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Quote from: Zahida Raees Raji on March 03, 2010, 08:57:51 AMmani wajaen braat:Hafiz: Salamat baatet,brat zaantkaar wati gappan wat kayant janant mana tai dastoonk e sara hamen maaret keh tao qaafiya bandi e johud kotag nata tai man peysaregen' ham perband wantagan' o man zaanan' keh toa sharren shaahiree a chey sarpad e. ey dastoonk e sheraani taha improvement e gunjahish sak baazen' edaa bechar:mehrani bagh e dar bigaijDil dagh dagh e dar bigaijbraat baaG o daaG e dargeyjag a wat ma wat rabt wa neyst. padaa dohmii band angata wata gishshenag ham louTit. bay dual zird e droshumintPur darden ragay dar bigaijbraat agan' "raag" edaa saaz o zeymul e terminology ent goRa zerd e droushaman' goun ishiye chey rabt hast?(3) zangaa majan syahen shapay Par wat chiragh e dar bigaijEy sher washshent(4)bay zanagaani majlisint Dauldaren pag e dar bigaijbraat "zaanagani majlelsa" yaa zaantkaarani majlesa mardom sharren pegr dargeyjage johd kant "Dauldaaren' paagey " e wahag mani cham nizara naadan kanant lolz (5) dunya taharent ai atta Mehr e chiragh e darbigaijey sher chounahiya rad wa naent bale kul hindustani shaahiraani "saamne kee baat hai kuch is meN kashish naheN hai" agan mani gappey del a atk pahel bekan. shome ey dastoonk e sara revise version e wadaareegan' banuken guhaar raji drah o salamat bateshume chamshank dest o dil baaz wash boot ke ai majlis hushka wah wah e majlis e nae balke eshee taha islaah kanoak hum hasten,(1)mehrani bagh e dar bigaij dil dagh dagh e darbigaijmun pa wati naqisen aqla ai matlab kashitag ke agan mehrani bagha pattag loate guda dagh daaghen dil e dar bigaij,noo eshi taha mun chincho kamyabaan eshiy e faisalaha shuma o aidega waanok jwantir kanant parcha ke har kasi galatiya doomi jwantir nishan kut kant(2)bay daul zird e droashument purdarden raag e dar bigaijeda hum mun wati mannan hame gushag lotitag ke bakaul e urdu waalayaniya (samaan badal jana )misdaqa gon purdarden raage yaa saut e chist kanit balken zirdaa taaheer biraseet(3)bay zanagani majlisint dauldaren paage darbigaij banuken guhaar mani hayaala shuma ishtaap chaaree kutag parcha ke mun nagushtag ke zaantkaarani majlisaa rawe sharren paage dagaij mun na zaantkaarani habaraayan ke oda taee alfaaz o habaraan kas na chareet balken taee zahiree deela chaarant(4)zangaa majan syahen shap e par wat chirag e darbigaijalhamdulillah ke ai bachchet(5)dunya tahaarent ai atta mehr e chiraagh e dar bigaijboot kant ke shumaa raast gushagaet ke eshi taha kashish nest ,bale mani matlub hame boota ke dnya e janjaalani tahariya agan hatam bikant guda aa mehre chiraghentntagaan padaa hum mun galataan guda shume saraa farzint ke may ghalatiyani nishandahiya bikanit.shume baaz baaz minnat waaran allah e mayaar o baahota batehafiz aaskani zamurani
mani wajaen braat:Hafiz: Salamat baatet,brat zaantkaar wati gappan wat kayant janant mana tai dastoonk e sara hamen maaret keh tao qaafiya bandi e johud kotag nata tai man peysaregen' ham perband wantagan' o man zaanan' keh toa sharren shaahiree a chey sarpad e. ey dastoonk e sheraani taha improvement e gunjahish sak baazen' edaa bechar:mehrani bagh e dar bigaijDil dagh dagh e dar bigaijbraat baaG o daaG e dargeyjag a wat ma wat rabt wa neyst. padaa dohmii band angata wata gishshenag ham louTit. bay dual zird e droshumintPur darden ragay dar bigaijbraat agan' "raag" edaa saaz o zeymul e terminology ent goRa zerd e droushaman' goun ishiye chey rabt hast?(3) zangaa majan syahen shapay Par wat chiragh e dar bigaijEy sher washshent(4)bay zanagaani majlisint Dauldaren pag e dar bigaijbraat "zaanagani majlelsa" yaa zaantkaarani majlesa mardom sharren pegr dargeyjage johd kant "Dauldaaren' paagey " e wahag mani cham nizara naadan kanant lolz (5) dunya taharent ai atta Mehr e chiragh e darbigaijey sher chounahiya rad wa naent bale kul hindustani shaahiraani "saamne kee baat hai kuch is meN kashish naheN hai" agan mani gappey del a atk pahel bekan. shome ey dastoonk e sara revise version e wadaareegan'
بسم اللہ الّرحمن الّرحیمSalam pa drahen baaskan.Chonaiya ai ghazal e se sher mun pesaraa hum post kutagat ble aa wahda ai tawaamen ghazal e na at,guhaar raji o dega lahte baaskaan mana hame siken dat ke ishiya tawaam bikanan, mun hum koshist e kut.o pa turs o larz post kutag parcha ke marchaan may bask cha waah waaha bezarant o haqeeqat e nemagaa gaam jananaant.Allah ish pa manzila sar kanaatNu ghazal shume demaaent,shume dil baddiyo soj o pantaani rahchaarhafiz atta ur rehman aaskani
(1)Ai zubaan gung baaten ke gusheet tara wafaa nest Manaan gap gapaa cho rokaan tara parcha hich samaa nest?
(2)Ai dilaani syahen daagaan pa zubaan man poashant Ai riya o roo e shahrint eda sitk a hich sataa nest
(3)Mani naama drogen jurm e mani mehrabanaan bandit Eda bay gunaahi jurmay eda qatilan siza nest
(4)Kas e pull e dauldaaren mana kagadee bidanten Eda rang o huisn a charant eda washbuwa bahaa nest
(5)Mani shahr e mardumaani nu hayaal hum gulaamant Ede pigr hum daraamad eda hich kasaa wataa nest
(6)Ai dagaar gipta shenzaan ke kishar geemuranant Ai zameen naent sorag bale zaant waajaha nest
(7)Mani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta binind pa sharree Nu jahaan e hum zubaan bo dega raah hich taraa nest
Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PMبسم اللہ الّرحمن الّرحیمSalam pa drahen baaskan.Chonaiya ai ghazal e se sher mun pesaraa hum post kutagat ble aa wahda ai tawaamen ghazal e na at,guhaar raji o dega lahte baaskaan mana hame siken dat ke ishiya tawaam bikanan, mun hum koshist e kut.o pa turs o larz post kutag parcha ke marchaan may bask cha waah waaha bezarant o haqeeqat e nemagaa gaam jananaant.Allah ish pa manzila sar kanaatNu ghazal shume demaaent,shume dil baddiyo soj o pantaani rahchaarhafiz atta ur rehman aaskaniwajaen' braat Hafiz Aaskani:Salamat baate,Braat pahel kan keh wati chamshaank dayag a baaz rouch zurt. mani chamshank e sara del warag mabu keh ey eyuka mani pegr en' man ishiye taha raast beban' allami naent. chounahiya tai dastoonk e zameen baaz vash o taamdaaren' o ishiya anchush pah wat sara deyma barag sobak naen' pada tao sher ham vash perbastagan' o allama seta karzant. Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PM(1)Ai zubaan gung baaten ke gusheet tara wafaa nest Manaan gap gapaa cho rokaan tara parcha hich samaa nest?mat^la e hayal washshen'mani del a "ey" a chey "aa" kanag a she'r e taam geshter kant o matlab a ham waazeh kant. aa zabaan gung baaten' keh gwashit tara wapaa neystdohmii band mana e a'tbaar a sharren' bale ey "gupp-gupp" goun mana eyr barag nabayagaen' guhaar shume ey mashwarah sar o chammanent. o mun hame pema dega bare kanane.thanksdoomi misra e taha gupgup ma nagushen ,ma gushen gap gap Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PM(2)Ai dilaani syahen daagaan pa zubaan man poashant Ai riya o roo e shahrint eda sitk a hich sataa nestpada ey sher e taha "Ey " a chey mana "Aa" gehter ma'aloom bayagaen ma'na e aetbaara. she'r albatta washshen'eda man muzabzaban k kujaam washtiren bahar haal har kasaa ijzazaten k kujam wade dost beet kan,Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PM(3)Mani naama drogen jurm e mani mehrabanaan bandit Eda bay gunaahi jurmay eda qatilan siza nest"bandit" e jagaya "bastag" mani hayal gehter bitten'Mani naama drogen jurm ay, mani mehrabanaan bastagmani hayaala mun wati mehrabanani saraa buhtan e bandag e badalaa request e bikanan washterent.Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PM(4)Kas e pull e dauldaaren mana kagadee bidanten Eda rang o huisn a charant eda washbuwa bahaa nestey sher mani sara chey sar gwast, agan shoma ishiya mana sarpad bekanet mehrbaani bitten'shaudaren pulla rang o husn hast bale pull e asl sharree k washbuweyent aa cha eshi zebahrent. mun wati manna gusht k washbuwiya kas na chareet rang o husn kagadi pull e der tir jant, mana hum hunchene bidaet k mardum kammo bill e ganok bant.o agan (poochhee zameen ki to kahi aasman ki) misdaq buwagaent guda shuma balke harkas wati habaraa pa saaf danna bikant. agan mun galatan guda mun wati tasheeha kanag lotan.Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PM(5)Mani shahr e mardumaani nu hayaal hum gulaamant Ede pigr hum daraamad eda hich kasaa wataa nestbraat hayal wa washshent bale dohmii band e sara kammey ghaur bekan. Eda pegr ham daramad = gapp tamaam bit keh hao pegr daramad en'eda hich kasaa wataa nest= chey chizz hech kas kasa wata neyst. ey gappe juwaab dayag zaloori ent,hich kasaa wataa nest=yaani eda hich cheez kasaa wataa nest.hancho k mun gushan tara hich nest ya hich tara nest .hame pema mun gushag lotitag k eda hcih cheez kasaa wata nest. durust digaraneegant.wahade tao awali Tukkur e taha gapp mukammal kot goRa dohmii e taha tara wati gapp kaamil kanag zaloori ent. taqreeban shuma raast gushagaet,tau an wa karhan a gap mana mannagiyent. parcha k mani gwara wati habaraa sabit kanag e hich daleel nest.Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PM(6)Ai dagaar gipta shenzaan ke kishar geemuranant Ai zameen naent sorag bale zaant waajaha nestbaaz washshen pegr en'minnat waar. Quote from: hafiz_aaskani1 on April 12, 2010, 09:50:27 PM(7)Mani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta binind pa sharree Nu jahaan e hum zubaan bo dega raah hich taraa nestke Atta binind pa sharree= keh ata eshaan' tao yal deMani zhanden naps e gwankent. ke Atta eshan' tao yal de[/u]eda mana wati andaaz(masha allah )dost tir beet. may mulka a andaaz pa daant o tanz kaar marz beet, huncho k to gushe to wajah bezaare kan.ya to waja mehrabani kan cha eda buro.Omaiten tao mani chamshaank a dela nayare. deymtera ham tai degaa lachchahani wadaareegan'dila wa chonaiya mun sakk karaan bale mani hayaala a chushen habar na ant k kase dila biyareet.hafiz atta aaskani zamurani
منی شہرءِمردمانی نوں ھیال ھم غلام اَنت ادءِ پگر ھم درامد ، ادءَ ھچ کسءَ وتا نیستman tai khayaale baaz sata kangayaaN .bale , khayaal moshqie taraza bibit goRa wash ent .khayale taha rawni baaz zaloori ent ,porsht o porosh khayala nezor peshdaari .Hancho keh man sharraaN bale mana chilieyN puch pir .tao wat sharr tir zane.mani gappaaN hejbar dala maayaar ,,,
baz jwan zabar dast/ hayal o sange ham redeya nedarag baz doldar ant/ salamat bate.