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Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« on: April 06, 2010, 04:54:53 PM »
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Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret.

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Chakkas band sheri diwwan e haatera Hameed Mauj e Perband
« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2010, 10:56:27 AM »
Chakkas band sheri diwwan e sara Hameed Mauj e Perband.

Braat Hameed Mauj a ey dastoonk 20 minute a nebeshta kotag o mani sara deym daatag ma louTan ey dega baask ham bahar buzourant.


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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2010, 06:05:19 PM »

salaam o droot,

baaz vashsheN kaarii bungeej biyaagaa ent maashaa Allah ! allam a ee pa Baloch raaj o Balochi labzaaNk a balaaheeN mistaag ee !
Balochi version (image) 2 typo buttag eshaaN bichaar
1. "tarii" >> ="taraHii"
2. "taKhtii" >> = "taqtee' "

yak just ee ham kanaaN

ee miSra' muraddaf ee yaa Gher muraddaf ? yaa'nii eshii e tahaa "kanaaN" radeef ent yaa qaafiyah ? yaa keh dooeN butt kanant ?

shumay kastir

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 06:08:42 PM »
salam brat...burzaye 2en..shairan abaid..dega shiar wazana na ant.bebaksh blye

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #4 on: April 10, 2010, 07:19:10 PM »
Chaa Zia Baloch,  Noor Jamal o degaa zaantkaaran' chizzey jost:

Eda pah chakkaas bandiyaa band en':

"Del mani deewaanagen' man choun' kanan'"

bezaan "noon" e tawaar kapagaen' bezaan "noon gunna en' bale braat Hameed a "noon" e tawaar chest kotag

awali jost:  noon e tawaar e chistiyaa vazn e taha chey park kaet?.

dohmii jost: chakkasbandi dastoonkani sara radeef badal kanag e ijazat hast yaa neyst? (turi aa badalii sak kasanen' bibit anchush keh braat Hameed a kotag "noon gunna" e jagaha "noon" bastag)

sehmii jost Qafiya e babata mardom aazaaten' yaa enna?

anchush braat Hameed a zurtag:

del mani deewaanagen' man choun kanan'
kaagadey dardaanii par tau goun kanaan'

bezaan aahiya qaafila zurtag choun, goun, hoon, rahshoon etc

man agan ey banda buzuraan' goRa man ey waR nebeshtak kanan':

wat sara delwaaragen' man choun' kanaan'
cha mana bey-zaanagen' man choun' kanaan'

meher e baazaara satar bey-meheri ent
del mani deewaanagen' man choun' kanaan'*****

eemnii louTant del o arwaah pada
del pada oomaanagen' man choun kanan'

ey misaal e taha man qaafiyaa zuratg " delwaaragen', del-maanagen', beyzaanagen', oomaanagen'"



Shome passav e rahchaar

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #5 on: April 10, 2010, 07:48:27 PM »

salaam o droot,

baaz vashsheN kaarii bungeej biyaagaa ent maashaa Allah ! allam a ee pa Baloch raaj o Balochi labzaaNk a balaaheeN mistaag ee !
Balochi version (image) 2 typo buttag eshaaN bichaar
1. "tarii" >> ="taraHii"
2. "taKhtii" >> = "taqtee' "

yak just ee ham kanaaN

ee miSra' muraddaf ee yaa Gher muraddaf ? yaa'nii eshii e tahaa "kanaaN" radeef ent yaa qaafiyah ? yaa keh dooeN butt kanant ?

shumay kastir

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2010, 10:56:14 PM »
salam o drout waja zia noor jamal adda zahida  shomy minat ke shoma mana yak balhen radya che agah kot  o pada ae ghazal man 20 mint lekaetag bitag o man ehsas kot ke  sharrent nuon man pada shar kotag air kotag non pada chamshank e bedayet o mana agah bekanet chosh mabit ke man pada radi  kotag  minat war cha NOOR JAMAL  KE MANAN SAHIH KOT BALY TAO MANA NAGOSHT KE KOJA RADI BITAG O ASLA PADA MAN WAT WATI RADI DAR GEPTAG  

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 01:16:36 PM »
دوستیں باسکاں
دْروت ءُ دْرھبات اِت۔
اے چکّاس بند ءِ گندگ ءَ گوں من ءَ اردو ءِ شئیرے یات اتک کہ پہ شُما ندْر اِنت۔۔۔۔۔۔
          ایک نُقطے کی غلطی نے مجھے محرم سے مجرم بنا دیا
         ھم   دعا  لکھتے   رہے  اور  وہ    دغا   پڑھتے   رہے
دانکہ زبان ءِ نبشتہ رھبند تچک مہ بیت گُڑا ھرکس گال ءُ گپّاں وتی ڈول ءَ مانا کنت ءُ نبشتہ کنوک ءِ مُول ءُ مُراد آئی واھگانی پدءَ وانوک ءَ سر نہ بیت۔
   اے چکّاس بند ءَ من ءَ ھم چو شُمئے ڈول ءَ بمبِرّینتگ۔ من نہ زاناں باریں اے چکّاس بند
         "دل منی دیوانگ اِنت، من چوں کناں"{بہ زاں کہ منی دل گنوک اِنت ءُ من نہ زاناں کہ چے بہ کناں} اِنت

                  { یا }
         "دل منی دیوانگیں من چوں کناں"{او منی دیوانگ ءُ گنوکیں دل، من چے بہ کناں؟} اِنت؟

ھنچوش کہ شُما  نہ زان اِت کہ اے چکّاسبند ءِ تہ ءَ "رِد" کُجام اِنت ءُ "پیشرِد" کُجام اِنت، من ھم چہ اے جنجال ءَ نہ رکّتگ آں۔ پمیشکا منی جُست ھم ھمیش اِنت کہ اِدءَ رِد "کناں" اِنت یا کہ "من چوں کناں" اِنت؟
   گوں "گلّ" ءِ واکداراں دزبندی اِنت کہ ایشی ءَ تچک بہ کن اَنت۔
   منّتوار
((A clock that does not work is right twice a day))

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 01:40:39 PM »
دوستیں باسکاں
دْروت ءُ دْرھبات اِت۔
اے چکّاس بند ءِ گندگ ءَ گوں من ءَ اردو ءِ شئیرے یات اتک کہ پہ شُما ندْر اِنت۔۔۔۔۔۔
          ایک نُقطے کی غلطی نے مجھے محرم سے مجرم بنا دیا
         ھم   دعا  لکھتے   رہے  اور  وہ    دغا   پڑھتے   رہے
دانکہ زبان ءِ نبشتہ رھبند تچک مہ بیت گُڑا ھرکس گال ءُ گپّاں وتی ڈول ءَ مانا کنت ءُ نبشتہ کنوک ءِ مُول ءُ مُراد آئی واھگانی پدءَ وانوک ءَ سر نہ بیت۔
   اے چکّاس بند ءَ من ءَ ھم چو شُمئے ڈول ءَ بمبِرّینتگ۔ من نہ زاناں باریں اے چکّاس بند
         "دل منی دیوانگ اِنت، من چوں کناں"{بہ زاں کہ منی دل گنوک اِنت ءُ من نہ زاناں کہ چے بہ کناں} اِنت

                  { یا }
         "دل منی دیوانگیں من چوں کناں"{او منی دیوانگ ءُ گنوکیں دل، من چے بہ کناں؟} اِنت؟

ھنچوش کہ شُما  نہ زان اِت کہ اے چکّاسبند ءِ تہ ءَ "رِد" کُجام اِنت ءُ "پیشرِد" کُجام اِنت، من ھم چہ اے جنجال ءَ نہ رکّتگ آں۔ پمیشکا منی جُست ھم ھمیش اِنت کہ اِدءَ رِد "کناں" اِنت یا کہ "من چوں کناں" اِنت؟
   گوں "گلّ" ءِ واکداراں دزبندی اِنت کہ ایشی ءَ تچک بہ کن اَنت۔
   منّتوار

braat dega gappani babata wa man nazanan' bale yak chizzey tara goshan' Urdu e she'r eshent:

ek nuqt^ay ne mujhay meHram se mujrim kar diyaa
ham duaa likhtay rahay aur woh daGaa paRhtay rahay



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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 01:58:36 PM »
Dousten guhaar,
   Tai mennatwaaraan ke ey radi et kassh et. Pameshka gwash at ke "If you ask, you are a fool for five minutes...But...If you don't ask you will remain a fool forever." Man ey sher chounaaya cha mardumye dapaa eshkutag at o man chou hamaai dolaa gwasht. Bale tai mennatwaar ke mana muhkamter kanage haatera wahd et kassh et.  Always  :> of you!
   

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 09:27:15 PM »

Chaa Zia Baloch,  Noor Jamal o degaa zaantkaaran' chizzey jost:

Eda pah chakkaas bandiyaa band en':

"Del mani deewaanagen' man choun' kanan'"

bezaan "noon" e tawaar kapagaen' bezaan "noon gunna en' bale braat Hameed a "noon" e tawaar chest kotag

awali jost:  noon e tawaar e chistiyaa vazn e taha chey park kaet?.



baanuk Zahida, salaam o droot !

avvalii gap va esh ent keh man PA DIL gwashagaayaaN keh man hich vaRaa zaantkaaraanii peRaa hour bitt na kanaaN ! o padaa haas Balochi e, parchaa keh zubaan e zaantkaar e maana hameesh ent keh aa zubaan e alip a biger daaN yaa a durseeN rah-o-rah-baNdaaN bzaant, choo keh "phonology, syntax,morphology  etc.."
    bale shumay justaanii passv a allam a kad vati bistaar a dayag looTaaN !

shumay avvalii just keh :
"noon e tawaar e chistiyaa vazn e taha chey park kaet?. "

mani passv hamesh ent keh ee "bahr (meter)" e tahaa agaaN "choon" e noon e tawaar a chist bikan ay guRaa allami a vazn proshit ! edaa "noon" baayad "nasality" bi beet .
bahr e shaaheem a labz "chooN" (noon e be-tawaar) e vazn; 2 ent, o labz "choon" (noon e baa-tawaar) e vazn; 21 ent !

ee behr e sauti rhythm o she'rii rhythm chush ent :

taqtee"         = " dil manii dee / waa nageeN man / chooN kanaaN
sauti rhythm  =  lay ladey laa /  dey   ladey   laa /  dey    ladey
she'rii rhythm =  2    12    2  /    2      12      2  /    2      12
......................................................................................




dohmii jost: chakkasbandi dastoonkani sara radeef badal kanag e ijazat hast yaa neyst? (turi aa badalii sak kasanen' bibit anchush keh braat Hameed a kotag "noon gunna" e jagaha "noon" bastag)



chakkasbandii radeef yaa red e badal kanag e ijaazat va choonaaha neyst naa keh a tabdeelii vazn a biprosheet ! .
chakkaasbandii e maana hameesh ent keh hamii radeef o qaafiya (zameen) e tahaa taraa vatii she'r gwashagii ant ! agaaN na guRaa "chakkas" e maana che but ?





sehmii jost Qafiya e babata mardom aazaaten' yaa enna?

anchush braat Hameed a zurtag:

del mani deewaanagen' man choun kanan'
kaagadey dardaanii par tau goun kanaan'

bezaan aahiya qaafila zurtag choun, goun, hoon, rahshoon etc



ennaa hnchush keh radeef e zoorag a aazaatii neyst hamii peymaa qaafiya e badal kanag e ham aazaatii neyst . chakkaasbandii e tahaa teevageeN zameen (qafiya+radeef) zooragii ent !!
pameshk a man hamii just kut keh baareN eshii zameen che ent !!



man agan ey banda buzuraan' goRa man ey waR nebeshtak kanan':

wat sara delwaaragen' man choun' kanaan'
cha mana bey-zaanagen' man choun' kanaan'

meher e baazaara satar bey-meheri ent
del mani deewaanagen' man choun' kanaan'*****

eemnii louTant del o arwaah pada
del pada oomaanagen' man choun kanan'

ey misaal e taha man qaafiyaa zuratg " delwaaragen', del-maanagen', beyzaanagen', oomaanagen'"



naam-hudaa ! baaz vashsheeN she'r ant !!!!


man va nazaanaaN keh padaleN miSra' e tahaa radeef o qaafiya che ant, bale yak andaaza ee allam a daaraaN keh baayad qaafiya "deewaanageeN" ent ! o "man chooN kanaaN" radeef ent !
bale hanchush ke vaajah Mazar a gwasht keh ee habar angat a saap na ent keh "deewaanageeN ! " ent yaa keh "deewaanag ent" ent !!




mudaam sabz o gulzaar baatay
Balochi labzaank zindag baat !!

shumay kastir

Zia Baloch


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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #11 on: April 13, 2010, 04:41:26 PM »
very nice

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #12 on: April 13, 2010, 06:42:23 PM »
salaam pulle dewan

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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #13 on: April 14, 2010, 02:11:40 PM »
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Mani dela hoN holl kotag keh tow hon gaale bogosh .pa chakasa eyr ent .omeyt ent keh cham ey eda hoN shaank daye .o pa chakkas bandya rawan esh dayet.baaz manna waar.
Del mani deewnaeyN man chouN kanaN
cha wata bezangeyN man chouN
Bede taw zerd ent dege nimmun na kant
bass tai noo tarnageyN man chun kanaN
Meher e deewala ey donya down na kant
Del keh eywok taanageyN man chuN kanaN
Del chw hajgeyN waahagaN naN Rown na kant
Del tara DelmangeyN man chuN kanaN
Aa zadag zerda maniga chun na kant
cham teereyN dangeyN man chuN kanaN
kass chow Haameyna watiga pown na kant
KECH keh be waangeyN man chuN kanaN
Bey wasaN pa DAAD kassey guwn na kant
YAHAY a sherye wangeyN man chuN kanan

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except that I called you
and you obeyed me.
So do not blame me
but blame your selves.
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Re: Chakkas band sheri diwwan 2nd May 2010 a bahar buzouret
« Reply #14 on: May 14, 2010, 01:07:08 AM »
Mana bebaksh a k man dege pic a wati walla jataga o ha radeef o kafia wala pic najataga bale man hayall nakooo randa k showme comment'a ginda.. man oash root o man Ustad gulam hussan Gulam a kira a gappa kana hai ha mana sapt a habar daat a goshe yar tho cho kuta dege par a maka.. man nu inshallah showmara chaksbanda goo radeef o kafiya ha deya... bebaksh a mana....  shome_baaz_minnatvaran