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deeren diwwan e sara wati hech shaairee ma nadatag. zee sobhe sara braat Kambar Qazi e dastoonk (http://baask.com/diwwan/index.php?topic=4815.0) want delaa aahiye zameen o beher sak doust but o damaana mani ham dela chey yak dastoonk e dar atk nou shoma ishiya bechare  o bogoshe keh chincho aap e tooka en'.

shome shor o salahanii chamdaar

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Dastoonk:

gaar syaaen' raahe e shohaazag koja
man kojaa o zend e chakkasag koja

na-tawameen' wahag e purseegen' del
nou del a mehraan' goun palgaarag koja

aa dega wahad at keh zaheeran' ja jatag
nou shap e paasaani uffaarag kojaa

wat wati raahshoonii a rad kaptagoun'
nou degaa hambrah e chamdaarag kojaa

waaye bag-bahatii suchat o bunn geraat
tao kojaa, dastaanii tai shaarag kojaa
tao kojaa, tai dast e eeshaarag kojaa

del tai waahish nah kam tarraan' kadi
Hers e baazaara del e daarag kojaa

sarwaten' bey menzelaanii pad gerag
waahag e rastag nou darwaazag kojaa

trawalaan’ paad e lapaashan' daan' kadi
kae bezaan' guT geer en' chihaalag kojaa


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Re: "man koja o zind e chakkas koja" Raji e nouken' dastoonk
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2009, 09:34:30 PM »
adi tae dast sak jowan int bale any yak bandy hayl mani samja nayak.man wati wada manh kot. bale man wat mutmen na both un
a dega wahd aahat k zaheeran ja jata,
non shapy paas ani ja sirag koja.
ida ancho guman bet k tao wazan e baroberi e wasta jaly band a sirag ahoratag.
paas e ja sirag chona nokain trakebe. bale filal mani samja nayahaga int, aga tara wahd raseeth paman manah bikany.
dega dastonk jowan int o mana dost botag.
 minat var


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Re: "man koja o zind e chakkas koja" Raji e nouken' dastoonk
« Reply #2 on: October 07, 2009, 10:04:54 PM »
salaam o droot,

shumey har nookeN dastooNk cha pesari a shartir bayaan ent !
maashaa Allah shumey dast nooN shar nishtagant !
manaa shumey tavaameN she'r yak pa yakk a dost bant !
mana cha dursaaN geehstir matla" dost bit !
mana ummeet na bakeN saddak ent keh shumaa pa vat Balochi a mazaneN naamii eer kaney !

Allah shume kumak-kaar be bit Aaameen

shumey hair vaah

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Re: "man koja o zind e chakkas koja" Raji e nouken' dastoonk
« Reply #3 on: October 08, 2009, 08:33:16 AM »
adi tae dast sak jowan int bale any yak bandy hayl mani samja nayak.man wati wada manh kot. bale man wat mutmen na both un
a dega wahd aahat k zaheeran ja jata,
non shapy paas ani ja sirag koja.
ida ancho guman bet k tao wazan e baroberi e wasta jaly band a sirag ahoratag.
paas e ja sirag chona nokain trakebe. bale filal mani samja nayahaga int, aga tara wahd raseeth paman manah bikany.
dega dastonk jowan int o mana dost botag.
 minat var

Salam o drout braat Hasan Janan:

Shome namdi e minnavaarn'

shome ey sher e babata jost kotag:

"
aa dega wahad-at keh zaheeran' ja jatag
nou shap e paasanii jaa-serrag koja"

braat ey sher e mana eshent keh aa degaa wahad buttagan keh wahade shap e paasan' zaaheeran jatag ma jaa serretagoun' nou chush naen'

may neymaga "Ja serrag" wahaba chey "pach larzag" e mana yaa kaet.

chush ham gwashant "doushii tao waba chey ja serretage" agan na chush ham " "tao parcha waabe purra ja serray? " agan na " tai ja serrag a chukka bost kot"

ma edaa shomara ja serrag e sahen shakl daatan'. omaiten' nou shoma chah shera sarpad e.

shome neiken wahaga o shor o salahanii daahima chamdaar

Shome adda
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Re: "man koja o zind e chakkas koja" Raji e nouken' dastoonk
« Reply #4 on: October 08, 2009, 09:53:36 PM »
Gohar Zahida

Shom,e dasthoonk baz jawan inth, labzani red o band sata karzanth, Bala,e mani kor,en aqal yak jagah,e kara na inth.

Shoma dastoonk,e 5mi banda aarthag ''DASTE EE SHAARAG".
Mani hayalan '' DAST SHAHARAG'' beet,

Omet inth k wati na bezanth,en braata sarpad kan,e.
minnat war

Shom,e saro sojani lotok
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adi minat var,
hah ahahaha hahaha ahaha hahaha ahaha. man sak kanditag, parchaky man hairan atan a labz paaas int ya pas int matlab maish, man gusht shayad maishani ja sirag koja. roman a paas o pas e toka frak naist at. pada urdu version a mani kayal at k balkina proof e mistake e bota.
bale adi amy sher e sara tao kamo char o tapas bikany. k a nizorain bandy mani nizd a.
minat var


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adi minat var,
hah ahahaha hahaha ahaha hahaha ahaha. man sak kanditag, parchaky man hairan atan a labz paaas int ya pas int matlab maish, man gusht shayad maishani ja sirag koja. roman a paas o pas e toka frak naist at. pada urdu version a mani kayal at k balkina proof e mistake e bota.
bale adi amy sher e sara tao kamo char o tapas bikany. k a nizorain bandy mani nizd a.
minat var

Mani wajaen braat:

Salamat baate,

mani  hayala tao noukii waaba chey paad atkage paemeshka cham mayam nakanagayan' (just kidding )

pas yani meish (پس یعنی میش ) o paas yanii shapaani paas ( پاس یعنی شپانی پاس) e nibissag a ma rad nageptagoun'

pada pas e sarrag ( پس ءِسّرگ )o paasaanii ja serrag e ( پاسانی جا سِرّگ )tooka zabar o zeyr e park peydaken'.

braat mani accent makkurani en' o tai accent sarawani en' edaa sher e wazan e tooka tara agan park gendag kaet aa pakat waang e sara ent. tao ishiyaa mani accent e tooka buwaan tara wazan e hech radi gendag naet :)

yak interesting gappey tara bogoshan aa eshent keh ey dastoonk e Inpage e taha type kanouk yak Balochi zaantkaaren', ma buttagataoun goRaa allama radi kotaga. :)

pah review ma ey dastoonk a zaantkaaranii neymaga ham deym dayan chaaran' agan hoodaa chey red signal rast goRa ma allamaa edaa dayanii.

shome namdi o chamshaank e chah wati del e johlaankiyaaN minnaavaarn'

shome neiken wahagani daahima chamdaar

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adi minat var,
hah ahahaha hahaha ahaha hahaha ahaha. man sak kanditag, parchaky man hairan atan a labz paaas int ya pas int matlab maish, man gusht shayad maishani ja sirag koja. roman a paas o pas e toka frak naist at. pada urdu version a mani kayal at k balkina proof e mistake e bota.
bale adi amy sher e sara tao kamo char o tapas bikany. k a nizorain bandy mani nizd a.
minat var

Mani wajaen braat:

Salamat baate,

mani  hayala tao noukii waaba chey paad atkage paemeshka cham mayam nakanagayan' (just kidding )

pas yani meish (پس یعنی میش ) o paas yanii shapaani paas ( پاس یعنی شپانی پاس) e nibissag a ma rad nageptagoun'

pada pas e sarrag ( پس ءِسّرگ )o paasaanii ja serrag e ( پاسانی جا سِرّگ )tooka zabar o zeyr e park peydaken'.

braat mani accent makkurani en' o tai accent sarawani en' edaa sher e wazan e tooka tara agan park gendag kaet aa pakat waang e sara ent. tao ishiyaa mani accent e tooka buwaan tara wazan e hech radi gendag naet :)

yak interesting gappey tara bogoshan aa eshent keh ey dastoonk e Inpage e taha type kanouk yak Balochi zaantkaaren', ma buttagataoun goRaa allama radi kotaga. :)

pah review ma ey dastoonk a zaantkaaranii neymaga ham deym dayan chaaran' agan hoodaa chey red signal rast goRa ma allamaa edaa dayanii.

shome namdi o chamshaank e chah wati del e johlaankiyaaN minnaavaarn'

shome neiken wahagani daahima chamdaar

Zahida



salaam o droot,

chusheN debate pa sikkag a sak kumak dayant !

shumey habar raastii keh "accent" farq hast ent, bale edaa gap accent e na ent, balkeN "qaafiya" e gent
edaa qaafiya e gisheenokeN harp "Alif" ent ! haNcho keh

shoo-haa-zag
chak-kaa-sag
pal-gaa-rag
chee-haa -lag  etc...

nooN, "jah-sir-rag" eshaanii goma chooN fit bit ?

idaa che zaanag bit keh , miSra' vazn e lihaaz a va baraabar ent, bale qaafiya ham-dap na ent !

shumey passav e vadaareegaaN

mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !

Zia Baloch

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                                    (F)       Dastoonk:  (F)

                              gaar syaaen' raahe e shohaazag koja
                              man kojaa o zend e chakkasag koja

                              na-tawameen' wahag e purseegen' del
                              nou del a mehraan' goun palgaarag koja

                              aa dega wahad-at keh zaheeran' ja jatag
                               nou shap e paasanii jaa-serrag koja
 
                               wat wati raahshoonii a rad kaptagoun'
                               nou degaa hambrah e chamdaarag kojaa

                                waaye bag-bahatii suchat o bunn geraat
                                tao kojaa, tai dast e eeshaarag kojaa

                                 del tai waahish nah kam tarraan' kadi
                                 Hers e baazaara del e daarag koja

                                  sarwaten' bey menzelaanii pad gerag
                                  waahag e rastag nou darwaazag kojaa

                                   trawalaan’ paad e lapaashan' daan' kadi
                                    kae bezaan' guT geer en' chihaalag kojaa
                                                                                                        Shome-kaster




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Gohar Zahida

Shom,e dasthoonk baz jawan inth, labzani red o band sata karzanth, Bala,e mani kor,en aqal yak jagah,e kara na inth.

Shoma dastoonk,e 5mi banda aarthag ''DASTE EE SHAARAG".
Mani hayalan '' DAST SHAHARAG'' beet,

Omet inth k wati na bezanth,en braata sarpad kan,e.
minnat war

Shom,e saro sojani lotok
G.G Baloch

Braat G.G Baloch:
Salam o drout,

dastoonk e doust daarag o sita e cha del e johlaankiyaaN minnavaaran'
braat shome jost " dast e eyshaarag" e babata en'

braat hamok handaa baazen labzanii kaar marz kanag e waR o paem e tooka park hast.
may neymaga (thoRee hameda keh ma jah mandan', thoree mani bun peerokii molka" har doen labz pah yakken manayaa kaar marz bayant.

yani dast e shaarag o dast e ey shaarag.

eshanii tawaar e babata (eyshahaar, eyshaar) hamen' gwashan keh lahtey jagaya labz "shahar" a hamencho softly gwashant keh aa tawaar "shaar" dar kaet na keh "shahar"

agan man rad nayan' goRaa karachi, pasni, gwadar o ey degaa baazen' handan ishiya softly kaarmarz kanant.

agan ma radan' zantkaar mana second kot kanant.

shome neiken' wahaganii daahima chamdaar
 wati raaj e heyr loutouk



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salaam o droot,

chusheN debate pa sikkag a sak kumak dayant !

shumey habar raastii keh "accent" farq hast ent, bale edaa gap accent e na ent, balkeN "qaafiya" e gent
edaa qaafiya e gisheenokeN harp "Alif" ent ! haNcho keh

shoo-haa-zag
chak-kaa-sag
pal-gaa-rag
chee-haa -lag  etc...

nooN, "jah-sir-rag" eshaanii goma chooN fit bit ?

idaa che zaanag bit keh , miSra' vazn e lihaaz a va baraabar ent, bale qaafiya ham-dap na ent !

shumey passav e vadaareegaaN

mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !

Zia Baloch

Waja Zia Baloch: Salam o drout,

shome sar o souj sar o chamman' bale yak gappey e babata ma kammo zanag loutan' agan man radan'
ilm e qaafiya e usoolent keh sher e awali o dohmii miSrah e taha aahiree hamencho harf yak bant aahan' deyma baarag laazument. aahiya chey peysar e harf badal but kanant bale aahiye harkat (zabar, zeyr o peysh) e yak buwag laazument.

Shohaazag sho-haa-zag(zag) zey zabar o gaaf jazm
chakkasag chak-ka-sag (sag) seen zabar o gaaf jazm
palgaarag pal-ga-rag (rag)   ray zabar o gaaf jazm
ey-shaarag ey-sha-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazm
dar-wazag  dar-wa-zag (zag) zay zabar o gaaf jazm
del-e-daarag ..da-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazm
cheyhaalag chey-ha-lag(lag)  laam zabar o gaaf jazm
jaa serrag  ja-ser-rag(rag)     ray zabar o gaaf jazm

ey durah qaafiya haani tooka bashamol "jaa serrag" ey usool gounen'.
(parcha keh ilm e qaafiya e rule Balochi o Urdu e yakkant pameshka ey sarhaal e sara hamen gwashag buwagaen' http://www.sarwarraz.com/adabipage_ur.php?id=349&pageid=7&title=rt-382.gif)

nou shome gwashag keh "alif" keh modfied alphabet a chey  peysar peydaken bahed ma aahiya ham deyma bedaaran' goRa mani cham nizara ilm e qaafiya e usool e tooka modfield harf e peysar e harf e daarag e hech pabandi neyst. ey shaahir e wati saraent keh aa Dastoonk e tooka moosiqiyat peda kanag e haatira ishiyaa bedaarit.


agan' ma wati zaant e hesaab a radoun mani rahshooniyaa bekane.

Minnavaar

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salaam o droot,

chusheN debate pa sikkag a sak kumak dayant !

shumey habar raastii keh "accent" farq hast ent, bale edaa gap accent e na ent, balkeN "qaafiya" e gent
edaa qaafiya e gisheenokeN harp "Alif" ent ! haNcho keh

shoo-haa-zag
chak-kaa-sag
pal-gaa-rag
chee-haa -lag  etc...

nooN, "jah-sir-rag" eshaanii goma chooN fit bit ?

idaa che zaanag bit keh , miSra' vazn e lihaaz a va baraabar ent, bale qaafiya ham-dap na ent !

shumey passav e vadaareegaaN

mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !

Zia Baloch

Waja Zia Baloch: Salam o drout,

shome sar o souj sar o chamman' bale yak gappey e babata ma kammo zanag loutan' agan man radan'
ilm e qaafiya e usoolent keh sher e awali o dohmii miSrah e taha aahiree hamencho harf yak bant aahan' deyma baarag laazument. aahiya chey peysar e harf badal but kanant bale aahiye harkat (zabar, zeyr o peysh) e yak buwag laazument.

Shohaazag sho-haa-zag(zag) zey zabar o gaaf jazm
chakkasag chak-ka-sag (sag) seen zabar o gaaf jazm
palgaarag pal-ga-rag (rag)   ray zabar o gaaf jazm
ey-shaarag ey-sha-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazm
dar-wazag  dar-wa-zag (zag) zay zabar o gaaf jazm
del-e-daarag ..da-rag (rag) ray zabar o gaaf jazm
cheyhaalag chey-ha-lag(lag)  laam zabar o gaaf jazm
jaa serrag  ja-ser-rag(rag)     ray zabar o gaaf jazm

ey durah qaafiya haani tooka bashamol "jaa serrag" ey usool gounen'.
(parcha keh ilm e qaafiya e rule Balochi o Urdu e yakkant pameshka ey sarhaal e sara hamen gwashag buwagaen' http://www.sarwarraz.com/adabipage_ur.php?id=349&pageid=7&title=rt-382.gif)

nou shome gwashag keh "alif" keh modfied alphabet a chey  peysar peydaken bahed ma aahiya ham deyma bedaaran' goRa mani cham nizara ilm e qaafiya e usool e tooka modfield harf e peysar e harf e daarag e hech pabandi neyst. ey shaahir e wati saraent keh aa Dastoonk e tooka moosiqiyat peda kanag e haatira ishiyaa bedaarit.


agan' ma wati zaant e hesaab a radoun mani rahshooniyaa bekane.

Minnavaar



w/salaam,

man shumey passav pa dil-jamii vant ! o shumy daatageN Link ham chaaret . padaa ham man vatii gapp e saraa ooshtaatagaaN, parchaa keh

ee link keh shumaa raah daatag at , shumaa manii hamii bugusheet keh shumaa ee link e toke nibishtaaNka kujaam cheeza pa vata as a daleel zeerey ?
man teevageN link a pa shumey use kutageN qaafiya"jah-sir-rag" e vaasta daleel na dest ! parchaa keh ee cha aahaaN jitaayeN cheezii, chetor ? ........... bale !

avallii gap esh ent keh maa raa chetor qaafiya geshsheenagii ent ? ya'nii cha kujaa maa ee gapp a sarjam kaneN keh chedaa Qafiya e ham-dapii bungeej beet, choo ke zabar, ya'nii short-vowel(zabar) yaa long-vowel(alif) etc..

ee gappanii pahmag vaasta zaroorii ent keh pesara maa bzaaneN keh Qafiya che balaahe  bigsmile

Qafiya e hayaal har zubaan e adab e tooka hast ! macalan

Qafiya (Rhyme)

in English =A rhyme is a repetition of similar sounds in two or more words and is most often used in poetry and songs.

English adab e tooka Qafiya e ta'reef(definition) hamesh ent, eshii tookaa "sound" (harfaanii yaa keh harakataanii ) focus kanag looTeet !

bale English e Qaafiya e rah-o-rahbaNd(rules) cha French a zeerag bettagaaN , bale Balochi , Urdu, e rules cha Arabi, Farsi o Hindi a che zeerag bant !

neeN biyaae chaareN keh Balochi yaa Urdu e tooka ishee definition che ent

Qafiya (Balochi, Urdu e tahaa ):

hancheN ham-dapeeN labz keh aayaanii "rhythmic" jahlii o burzii yak paim be bant ! ba i'tebaar e vowels , yaa harfaanii tavaar ham-dap bi bant.

neeN gap esh ent keh Qafiye "ryhthmic" jahlii o burzii cha kujaa geshsheenga beet ? eshii vaastaa i'lm-e-qaafiya e yek shaaheemii keh aa'ii a "Harf-e-ravii" gushant , zaanag looTeet.

Harf-e-ravii e pajjar chush bit kant keh hamaa doyeN qafiya keh shaai'r aayaan a vati "matla' (bungeejii she'r)" do'eN misra'(line) kaareet , agaaN aayaanii mushtarikah vowels (short/long) dar bekaney,
goRaa aa labz e ma'naa begishhet , i.e. yak matla"ii e avvalii line pa labz" dard-maNd" saraa kuTTeet , o, du'mii line pa labz"niyaaz-maNd" saraa kuTTeet. eshaanii mushtarikah harf "maNd" ent , agaaN eshii a dar bekaney guRaa labz chush bant "dard" o "niyaaz" hamii labzaanii keh ma'naa ham geshhetag , eshaanii aaKhrii harf ('d' o 'z')"Harf-e-ravii" gushag beet !

eshaanii harf-e-ravii yak na ent lihaaza ee ham qaafiya na ant ! haaN, "dard" o "fard" ham-dapa ant, parchaa keh ishaanii harf-e-ravii yakii ! , ee ham dapii avvalli darja e gent, parchaa keh do'eenaanii jahlii-o-burzii ham yak vaRaa ent o geeshtireN harf ham , ya'nii "rd"
hamii vaRaa "dard" o "chird" ham ham qaafiya ant keh eshaanii Harf-e-ravii yakii ! agar che eshaanii jahlii o burzii yak na ant , ee vaRaa yak na ent keh "dard" e tookaa "d" saraa zabarii o "chird" e tooka "ch" cheera zeerii , ee do'mii darajah ent !
hamii vaRaa "dard" o "pad" ham ham qaafiya ant , parchaa keh eshaanii ham "harf-e-ravii" yakkii ! "d" agar che dard e tooka se(3) harf ant o "pad" e tooka do(2) harpant ! ee semi(3rd) daraja e qaafiya ent ! 

bale, agaaN shaai'rii a vatii matla' tooka qafiya "dard" o "sard" aavu'rtagant guRaa aa dege she'raanii tooka "pad" qaafiya bast na kant ! parchaa keh avvalii miSra' do harf-e-ravii ant "r and d" , lehaaza, ee dege she'raanii tooka ham haNcheeN qaafiya looTeet !

haaN, agaaN aa'ii matla' avvalii miSra' qaafiya "dard" ent o du'mii miSra" e qaafiya "pad" yaa "red" ent guRaa aaii qaafiya e pahnaad mastir bit !


Qafiya mudaam hamooda cha bungeej beet keh labzaanii tok e mushtarikah vowel turii aa "long" be bit yaa "short" ham-dap be bant !( bale harf-e-ravii ham zehn a daarag looTeet ! )

baHc sak draaj beet, gappa gavNR kanaaN  bigsmile

now, in the light of this rule, biyaa chaareN keh shumey dastooNk e matla' e qaafiya cha kujaa ham-dap bant !
do labzant 1. shoohaazag  2. chakkasag

yakbarii harkataaN(vowels) na chaareN , balkeN harfaaN(characters) chaareN . ee vaRaa maaraa doenaanii tooka yak harfii haNchii gindaga kayt ka ham-dapant aa "g" ent ! bale ee "harf-e-ravii" bit na kant ! parchaa keh ee "masdar(infinitive)" ent o masdar e harf hijbar "harf-e-ravii" bit na kant

nooN pash kaptant 1. shoohaaz  2. chakkaas

ee do'eenaanii harf-e-ravii e sound yakkii na e "z" dege tavaarii o "s" dege tavaarii

neeN gishshet keh idaa Qafiya a harfaanii tavaar (phoneme) na ent, balkeN aayaanii harakat (vowels ) ant !

neeN, chaareeN Harakataanii tavaar cha kujaa yakk ent (turii aa "short" be bit yaa "long" ) bale, biyaae chaareN

eshii vaasta maa harfaaN se(3) bahr a bahr kaneeN

1. shoo-haa-zag >  ishii tooka se (3) vowels hast 1) oo{wow} 2) aa{alif} 3) a{zabar} 

2. chak-kaa-sag > ishii tooka ham se(3) vowels hast 1) a{zabar} 2) aa{alif} 3) a{zabar}

neeN doe'naanii chaarag a hamii gindag beet ke vowels aanii ham-dapii cha do'mii(2nd) bahr a gishsheet ! ya'nii do'ee labzaanii dohmii bahr a che vowels yak paim ant ! ya'nii 1. haa-zag 2. kaa-sag

ee do'eeN labz 3 "syllable" vaala ant ! eshaanii avvalii syllable ham-dap na ant ya'nii 1. shoo 2.chak 

lihaaza ee zaanag bit keh qaafiya cha doomii bahr a gishsheet !

eeN rule e bunyaad a ee dastooNke draaheN qaafiya hamii vaRaa bayag looT ant !  o zaahir ent keh "jah-sir-rag" gooN eshaaN ham-dap na ent.

haaN, agaaN matla' e took a yak qaafiyaii jah-sir-rag aarag bitteeN, guRaa doeeN vaReeN qafiya ravaa at !

bebaksh et keh debate baaz draaj bit !  bigsmile

ummeet vaaraaN keh shumaa neeN pahmitag, agaaN geeshtir "Explanation" looTey guRaa just bekan et :)

minnat vaaraaN

mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatey !

Zia Baloch
 



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