama seta karzant.

(1)Ai zubaan gung baaten ke gusheet tara wafaa nest
   Manaan gap gapaa cho rokaan tara parcha hich samaa nest?

mat^la e hayal washshen'
mani del a "ey" a chey "aa" kanag a she'r e taam geshter kant o matlab a ham waazeh kant.
aa zabaan gung baaten' keh gwashit tara wapaa neyst

dohmii band mana e a'tbaar a sharren' bale ey "gupp-gupp" goun mana eyr barag nabayagaen'

 

(2)Ai dilaani syahen daagaan pa zubaan man poashant
    Ai riya o roo e shahrint eda sitk a hich sataa nest

pada ey sher e taha "Ey " a chey mana "Aa" gehter ma'aloom bayagaen ma'na e aetbaara.
she'r albatta washshen'

(3)Mani naama drogen jurm e mani mehrabanaan bandit
    Eda bay gunaahi jurmay eda qatilan siza nest

"bandit" e jagaya "bastag" mani hayal gehter bitten'
Mani naama drogen jurm ay,  mani mehrabanaan bastag

(4)Kas e pull e dauldaaren mana kagadee bidanten
    Eda rang o huisn a charant eda washbuwa bahaa nest

ey sher mani sara chey sar gwast, agan shoma ishiya mana sarpad bekanet mehrbaani bitten'

(5)Mani shahr e mardumaani nu hayaal hum gulaamant
    Ede pigr hum daraamad eda hich kasaa wataa nest

braat hayal wa washshent bale dohmii band e sara kammey ghaur bekan.

Eda pegr ham daramad = gapp tamaam bit keh hao pegr daramad en'
eda hich kasaa wataa nest= chey chizz hech kas kasa wata neyst. ey gappe juwaab dayag zaloori ent

wahade tao awali Tukkur e taha gapp mukammal kot goRa dohmii e taha tara wati gapp kaamil kanag zaloori ent.

(6)Ai dagaar gipta shenzaan ke kishar geemuranant
    Ai zameen naent sorag bale zaant waajaha nest

baaz washshen pegr en'

(7)Mani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta binind pa sharree
    Nu jahaan e hum zubaan bo dega raah hich taraa nest

ke Atta binind pa sharree= keh ata eshaan' tao yal de

Mani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta eshan' tao yal de[/u]

Omaiten tao mani chamshaank a dela nayare.
deymtera ham tai degaa lachchahani wadaareegan'

 
 

[hafiz_aaskani1]

بسم اللہ الّرحمن الّرحیم

Salam pa drahen baaskan.
Chonaiya ai ghazal e se sher mun pesaraa hum post kutagat ble aa wahda ai tawaamen ghazal e na at,guhaar raji o dega lahte baaskaan mana hame siken dat ke ishiya tawaam bikanan, mun hum koshist e kut.o pa turs o larz post kutag parcha ke marchaan may bask cha waah waaha bezarant o haqeeqat e nemagaa gaam jananaant.
Allah ish pa manzila sar kanaat
Nu ghazal shume demaaent,
shume dil baddiyo soj o pantaani rahchaar
hafiz atta ur rehman aaskani

wajaen' braat Hafiz Aaskani:
Salamat baate,

Braat pahel kan keh wati chamshaank dayag a baaz rouch zurt. mani chamshank e sara del warag mabu keh ey eyuka mani pegr en' man ishiye taha raast beban' allami naent. chounahiya tai dastoonk e zameen baaz vash o taamdaaren' o ishiya anchush pah wat sara deyma barag sobak naen' pada tao sher ham vash perbastagan' o allama seta karzant.

(1)Ai zubaan gung baaten ke gusheet tara wafaa nest
   Manaan gap gapaa cho rokaan tara parcha hich samaa nest?

mat^la e hayal washshen'
mani del a "ey" a chey "aa" kanag a she'r e taam geshter kant o matlab a ham waazeh kant.
aa zabaan gung baaten' keh gwashit tara wapaa neyst

dohmii band mana e a'tbaar a sharren' bale ey "gupp-gupp" goun mana eyr barag nabayagaen'
guhaar shume ey mashwarah sar o chammanent. o mun hame pema dega bare kanane.
thanks
doomi misra e taha gupgup ma nagushen ,ma gushen gap gap


 

(2)Ai dilaani syahen daagaan pa zubaan man poashant
    Ai riya o roo e shahrint eda sitk a hich sataa nest

pada ey sher e taha "Ey " a chey mana "Aa" gehter ma'aloom bayagaen ma'na e aetbaara.
she'r albatta washshen'
eda man muzabzaban k kujaam washtiren bahar haal har kasaa ijzazaten k kujam wade dost beet kan,

(3)Mani naama drogen jurm e mani mehrabanaan bandit
    Eda bay gunaahi jurmay eda qatilan siza nest

"bandit" e jagaya "bastag" mani hayal gehter bitten'
Mani naama drogen jurm ay,  mani mehrabanaan bastag
mani hayaala mun wati mehrabanani saraa buhtan e bandag e badalaa request e bikanan washterent.

(4)Kas e pull e dauldaaren mana kagadee bidanten
    Eda rang o huisn a charant eda washbuwa bahaa nest

ey sher mani sara chey sar gwast, agan shoma ishiya mana sarpad bekanet mehrbaani bitten'
shaudaren pulla rang o husn hast bale pull e asl sharree k washbuweyent aa cha eshi zebahrent. mun wati manna gusht k washbuwiya kas na chareet rang o husn kagadi pull e der tir jant, mana hum hunchene bidaet k mardum kammo bill e ganok bant.
o agan (poochhee zameen ki to kahi aasman ki) misdaq buwagaent guda shuma balke harkas wati habaraa pa saaf danna bikant. agan mun galatan guda mun wati tasheeha kanag lotan.

(5)Mani shahr e mardumaani nu hayaal hum gulaamant
    Ede pigr hum daraamad eda hich kasaa wataa nest

braat hayal wa washshent bale dohmii band e sara kammey ghaur bekan.

Eda pegr ham daramad = gapp tamaam bit keh hao pegr daramad en'
eda hich kasaa wataa nest= chey chizz hech kas kasa wata neyst. ey gappe juwaab dayag zaloori ent,

hich kasaa wataa nest=yaani eda hich cheez kasaa wataa nest.
hancho k mun gushan tara hich nest ya hich tara nest .hame pema mun gushag lotitag k eda hcih cheez kasaa wata nest. durust digaraneegant.

wahade tao awali Tukkur e taha gapp mukammal kot goRa dohmii e taha tara wati gapp kaamil kanag zaloori ent.
taqreeban shuma raast gushagaet,tau an wa karhan a gap mana mannagiyent. parcha k mani gwara wati habaraa sabit kanag e hich daleel nest.

(6)Ai dagaar gipta shenzaan ke kishar geemuranant
    Ai zameen naent sorag bale zaant waajaha nest

baaz washshen pegr en'
minnat waar.

(7)Mani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta binind pa sharree
    Nu jahaan e hum zubaan bo dega raah hich taraa nest

ke Atta binind pa sharree= keh ata eshaan' tao yal de

Mani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta eshan' tao yal de[/u]
eda mana wati andaaz(masha allah )dost tir beet. may mulka a andaaz pa daant o tanz kaar marz beet, huncho k to gushe to wajah bezaare kan.ya to waja mehrabani kan cha eda buro.

Omaiten tao mani chamshaank a dela nayare.
deymtera ham tai degaa lachchahani wadaareegan'
dila wa chonaiya mun sakk karaan bale mani hayaala a chushen habar na ant k kase  dila biyareet.
hafiz atta aaskani zamurani

[hafiz_aaskani1]

 guhaar mun wati mannan noken tajrubah e izan noken tajrubah e kanag lotit bale gark boot. mani o taee duwenani habar hanco mix ant k kas nazant kay che gushagaent bale shuma wat allama eshan fahmit

[Liaquat Aminلیاقت امین]

baz jwan zabar dast/ hayal o sange ham redeya nedarag baz doldar ant/ salamat bate.

[yahya. याहया]

منی شہرءِمردمانی نوں ھیال ھم غلام اَنت
             ادءِ  پگر  ھم درامد ، ادءَ ھچ کسءَ وتا نیست
man tai khayaale baaz sata kangayaaN .
bale , khayaal moshqie taraza bibit goRa wash ent .
khayale taha rawni baaz zaloori ent ,porsht o porosh khayala nezor peshdaari  .
Hancho keh man sharraaN bale mana chilieyN puch pir .tao wat sharr tir zane.
mani gappaaN hejbar dala maayaar ,,,

[hafiz_aaskani1]

منی شہرءِمردمانی نوں ھیال ھم غلام اَنت
             ادءِ  پگر  ھم درامد ، ادءَ ھچ کسءَ وتا نیست
man tai khayaale baaz sata kangayaaN .
bale , khayaal moshqie taraza bibit goRa wash ent .
khayale taha rawni baaz zaloori ent ,porsht o porosh khayala nezor peshdaari  .
Hancho keh man sharraaN bale mana chilieyN puch pir .tao wat sharr tir zane.
mani gappaaN hejbar dala maayaar ,,,

shum e minnat waar .
mani zehna harcheez kae mun nibishtah kanan aae taha mani andaaz ghalat yaa na wash boot kant eshee tahaa hich shakk nest, aur a hum zaloori naent k mani khayaal huncho k mana dosten degira hum dost bebeet, shume minnat waar k shumara mani hayaal dost boot, beshakk andaaz e taha na washee kaet, o aaee nishandahi kanag may shume baaskani saraa allamiyent.
mun pa eshee hijbar dila nayaaran
allah shumara aabad kanaat.

[hafiz_aaskani1]

baz jwan zabar dast/ hayal o sange ham redeya nedarag baz doldar ant/ salamat bate.

wajah shume baaz baaz minnat waraan.