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Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2010, 12:10:44 PM »

                     
                                Good but Wordy


Shumay kar baz juwan ent lekin isham....yak masla ish ent k lafaziyat baz ast ent...beze handan  hamiktar zaroorar nest at k mushkilen lapzan use kane...e Balochi adeebani masaala ast ent k e baz mushkil o unnecessary lpzan use...e juhad wanokanee wasta baz difficult booaghen..especailly noken wanokhanee wasta.......


   Manzoor Kanrani Baloch Washdil
   kanranimanzoor@gmail.com
We should together for the promotion of BALOCHI language and literature....

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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2010, 12:29:54 PM »
hancho keh mani durdangeyN dost Manzoora baaz nebshtanke toka graneyN Balochi labz kaar bantag but keh noeyN wanokaan mushkil bit .
bale ey gap ham behaal kangi naent keh Balochiye graneyN o qadeemeyN labz ham kaarbandag loT ant.maslan ,kaar bandag pada cho kanag bibit(kaarmurz kanag)eda ey 2 gaal kaarbndag bayagyant.dega baaz labz keh Baloch nazan eatey.ey cheeze hayal daariya bekant. menatwaar

And Satan said:
I had no power over you
except that I called you
and you obeyed me.
So do not blame me
but blame your selves.
Al Qur ' an

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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2010, 06:15:46 PM »

     ARYPEN WAJA MANZOOR O MADAHDAAREN WAJA YAYA BALOCH!
            minnahwaar Shomy duenani jeta jetahen pegr e!

    Bale man wat ham noukdarbariyan o e mani domi aazmaank ent ke Baaska sheng kotag, o man Balochi nazanagy kadda wantag pada ham sharriya inna bale mani dela e aazmaank e taha ewaden ech graanyn labz man kaarmarz nakotag ke pa BALOCHIYA ahani darbarag o pahmag graan bebit!
    Mani johd hamesh ent ke man wati labzank e johlankiyan borwan o aiya cha chizze pa wat daz begeran o hamy pema mani nebeshtaank a cha ham mani pemen noukdarbar o nazaantkaar chizze noukyn o kwahnyn begendant o bemaarant ke kwahnyn labzaani taam washter ent!!!!

       BALE!
         Pada ham shomy soujani mennawaar agan kasy "BALOCHIA" e labz sarpadiya nayahant goda aazmaank e ham sarpadiya dann bit!

         baloch-raaj-e-tepaaki-loutouk

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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2010, 09:43:56 PM »
zuban sak wash ant o balochi pahk ant. rwani sak baz jwan ant. diction pahk balochi ant.
kadi kadi guman bee k poetic beet tai zuban. noo poetic chon bee? poeetic ammoda zuban bee k aooda tashbeea o estayara o images karmarz kanag bee. mana e gappa " manni hayal e lunjen zirr alood o mlood ant ". " lunjein zirr " imagery k pah shaer a sak zeeb dant. Ram e taha amnchoo gaeshter tashbeea o chahrag kam karmarz kanag bee gaeshter jwan ant. baley maznen nadkar ham tashbea o chahrag karmarz kan ant.

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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2010, 10:22:49 PM »
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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #6 on: July 05, 2010, 05:37:08 PM »

     Mennawaar Waja Zahid Abdullah shomy!

        Shomy shobyn begendy ke raast bebit ke mani Aazmaank a POETIC chyr bejant o ahani droushum cho dastounka bebit baly lahty andari maaresht anchen hast ant ke aahan to labzaank e tahran bechar e goda jetah jetahen tahrani taha bahr bant,choshke dastounk,aazmaank,kisaa,lachcha o dgy baaz, bale wahdy to darshaan kaniye goda aa yakkyn tahry taha ham jagah kanant o wati jetah o zybnaakyn manah e dayant.

   Waja!
       Shomy zaant burz ent pameshka shoma shar pajja aart ke man AAZMAANK e taha DASTOUNK e ham rang a hawaar kanaga an,shoma agan mani awwali aazmaank a begendet goda shoma wa pahk deljam bet parchia ke man aiye taha dastounki band e ham hawaar kotag. Pa mani dela agan Aazmaank a sher noukyn taam e bakshit goda aiya bahedyn ma noukyn o pormahnahen wadiya darshaan bekanyn.
    Shomy pary babata hayaly dyma arag o nykyn soujani modaam raahchaar ban!

       Sorouz Baloch
   

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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #7 on: July 05, 2010, 05:41:00 PM »

    Mennar waar!
       WAja Abdul Hameed Mauj shomy doust daarag e.

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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #8 on: July 06, 2010, 07:50:37 PM »
سلام ودروت_ھیا ل وارواہ ءِ نیام ءَ، لبزانی گرودار،کسھ گوشگ باز جوان اِنت،تی گڈی واب_ھمے رنگءِ بیانے اَت،ندارگ وزبان ءِ   ھوریءَ بیان باز ڈولدار اِت،زندگ باتءے۔

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Re: Guddi Waab گُڈّی واب
« Reply #9 on: July 09, 2010, 04:46:00 PM »

      Walekum Salaam Aarypyn waja Liaquat Amin!

         Shomy wati pegr e mazaniyent ke mani kasanokyn hayaal maaretag o tousip bakshatag!

       shomy del baddiye mennawaar!

           Shome-kaster