Salam Walaikum,
Friends I am trying to write a Naat.I request you all that plz correct me If I am wrong.
Moula bebar manara Rasool e ama metagaA.
Goshant noor e aur guwarit man chammaN wathi destaga.
wajaen braat Imran Baloch: Salamat baatet
durah gappan peysh cha tara pahelli louTan keh kammo dazgatti e sawaba tai ey sarhaal e sara wati chamshaank daat nakot.
brat tai ey sher tao mana email e sara ham deym daatag. Man ishiye passav a yakken jagaya dayag louTan’ daan’ agan kasey cha ey sarhalaa chizzey darbarag louTit aa ishiya chey estefadah bekant.
bechaar wazn e waasta tara kammo wazn e qanoon sarpad bayag zaloori ent o ishiye waasta kammo baz tara wazn e study kanag kapit.
Shahiree e taha ey chizzani bayag sak zaloori ent:
1. beher (yakken meter / vazn e taha misrahani bayag)
2. radeef
3. qaafiya
4. matla'a
5. maqta'a
6. sher e har do misrahani taha rabt
7. o hama zoban e taha tao ey shera bandagae aa zaban e zalooratan poora bekant.
tai ey sher o ey dega hamen sarhaal e sara maandaatagen’ sherani aha mana wazn e kammi o sherani taha rabt e farq a abed baluchi e tab ham kamm gendag atk. man anchush maaret keh tao Urdu a baluchi e taha tarrenag e johud kanagae o ey chizzan tao soben nabayagaet.
Moula thu bar manara, Rasool e ama metagaa.
(agan man ey miSrah a bachaaran' goRa dohmi misrah e taha mana ey goshag zaloori ent keh kojaam meytaga
Goshant noor e aur gowaarith, man chammaa wathi destagaa.
Man ey tahar a dou hessa e taha bahar kanan’ o ishiye tajziyah kanan’
Goshant noor e aur gowaarith = gwashant noor gwaarit (ey baluchi e taha hama manayaa ada kant keh tao urdu a chey tarrenag e wahada kotag)
man chammaa wathi destagaa.= ey radent bahed ey jumla chush bibit:
man chamman’ wat distag = yani man ey chizz wati chammani goona peysara distag
man chamman’ wat distagan’ = ey ham burzey manaya kaet
man chamman’ wat begendan’ = ey wahag a darshan kanagaent keh man ham begendan’
noo brat tai sher e neymaga pada kayan’
tai ey sher e wazn a ey paem bechaar o wati maaresht (ehsasaatan’ ) darshan bekan
maulaa bebar manara, rasool e dar e dapa
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maulaa bebar mana wati mehboob e meytaga
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noo tao ey tahar(miSrah) a deyma eyr bekan. Awal sara “dapa” agan na “meytaga” e drusten’ qaafiya,an’ shohaaz bekan yak jagaya eyr bekan pada aahan’ wati maarashtani taha johud bekan
goun man hamencho bitten man ishiya sarjam kanag a tara komak kanan’
tai passav e
