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Quote from: Zahida Raji on October 09, 2009, 09:35:35 PMQuote from: ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch on October 09, 2009, 06:30:31 PMsalaam o droot,chusheN debate pa sikkag a sak kumak dayant !shumey habar raastii keh "accent" farq hast ent, bale edaa gap accent e na ent, balkeN "qaafiya" e gentedaa qaafiya e gisheenokeN harp "Alif" ent ! haNcho kehshoo-haa-zagchak-kaa-sagpal-gaa-ragchee-haa -lag etc...nooN, "jah-sir-rag" eshaanii goma chooN fit bit ? idaa che zaanag bit keh , miSra' vazn e lihaaz a va baraabar ent, bale qaafiya ham-dap na ent !shumey passav e vadaareegaaN mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !Zia BalochWaja Zia Baloch: Salam o drout,shome sar o souj sar o chamman' bale yak gappey e babata ma kammo zanag loutan' agan man radan'ilm e qaafiya e usoolent keh sher e awali o dohmii miSrah e taha aahiree hamencho harf yak bant aahan' deyma baarag laazument. aahiya chey peysar e harf badal but kanant bale aahiye harkat (zabar, zeyr o peysh) e yak buwag laazument. Shohaazag sho-haa-zag(zag) zey zabar o gaaf jazmchakkasag chak-ka-sag (sag) seen zabar o gaaf jazmpalgaarag pal-ga-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmey-shaarag ey-sha-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmdar-wazag dar-wa-zag (zag) zay zabar o gaaf jazmdel-e-daarag ..da-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmcheyhaalag chey-ha-lag(lag) laam zabar o gaaf jazmjaa serrag ja-ser-rag(rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmey durah qaafiya haani tooka bashamol "jaa serrag" ey usool gounen'. (parcha keh ilm e qaafiya e rule Balochi o Urdu e yakkant pameshka ey sarhaal e sara hamen gwashag buwagaen' http://www.sarwarraz.com/adabipage_ur.php?id=349&pageid=7&title=rt-382.gif)nou shome gwashag keh "alif" keh modfied alphabet a chey peysar peydaken bahed ma aahiya ham deyma bedaaran' goRa mani cham nizara ilm e qaafiya e usool e tooka modfield harf e peysar e harf e daarag e hech pabandi neyst. ey shaahir e wati saraent keh aa Dastoonk e tooka moosiqiyat peda kanag e haatira ishiyaa bedaarit. agan' ma wati zaant e hesaab a radoun mani rahshooniyaa bekane. Minnavaarw/salaam,man shumey passav pa dil-jamii vant ! o shumy daatageN Link ham chaaret . padaa ham man vatii gapp e saraa ooshtaatagaaN, parchaa kehee link keh shumaa raah daatag at , shumaa manii hamii bugusheet keh shumaa ee link e toke nibishtaaNka kujaam cheeza pa vata as a daleel zeerey ?man teevageN link a pa shumey use kutageN qaafiya"jah-sir-rag" e vaasta daleel na dest ! parchaa keh ee cha aahaaN jitaayeN cheezii, chetor ? ........... bale !avallii gap esh ent keh maa raa chetor qaafiya geshsheenagii ent ? ya'nii cha kujaa maa ee gapp a sarjam kaneN keh chedaa Qafiya e ham-dapii bungeej beet, choo ke zabar, ya'nii short-vowel(zabar) yaa long-vowel(alif) etc.. ee gappanii pahmag vaasta zaroorii ent keh pesara maa bzaaneN keh Qafiya che balaahe Qafiya e hayaal har zubaan e adab e tooka hast ! macalanQafiya (Rhyme)in English =A rhyme is a repetition of similar sounds in two or more words and is most often used in poetry and songs.English adab e tooka Qafiya e ta'reef(definition) hamesh ent, eshii tookaa "sound" (harfaanii yaa keh harakataanii ) focus kanag looTeet !bale English e Qaafiya e rah-o-rahbaNd(rules) cha French a zeerag bettagaaN , bale Balochi , Urdu, e rules cha Arabi, Farsi o Hindi a che zeerag bant !neeN biyaae chaareN keh Balochi yaa Urdu e tooka ishee definition che entQafiya (Balochi, Urdu e tahaa ):hancheN ham-dapeeN labz keh aayaanii "rhythmic" jahlii o burzii yak paim be bant ! ba i'tebaar e vowels , yaa harfaanii tavaar ham-dap bi bant.neeN gap esh ent keh Qafiye "ryhthmic" jahlii o burzii cha kujaa geshsheenga beet ? eshii vaastaa i'lm-e-qaafiya e yek shaaheemii keh aa'ii a "Harf-e-ravii" gushant , zaanag looTeet.Harf-e-ravii e pajjar chush bit kant keh hamaa doyeN qafiya keh shaai'r aayaan a vati "matla' (bungeejii she'r)" do'eN misra'(line) kaareet , agaaN aayaanii mushtarikah vowels (short/long) dar bekaney,goRaa aa labz e ma'naa begishhet , i.e. yak matla"ii e avvalii line pa labz" dard-maNd" saraa kuTTeet , o, du'mii line pa labz"niyaaz-maNd" saraa kuTTeet. eshaanii mushtarikah harf "maNd" ent , agaaN eshii a dar bekaney guRaa labz chush bant "dard" o "niyaaz" hamii labzaanii keh ma'naa ham geshhetag , eshaanii aaKhrii harf ('d' o 'z')"Harf-e-ravii" gushag beet ! eshaanii harf-e-ravii yak na ent lihaaza ee ham qaafiya na ant ! haaN, "dard" o "fard" ham-dapa ant, parchaa keh ishaanii harf-e-ravii yakii ! , ee ham dapii avvalli darja e gent, parchaa keh do'eenaanii jahlii-o-burzii ham yak vaRaa ent o geeshtireN harf ham , ya'nii "rd"hamii vaRaa "dard" o "chird" ham ham qaafiya ant keh eshaanii Harf-e-ravii yakii ! agar che eshaanii jahlii o burzii yak na ant , ee vaRaa yak na ent keh "dard" e tookaa "d" saraa zabarii o "chird" e tooka "ch" cheera zeerii , ee do'mii darajah ent !hamii vaRaa "dard" o "pad" ham ham qaafiya ant , parchaa keh eshaanii ham "harf-e-ravii" yakkii ! "d" agar che dard e tooka se(3) harf ant o "pad" e tooka do(2) harpant ! ee semi(3rd) daraja e qaafiya ent ! bale, agaaN shaai'rii a vatii matla' tooka qafiya "dard" o "sard" aavu'rtagant guRaa aa dege she'raanii tooka "pad" qaafiya bast na kant ! parchaa keh avvalii miSra' do harf-e-ravii ant "r and d" , lehaaza, ee dege she'raanii tooka ham haNcheeN qaafiya looTeet !haaN, agaaN aa'ii matla' avvalii miSra' qaafiya "dard" ent o du'mii miSra" e qaafiya "pad" yaa "red" ent guRaa aaii qaafiya e pahnaad mastir bit ! Qafiya mudaam hamooda cha bungeej beet keh labzaanii tok e mushtarikah vowel turii aa "long" be bit yaa "short" ham-dap be bant !( bale harf-e-ravii ham zehn a daarag looTeet ! ) baHc sak draaj beet, gappa gavNR kanaaN now, in the light of this rule, biyaa chaareN keh shumey dastooNk e matla' e qaafiya cha kujaa ham-dap bant !do labzant 1. shoohaazag 2. chakkasag yakbarii harkataaN(vowels) na chaareN , balkeN harfaaN(characters) chaareN . ee vaRaa maaraa doenaanii tooka yak harfii haNchii gindaga kayt ka ham-dapant aa "g" ent ! bale ee "harf-e-ravii" bit na kant ! parchaa keh ee "masdar(infinitive)" ent o masdar e harf hijbar "harf-e-ravii" bit na kant nooN pash kaptant 1. shoohaaz 2. chakkaasee do'eenaanii harf-e-ravii e sound yakkii na e "z" dege tavaarii o "s" dege tavaarii neeN gishshet keh idaa Qafiya a harfaanii tavaar (phoneme) na ent, balkeN aayaanii harakat (vowels ) ant ! neeN, chaareeN Harakataanii tavaar cha kujaa yakk ent (turii aa "short" be bit yaa "long" ) bale, biyaae chaareNeshii vaasta maa harfaaN se(3) bahr a bahr kaneeN1. shoo-haa-zag > ishii tooka se (3) vowels hast 1) oo{wow} 2) aa{alif} 3) a{zabar} 2. chak-kaa-sag > ishii tooka ham se(3) vowels hast 1) a{zabar} 2) aa{alif} 3) a{zabar} neeN doe'naanii chaarag a hamii gindag beet ke vowels aanii ham-dapii cha do'mii(2nd) bahr a gishsheet ! ya'nii do'ee labzaanii dohmii bahr a che vowels yak paim ant ! ya'nii 1. haa-zag 2. kaa-sagee do'eeN labz 3 "syllable" vaala ant ! eshaanii avvalii syllable ham-dap na ant ya'nii 1. shoo 2.chak lihaaza ee zaanag bit keh qaafiya cha doomii bahr a gishsheet !eeN rule e bunyaad a ee dastooNke draaheN qaafiya hamii vaRaa bayag looT ant ! o zaahir ent keh "jah-sir-rag" gooN eshaaN ham-dap na ent.haaN, agaaN matla' e took a yak qaafiyaii jah-sir-rag aarag bitteeN, guRaa doeeN vaReeN qafiya ravaa at ! bebaksh et keh debate baaz draaj bit ! ummeet vaaraaN keh shumaa neeN pahmitag, agaaN geeshtir "Explanation" looTey guRaa just bekan et minnat vaaraaNmudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !Zia Baloch
Quote from: ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch on October 09, 2009, 06:30:31 PMsalaam o droot,chusheN debate pa sikkag a sak kumak dayant !shumey habar raastii keh "accent" farq hast ent, bale edaa gap accent e na ent, balkeN "qaafiya" e gentedaa qaafiya e gisheenokeN harp "Alif" ent ! haNcho kehshoo-haa-zagchak-kaa-sagpal-gaa-ragchee-haa -lag etc...nooN, "jah-sir-rag" eshaanii goma chooN fit bit ? idaa che zaanag bit keh , miSra' vazn e lihaaz a va baraabar ent, bale qaafiya ham-dap na ent !shumey passav e vadaareegaaN mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !Zia BalochWaja Zia Baloch: Salam o drout,shome sar o souj sar o chamman' bale yak gappey e babata ma kammo zanag loutan' agan man radan'ilm e qaafiya e usoolent keh sher e awali o dohmii miSrah e taha aahiree hamencho harf yak bant aahan' deyma baarag laazument. aahiya chey peysar e harf badal but kanant bale aahiye harkat (zabar, zeyr o peysh) e yak buwag laazument. Shohaazag sho-haa-zag(zag) zey zabar o gaaf jazmchakkasag chak-ka-sag (sag) seen zabar o gaaf jazmpalgaarag pal-ga-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmey-shaarag ey-sha-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmdar-wazag dar-wa-zag (zag) zay zabar o gaaf jazmdel-e-daarag ..da-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmcheyhaalag chey-ha-lag(lag) laam zabar o gaaf jazmjaa serrag ja-ser-rag(rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmey durah qaafiya haani tooka bashamol "jaa serrag" ey usool gounen'. (parcha keh ilm e qaafiya e rule Balochi o Urdu e yakkant pameshka ey sarhaal e sara hamen gwashag buwagaen' http://www.sarwarraz.com/adabipage_ur.php?id=349&pageid=7&title=rt-382.gif)nou shome gwashag keh "alif" keh modfied alphabet a chey peysar peydaken bahed ma aahiya ham deyma bedaaran' goRa mani cham nizara ilm e qaafiya e usool e tooka modfield harf e peysar e harf e daarag e hech pabandi neyst. ey shaahir e wati saraent keh aa Dastoonk e tooka moosiqiyat peda kanag e haatira ishiyaa bedaarit. agan' ma wati zaant e hesaab a radoun mani rahshooniyaa bekane. Minnavaar
salaam o droot,chusheN debate pa sikkag a sak kumak dayant !shumey habar raastii keh "accent" farq hast ent, bale edaa gap accent e na ent, balkeN "qaafiya" e gentedaa qaafiya e gisheenokeN harp "Alif" ent ! haNcho kehshoo-haa-zagchak-kaa-sagpal-gaa-ragchee-haa -lag etc...nooN, "jah-sir-rag" eshaanii goma chooN fit bit ? idaa che zaanag bit keh , miSra' vazn e lihaaz a va baraabar ent, bale qaafiya ham-dap na ent !shumey passav e vadaareegaaN mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !Zia Baloch
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Quote from: ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch on October 10, 2009, 01:29:57 AMQuote from: Zahida Raji on October 09, 2009, 09:35:35 PMQuote from: ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch on October 09, 2009, 06:30:31 PMsalaam o droot,chusheN debate pa sikkag a sak kumak dayant !shumey habar raastii keh "accent" farq hast ent, bale edaa gap accent e na ent, balkeN "qaafiya" e gentedaa qaafiya e gisheenokeN harp "Alif" ent ! haNcho kehshoo-haa-zagchak-kaa-sagpal-gaa-ragchee-haa -lag etc...nooN, "jah-sir-rag" eshaanii goma chooN fit bit ? idaa che zaanag bit keh , miSra' vazn e lihaaz a va baraabar ent, bale qaafiya ham-dap na ent !shumey passav e vadaareegaaN mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !Zia BalochWaja Zia Baloch: Salam o drout,shome sar o souj sar o chamman' bale yak gappey e babata ma kammo zanag loutan' agan man radan'ilm e qaafiya e usoolent keh sher e awali o dohmii miSrah e taha aahiree hamencho harf yak bant aahan' deyma baarag laazument. aahiya chey peysar e harf badal but kanant bale aahiye harkat (zabar, zeyr o peysh) e yak buwag laazument. Shohaazag sho-haa-zag(zag) zey zabar o gaaf jazmchakkasag chak-ka-sag (sag) seen zabar o gaaf jazmpalgaarag pal-ga-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmey-shaarag ey-sha-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmdar-wazag dar-wa-zag (zag) zay zabar o gaaf jazmdel-e-daarag ..da-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmcheyhaalag chey-ha-lag(lag) laam zabar o gaaf jazmjaa serrag ja-ser-rag(rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazmey durah qaafiya haani tooka bashamol "jaa serrag" ey usool gounen'. (parcha keh ilm e qaafiya e rule Balochi o Urdu e yakkant pameshka ey sarhaal e sara hamen gwashag buwagaen' http://www.sarwarraz.com/adabipage_ur.php?id=349&pageid=7&title=rt-382.gif)nou shome gwashag keh "alif" keh modfied alphabet a chey peysar peydaken bahed ma aahiya ham deyma bedaaran' goRa mani cham nizara ilm e qaafiya e usool e tooka modfield harf e peysar e harf e daarag e hech pabandi neyst. ey shaahir e wati saraent keh aa Dastoonk e tooka moosiqiyat peda kanag e haatira ishiyaa bedaarit. agan' ma wati zaant e hesaab a radoun mani rahshooniyaa bekane. Minnavaarw/salaam,man shumey passav pa dil-jamii vant ! o shumy daatageN Link ham chaaret . padaa ham man vatii gapp e saraa ooshtaatagaaN, parchaa kehee link keh shumaa raah daatag at , shumaa manii hamii bugusheet keh shumaa ee link e toke nibishtaaNka kujaam cheeza pa vata as a daleel zeerey ?man teevageN link a pa shumey use kutageN qaafiya"jah-sir-rag" e vaasta daleel na dest ! parchaa keh ee cha aahaaN jitaayeN cheezii, chetor ? ........... bale !avallii gap esh ent keh maa raa chetor qaafiya geshsheenagii ent ? ya'nii cha kujaa maa ee gapp a sarjam kaneN keh chedaa Qafiya e ham-dapii bungeej beet, choo ke zabar, ya'nii short-vowel(zabar) yaa long-vowel(alif) etc.. ee gappanii pahmag vaasta zaroorii ent keh pesara maa bzaaneN keh Qafiya che balaahe Qafiya e hayaal har zubaan e adab e tooka hast ! macalanQafiya (Rhyme)in English =A rhyme is a repetition of similar sounds in two or more words and is most often used in poetry and songs.English adab e tooka Qafiya e ta'reef(definition) hamesh ent, eshii tookaa "sound" (harfaanii yaa keh harakataanii ) focus kanag looTeet !bale English e Qaafiya e rah-o-rahbaNd(rules) cha French a zeerag bettagaaN , bale Balochi , Urdu, e rules cha Arabi, Farsi o Hindi a che zeerag bant !neeN biyaae chaareN keh Balochi yaa Urdu e tooka ishee definition che entQafiya (Balochi, Urdu e tahaa ):hancheN ham-dapeeN labz keh aayaanii "rhythmic" jahlii o burzii yak paim be bant ! ba i'tebaar e vowels , yaa harfaanii tavaar ham-dap bi bant.neeN gap esh ent keh Qafiye "ryhthmic" jahlii o burzii cha kujaa geshsheenga beet ? eshii vaastaa i'lm-e-qaafiya e yek shaaheemii keh aa'ii a "Harf-e-ravii" gushant , zaanag looTeet.Harf-e-ravii e pajjar chush bit kant keh hamaa doyeN qafiya keh shaai'r aayaan a vati "matla' (bungeejii she'r)" do'eN misra'(line) kaareet , agaaN aayaanii mushtarikah vowels (short/long) dar bekaney,goRaa aa labz e ma'naa begishhet , i.e. yak matla"ii e avvalii line pa labz" dard-maNd" saraa kuTTeet , o, du'mii line pa labz"niyaaz-maNd" saraa kuTTeet. eshaanii mushtarikah harf "maNd" ent , agaaN eshii a dar bekaney guRaa labz chush bant "dard" o "niyaaz" hamii labzaanii keh ma'naa ham geshhetag , eshaanii aaKhrii harf ('d' o 'z')"Harf-e-ravii" gushag beet ! eshaanii harf-e-ravii yak na ent lihaaza ee ham qaafiya na ant ! haaN, "dard" o "fard" ham-dapa ant, parchaa keh ishaanii harf-e-ravii yakii ! , ee ham dapii avvalli darja e gent, parchaa keh do'eenaanii jahlii-o-burzii ham yak vaRaa ent o geeshtireN harf ham , ya'nii "rd"hamii vaRaa "dard" o "chird" ham ham qaafiya ant keh eshaanii Harf-e-ravii yakii ! agar che eshaanii jahlii o burzii yak na ant , ee vaRaa yak na ent keh "dard" e tookaa "d" saraa zabarii o "chird" e tooka "ch" cheera zeerii , ee do'mii darajah ent !hamii vaRaa "dard" o "pad" ham ham qaafiya ant , parchaa keh eshaanii ham "harf-e-ravii" yakkii ! "d" agar che dard e tooka se(3) harf ant o "pad" e tooka do(2) harpant ! ee semi(3rd) daraja e qaafiya ent ! bale, agaaN shaai'rii a vatii matla' tooka qafiya "dard" o "sard" aavu'rtagant guRaa aa dege she'raanii tooka "pad" qaafiya bast na kant ! parchaa keh avvalii miSra' do harf-e-ravii ant "r and d" , lehaaza, ee dege she'raanii tooka ham haNcheeN qaafiya looTeet !haaN, agaaN aa'ii matla' avvalii miSra' qaafiya "dard" ent o du'mii miSra" e qaafiya "pad" yaa "red" ent guRaa aaii qaafiya e pahnaad mastir bit ! Qafiya mudaam hamooda cha bungeej beet keh labzaanii tok e mushtarikah vowel turii aa "long" be bit yaa "short" ham-dap be bant !( bale harf-e-ravii ham zehn a daarag looTeet ! ) baHc sak draaj beet, gappa gavNR kanaaN now, in the light of this rule, biyaa chaareN keh shumey dastooNk e matla' e qaafiya cha kujaa ham-dap bant !do labzant 1. shoohaazag 2. chakkasag yakbarii harkataaN(vowels) na chaareN , balkeN harfaaN(characters) chaareN . ee vaRaa maaraa doenaanii tooka yak harfii haNchii gindaga kayt ka ham-dapant aa "g" ent ! bale ee "harf-e-ravii" bit na kant ! parchaa keh ee "masdar(infinitive)" ent o masdar e harf hijbar "harf-e-ravii" bit na kant nooN pash kaptant 1. shoohaaz 2. chakkaasee do'eenaanii harf-e-ravii e sound yakkii na e "z" dege tavaarii o "s" dege tavaarii neeN gishshet keh idaa Qafiya a harfaanii tavaar (phoneme) na ent, balkeN aayaanii harakat (vowels ) ant ! neeN, chaareeN Harakataanii tavaar cha kujaa yakk ent (turii aa "short" be bit yaa "long" ) bale, biyaae chaareNeshii vaasta maa harfaaN se(3) bahr a bahr kaneeN1. shoo-haa-zag > ishii tooka se (3) vowels hast 1) oo{wow} 2) aa{alif} 3) a{zabar} 2. chak-kaa-sag > ishii tooka ham se(3) vowels hast 1) a{zabar} 2) aa{alif} 3) a{zabar} neeN doe'naanii chaarag a hamii gindag beet ke vowels aanii ham-dapii cha do'mii(2nd) bahr a gishsheet ! ya'nii do'ee labzaanii dohmii bahr a che vowels yak paim ant ! ya'nii 1. haa-zag 2. kaa-sagee do'eeN labz 3 "syllable" vaala ant ! eshaanii avvalii syllable ham-dap na ant ya'nii 1. shoo 2.chak lihaaza ee zaanag bit keh qaafiya cha doomii bahr a gishsheet !eeN rule e bunyaad a ee dastooNke draaheN qaafiya hamii vaRaa bayag looT ant ! o zaahir ent keh "jah-sir-rag" gooN eshaaN ham-dap na ent.haaN, agaaN matla' e took a yak qaafiyaii jah-sir-rag aarag bitteeN, guRaa doeeN vaReeN qafiya ravaa at ! bebaksh et keh debate baaz draaj bit ! ummeet vaaraaN keh shumaa neeN pahmitag, agaaN geeshtir "Explanation" looTey guRaa just bekan et minnat vaaraaNmudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !Zia Baloch Salam o drout,chah del e johlaankiyaaN shome minnavaaran' keh shoma incho detail e sara Qafiya e babata wati muqaif darshaan kot. chounahiya shome gwastagen namdi e dohmii randaa wanag a rand mana shome gapp e mol o muraad sarpad buttoun' o ma wati dohmii miSrah e qaafiya badal hama kotag bale hama wahada aahiye namannag e masteren' sawab eshat keh ma ey allama loutetag keh shoma ey sarhaal e sara geyshter gehrahiye tooka buruway daank may ey degaa nouk bahenden' braat o gohaar ham Qaafiya Pehmayii e durah uSoolan' sarpad bebant. mana shome ey namdi sak doust but o mani nouken' johud hama sher e eshent:aa dega wahad at keh zaheeran' ja jatagnou shap e pasaani uffaarag kojaa shome shor o salaahaani minnavaarRaji
Quote from: Gulab Ghalib Baluch on October 08, 2009, 09:53:36 PMGohar ZahidaShom,e dasthoonk baz jawan inth, labzani red o band sata karzanth, Bala,e mani kor,en aqal yak jagah,e kara na inth.Shoma dastoonk,e 5mi banda aarthag ''DASTE EE SHAARAG".Mani hayalan '' DAST SHAHARAG'' beet,Omet inth k wati na bezanth,en braata sarpad kan,e.minnat warShom,e saro sojani lotokG.G BalochBraat G.G Baloch: Salam o drout,dastoonk e doust daarag o sita e cha del e johlaankiyaaN minnavaaran'braat shome jost " dast e eyshaarag" e babata en'braat hamok handaa baazen labzanii kaar marz kanag e waR o paem e tooka park hast. may neymaga (thoRee hameda keh ma jah mandan', thoree mani bun peerokii molka" har doen labz pah yakken manayaa kaar marz bayant. yani dast e shaarag o dast e ey shaarag. eshanii tawaar e babata (eyshahaar, eyshaar) hamen' gwashan keh lahtey jagaya labz "shahar" a hamencho softly gwashant keh aa tawaar "shaar" dar kaet na keh "shahar"agan man rad nayan' goRaa karachi, pasni, gwadar o ey degaa baazen' handan ishiya softly kaarmarz kanant. agan ma radan' zantkaar mana second kot kanant. shome neiken' wahaganii daahima chamdaar
Gohar ZahidaShom,e dasthoonk baz jawan inth, labzani red o band sata karzanth, Bala,e mani kor,en aqal yak jagah,e kara na inth.Shoma dastoonk,e 5mi banda aarthag ''DASTE EE SHAARAG".Mani hayalan '' DAST SHAHARAG'' beet,Omet inth k wati na bezanth,en braata sarpad kan,e.minnat warShom,e saro sojani lotokG.G Baloch
Quote from: Zahida Raji on October 09, 2009, 08:41:21 PMQuote from: Gulab Ghalib Baluch on October 08, 2009, 09:53:36 PMGohar ZahidaShom,e dasthoonk baz jawan inth, labzani red o band sata karzanth, Bala,e mani kor,en aqal yak jagah,e kara na inth.Shoma dastoonk,e 5mi banda aarthag ''DASTE EE SHAARAG".Mani hayalan '' DAST SHAHARAG'' beet,Omet inth k wati na bezanth,en braata sarpad kan,e.minnat warShom,e saro sojani lotokG.G BalochBraat G.G Baloch: Salam o drout,dastoonk e doust daarag o sita e cha del e johlaankiyaaN minnavaaran'braat shome jost " dast e eyshaarag" e babata en'braat hamok handaa baazen labzanii kaar marz kanag e waR o paem e tooka park hast. may neymaga (thoRee hameda keh ma jah mandan', thoree mani bun peerokii molka" har doen labz pah yakken manayaa kaar marz bayant. yani dast e shaarag o dast e ey shaarag. eshanii tawaar e babata (eyshahaar, eyshaar) hamen' gwashan keh lahtey jagaya labz "shahar" a hamencho softly gwashant keh aa tawaar "shaar" dar kaet na keh "shahar"agan man rad nayan' goRaa karachi, pasni, gwadar o ey degaa baazen' handan ishiya softly kaarmarz kanant. agan ma radan' zantkaar mana second kot kanant. shome neiken' wahaganii daahima chamdaar Gohaar RajiSalamat Baat,yShaom,y raast anth k har hand o jagaha gaalwaarani taha tafawath beet.Balay ba,ed inth k nebeshtha cho gaalwaara zoorag mabeeth, parcha k ye hesaaba yakk,en labz baar,en chencho wada lekkag kapeet,Pa darwar , Urdua baaz,en hand o jahaan "SAHAB" a "SAAB" gwashanth, Balay nebeshta "SAHAB" kananth,Dohmi gapp esh int k "SHAHARAG"a "SHAARAG" ya "EYSHAARAG" nebeshta bekan,e ta maana badal beet,y. Parcha k ye har 3en joda joda mana dayanth.Pa Darwar:SHAHARAG: Draaj kanag ya taal kanag, (Syad ganj /586)SHAARAG ya SHARAYAG: mazan,en naadurahi ya mehnat,y bardasht kanag o rakkag.( Syad ganj /564-65)EYSHAARAG: cheeze,ye "POINT OUT" kanag.Noon shom,e dastoonk,y hamy banda "DASTE EYSHARAG" ya "DASTE SHAARAG" hr hesaba bechar,y aa manaha na danth.Gohar a tahna mani mareshtant o man wat "tefl-e-maktaby" han, a shome mehrwani int k maara cheze darbarag,y maoh raseet, agan man radan ta mana sarpad bekan ith.Modaam sabz o aabaad baat,yShomy BraatGulabGhalib Baluch
trawalan pad e lapashan dan kadikaey bezant gutt gereen chehalag koja. adda tai ae dastonk mana baz dost both chah tai pesaregeen dastonkan che mana washtir both agan tao wati juhdaan hame wada barja bedare chod o shartireen shir nibeshta koth kane tai kaster , manzil
thai dasthonk a wanaga cha paad maana baz washi booth. chya k maan hamma peker dashthag ath ha maan deesth.maan e gaapa heeran boothagan k mai baloch zalbool e thaka parcha pushtha anth.singer o poet chagerdani taha yak ballaheen role e aada kanan. baloch zalboolani babatha man ( Baaskani Diwan - Info Center----- Personal and Social Problems---subject An All-men affairs ) marchi bazeen chezee nebeshtha kuthga.ha wahdee maan thai topic a sara na yathkagay than.wahd raseeth allami cham shank e beday goon.har kassi wathi pekro sooch e beeth. bally mana e desthonk mubarak kazi a hyalay chahrraga danth.baz washeen pekro hyal ith. Dastoonk: gaar syaaen' raahe e shohaazag koja man kojaa o zend e chakkasag koja na-tawameen' wahag e purseegen' del nou del a mehraan' goun palgaarag koja aa dega wahad-at keh zaheeran' ja jatag nou shap e paasanii jaa-serrag koja wat wati raahshoonii a rad kaptagoun' nou degaa hambrah e chamdaarag kojaa waaye bag-bahatii suchat o bunn geraat tao kojaa, tai dast e eeshaarag kojaa del tai waahish nah kam tarraan' kadi Hers e baazaara del e daarag koja sarwaten' bey menzelaanii pad gerag waahag e rastag nou darwaazag kojaa trawalaan’ paad e lapaashan' daan' kadi kae bezaan' guT geer en' chihaalag kojaa
deeren diwwan e sara wati hech shaairee ma nadatag. zee sobhe sara braat Kambar Qazi e dastoonk (http://baask.com/diwwan/index.php?topic=4815.0) want delaa aahiye zameen o beher sak doust but o damaana mani ham dela chey yak dastoonk e dar atk nou shoma ishiya bechare o bogoshe keh chincho aap e tooka en'. shome shor o salahanii chamdaar Dastoonk:gaar syaaen' raahe e shohaazag kojaman kojaa o zend e chakkasag kojana-tawameen' wahag e purseegen' delnou del a mehraan' goun palgaarag kojaaa dega wahad at keh zaheeran' ja jatagnou shap e paasaani uffaarag kojaa wat wati raahshoonii a rad kaptagoun'nou degaa hambrah e chamdaarag kojaawaaye bag-bahatii suchat o bunn geraattao kojaa, dastaanii tai shaarag kojaatao kojaa, tai dast e eeshaarag kojaadel tai waahish nah kam tarraan' kadi Hers e baazaara del e daarag kojaasarwaten' bey menzelaanii pad geragwaahag e rastag nou darwaazag kojaatrawalaan’ paad e lapaashan' daan' kadikae bezaan' guT geer en' chihaalag kojaaZahida Raees Raji