How you mean to me

[Baloch Prince]

Hi friends plz check my poem...that either it's sendable to my someone 


How should I express, how you mean to me
How should I explain, you really live in me
Whenever you talk to me I really fly
While with out you, I just let my thoughts fly
Your nearness is with me at every moment

I don’t know, how much I am going far
I don’t know, what results I will be facing
I just know , that I am not going to give up

I will hear, your heart beating with my ears
I will see your heart through your eyes
I will see, your deep eyes from near
I will see, who is shyer in us
I will see, the level of honor in us
I will see, how I will stop my tears front of you
I will see, how I will say to you the first word
I will see, the tremble of my lips
I will see, how I can find words
To express you, how you mean to me
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[ღ° NaZgOl ღ]

v.nice....
im also a student of the same feild as urs >> poems =)


How should I express, what you mean to me
How should I explain, you really live in me
Whenever you talk to me I really fly
While without you, I just let my thoughts fly
Your nearness is with me at every moment

I don’t know, how far i am going  ((( so dat it rhyms wid facing ))))
I don’t know, what results I will be facing
I just know , that I am not going to give up

I will hear your heart beating with my ears
I will see your heart through your eyes
I will see, your deep eyes from near
I will see, who is shyer in us (( in >> between, among < but among is for more than 2 ppl ..so here between )(shyer >> its either shier or more shy ))
I will see, the level of honor in us
I will see, how I will stop my tears infront of you
I will see, how I will say to you the first word
I will see, the tremble of my lips
I will see, how I can find words
To express to you, what you mean to me


correct me if im wrong =)

[Baloch Prince]

dear sister thanks for ur kind advices...I hv corrected,plz check



How should I express, what you mean to me  (hmmm..do u think 'what' is right here)
How should I explain, you really live in me
Whenever you talk to me I really fly
While without you, I let my thoughts fly      ( it is better wid out 'just' isn't)
Your nearness is with me at every moment

I don’t know, how far i am going               ( it is nice now)             
I don’t know, what results I will be facing
I just know , that I am not going to give up

I will hear your heart beating with my ears
I will see your heart through your eyes
I will see, your deep eyes from near
I will see, who is shyer between us
I will see, the level of honor between us
I will see, how I will stop my tears infront of you
I will see, how I will say to you the first word
I will see, the tremble of my lips
I will see, how I can find words
To express to you, what you mean to me  (wat is diff bt whay & how)


Thanks

[ღ° NaZgOl ღ]

wellcome ...

u 4got 2 change shyer >>> shier or more shy << no shyer =)

n what u mean 2 me is correct =)
if u want to use how >>> it should be >>> how much you mean to me .....

but i think what u mean to me sounds better =)

 

[Baloch Prince]

Sister...check it now


How should I express, what you mean to me 
How should I explain, you really live in me
Whenever you talk to me I really fly
While without you, I let my thoughts fly     
Your nearness is with me at every moment

I don’t know, how far i am going                     
I don’t know, what results I will be facing
I just know , that I am not going to give up

I will hear your heart beating with my ears
I will see your heart through your eyes
I will see, your deep eyes from near
I will see, who is more shy between us
I will see, the level of honor between us
I will see, how I will stop my tears infront of you
I will see, how I will say to you the first word
I will see, the tremble of my lips
I will see, how I can find words
To express to you, what you mean to me


Thanks

[Amina Baloushi]

very nice

[MIR JIHAND BALOCH]

TREMENDOUS BROTHER KEEP IT UP!

[Baloch Prince]

thanks braath TANHA.....

Thanks Amina

[Bint Al Moon]

Veryyyy Niceeeee  Imraaaaaaaan

[Baloch Prince]

Thank u sister Bint...

[fairybaloch]

very nice  keep it up

[Jahan Baloch]

   jowan BRat

[Baloch Prince]

Thanks jahan & kokir 

[ashnoor+mehlab]

beautiful  poem...brother keep it up

[Baloch Prince]

Thanks sister...