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Offline Baloch Prince

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How I wish that I could catch you
« on: February 09, 2010, 03:23:27 PM »
My Poem :)

How I wish to catch you
The unseen blowing wind
Ask you to be my true envoy
Who I would trust
Would you go and find my beloved
As you arrive at her door sill
Do not fear
Go and find my beloved
Her eyes will reveal her
You feel wonder as you see her
A moment she smiles
Another goes in deep thinking
A moment of shyness
Another of dancing
(She will call my name)

Oh wind
When you find her
Spread my fragrance
Then she will know
Where the wind comes from
She will breathe deeply and smile
Spread sweet smell
From newly blossomed flowers
Let her fall in love
When she sleeps
Never go near to her
Wait behind the window
Wait till she wakes up
Wait till she opens the window
Wait till she takes sweet yawns
Turn your eyes and say loudly;
”God preserve you from evil eyes”

Then just slightly go near
Catch some tidal air of her breaths
And bring it to me
Oh dear wind
How I wish that I could catch you.

Offline MIR JIHAND BALOCH

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2010, 04:24:39 PM »
TREMENDOUS  o|||

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2010, 05:15:34 PM »
 (ff) minnat waar braath :)

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2010, 05:33:25 PM »
EXCELLENT |||o
MIRROR IS MY  BEST FRIEND BECOZ WHEN I CRY IT NEVER LAUGHS

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #4 on: February 09, 2010, 07:32:18 PM »
Thanks...kokir

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2010, 02:32:13 PM »
whoa thumbs up !!!!!!!  o|||

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2010, 11:42:43 PM »
Thanks sister :)

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2010, 06:52:09 PM »
EXCELLENT

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #8 on: February 12, 2010, 09:28:58 PM »
Thanks Amina :)

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #9 on: February 13, 2010, 04:10:37 PM »
Excellent bigsmile

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #10 on: February 14, 2010, 11:14:38 PM »
Thank u sister Bint Al Moon....

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #11 on: February 15, 2010, 12:37:53 AM »
  Excelant Bro   (ff)  o|||

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Re: How I wish that I could catch you
« Reply #12 on: February 16, 2010, 12:56:47 PM »
Thank u Brother.... (ff)