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we were innocent but not fools
« on: August 17, 2009, 02:42:09 AM »
We were innocent but never fools


We were friendly and very kind
Ready to live with you in harmony
For the sake of Islam
For the sake of peace



We gave our lands
We gave our hearts
We gave our resources
We gave you all


Things were fine at the beginning
We were simple people with simple hearts
No lust no crime no greed had place within us


When one fine morning, our children dying of thirst cried
We came to you as we had agreed
Yes we agreed to share and care whenever and whatever


We heard your excuses and we understood
You needed time, we gave you a century
We were patient
We were patient


Out of rage the boy cried “ stop taking my land, I have no other …
Stop snatching it away ,I need some shade ! “
“don’t give me water, I’ll search for it myself…
But take not my land
Take not my land I plead again”


You ignored the one and second and third
The fourth and fifth were in your cells
And seventh and eight already dead

We were innocent but not fools
From one to two , we are thousands now


We know and saw and waited long
For water, shade, paper and pens
Now I know and we all do
Your not God that we plead to you


You will pay for every suffering tear
Now we can and old is that fear


We need not American arms
Nor money neither any alms
Our faith is Allah is strong enough
To get our rights back to us


If for sake of Islam we can stretch our hands
Then for the sake of innocent Muslims, we can take it back


Allah-u-Akbar  Allah-u-Akbar  shall be the lyrics of our song
Quran will guide us for now and ever along


We will win and victory will be our slave


~Nazgol Askani[/color] E|



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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2009, 03:09:17 AM »
im proud of u sister a very beautifull  poem i liked it so much The poem touched my heart realy  ,,weldone sister o|||



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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2009, 09:26:14 PM »
I disapprove of what you said,but I will defend to the death your right to say it....
"""""Allah-u-Akbar  Allah-u-Akbar  shall be the lyrics of our song
      
We need our own strength not of others I mean of Arabs.....we don,t need  a motto of ALLah Akbar... we ,mean The great Baloch,are the creature of a God but not a God of Muslims only,we can be one without Islam....It is the name of Islam which made us slaves of the slave.....we are muslims we accept it but it is not the perfect chain to unite us ...... we must follow the true and correct path not the obsolete path and principles...how can the principles of a Arab socity be alway fit for our baloch society.........GOD is great but the GOD of world is Great not of Muslims only......
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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2009, 12:09:14 AM »
thnx brother rind baba

brother jan baloch.... thnx 4 sharing ur view openly

earlier when i was writting this dowm ..i was sure of offences for this line....
anyways
my intention was nothing in specific
ALLAHUAKBAR mean GOD IS GREAT

anyone of any relegion can accept it as a GOD of their own relegion
and even if the dont worship any god ,,, they can take god as the power of nature that they beleive in ....

by saying ALLAHU AKBAR ,,,i had no intention of giving priority to any relegion ........ just bcoz myself is a muslim i loved to repeat those words.... but u can take them as anything u feel is suitable to u ....
(the same for quran)..i beleive no relegion teaches bad.....but since i am a muslim i loved to use quran as my guidence coz im sure of its trueness.....anyone can use anything that they are sure of....
and after all everybody worships the same God in different names
bcoz if it was'nt so... the more powerfull god would have overcome the other
so god is one ..no matter in wat name u or i may call it

:)

ur sincerely
nazgol askani



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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2009, 12:30:02 AM »
thnx brother rind baba

brother jan baloch.... thnx 4 sharing ur view openly

earlier when i was writting this dowm ..i was sure of offences for this line....
anyways
my intention was nothing in specific
ALLAHUAKBAR mean GOD IS GREAT

anyone of any relegion can accept it as a GOD of their own relegion
and even if the dont worship any god ,,, they can take god as the power of nature that they beleive in ....

by saying ALLAHU AKBAR ,,,i had no intention of giving priority to any relegion ........ just bcoz myself is a muslim i loved to repeat those words.... but u can take them as anything u feel is suitable to u ....
(the same for quran)..i beleive no relegion teaches bad.....but since i am a muslim i loved to use quran as my guidence coz im sure of its trueness.....anyone can use anything that they are sure of....
and after all everybody worships the same God in different names
bcoz if it was'nt so... the more powerfull god would have overcome the other
so god is one ..no matter in wat name u or i may call it

:)

ur sincerely
nazgol askani

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No doubt there is some one running this world... this system and no doubt that he is one and very organised

And nice poem too

God bless you ..... Keep moving forward

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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #5 on: August 20, 2009, 11:55:17 PM »
thnx bro



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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #6 on: August 23, 2009, 09:24:16 PM »
Mashhalh it is so beautyful!
Lovd it!

Hats Off !
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Once I Said My Prayer Everybody Back To Business

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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2009, 03:45:39 AM »


ordoken' gwhaar nazgol

Sabz o aabaad baate


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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #8 on: September 16, 2009, 01:10:33 PM »
Great Poetry. but i'm not agree with these lines;
                                       
                                               We were friendly and very kind
                                              Ready to live with you in harmony
                                                     For the sake of Islam
                                                     For the sake of peace



                                                        We gave our lands
                                                        We gave our hearts
                                                      We gave our resources
                                                           We gave you all
1. we were never ready to live with them.
2. we never loved them nor we gave our hearts, resources and our land rather our MotherLand.
       Baloch always rejected to live with them.
i appreciate you for writing such a nice poetry. keep it up and write more beautiful thoughts. you may be a good poet. i request you to write another poem titled A MOTHER'S FEELING ABOUT OUR MOTHERLAND. i know you can do it, you can write feelings of a woman about her land. May Allah bless you
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your Brother
Sometimes It Is Bitter, Sometimes UnExpected
But
Truth Is Always Truth

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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #9 on: October 16, 2009, 03:31:36 AM »
brother kamran....

my knowledge of history is not so gud...but i guess...som1 somwhere must hav agrred or else we'd hav been free now..any how..im sry if its nt true

and thnx 4 d compliment ,,.but bro im nt a poetess...its just wen im overwhelmed wid feelings ..dey flow in words...

i wish i could it and i'll try enshala and mashal sis seema had done it very well...





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Re: we were innocent but not fools
« Reply #10 on: October 16, 2009, 02:39:37 PM »
ok. allah a bahot a
Sometimes It Is Bitter, Sometimes UnExpected
But
Truth Is Always Truth