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Offline ناہید بلوچ Naheed Baloch

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« on: December 27, 2005, 12:08:16 PM »
Salam to all ,

This is my first ever Balochi poetry.I have tried my best to take an initiative. I dont think so i can write good poetry in Balochi,however when i shared it with sister Zahida, she appreciated it.

Zahida wants me to share my first ever Balochi poetry with all of you.

I look forward to your valuable comments and feedback.

Cheers,

Naheed Baloch
aayaaN tao gosheY, taee doust-o-yaaraaN
tao keh nazaane taee aasteene maaraaN

tao keh kande, goN tao sajaheN kandaN
taana greyve na-gendeY ey gam-waaraaN

doust edaa kas naaeN, dastaa made watee HalaaN
dil prooshaga zaanaaN hameN keh taee gam-waaraaN

dost kayeiN dushman kayeiN zaanag nabee
zaant kujaa chey tao kane,mardum ede pankaaraaN

pushtaa goshaaN 'dard-o-mark' deymaa goshaaN 'jee-o-jaan'
:Naheed: chosheeN mardumaani makaaN tao eitbaaraaN
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« Reply #1 on: December 27, 2005, 05:14:53 PM »
Assalam-o-Alaikum
Dear Naheed,

Bravooooo! really it is highly apprciated thing, I like it, ur poetry look like from a professional poet. wel it is good start , hope for more in future.  :> (F)

with warmest regards & wishes

Imran Yousuf Mullahzai

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« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2005, 01:12:14 AM »
Salam Sister Naheed


Salamat Bataee
ALLAH Tara Sahet O Tandursti Bedant (Aameen)
Mana Baaz Khushi Bitt Wahdi Men Taee Balochi poetry Waant, MashAllah Taee Shair'i Balochi Zuban Ham Baaz Wash Ent .Mana Omeed Ent Tao DeEma Ham Anchoshee'n Shairi Ey Diwan Mai DeEma Peesh KaneE


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« Reply #3 on: December 29, 2005, 04:10:20 PM »
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Assalam-o-Alaikum
Dear Naheed,

Bravooooo! really it is highly apprciated thing, I like it, ur poetry look like from a professional poet. wel it is good start , hope for more in future.  :> (F)

with warmest regards & wishes

Imran Yousuf Mullahzai


walakum salam
Dear Imran
thanks 4 ur appreciation  :)  
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« Reply #4 on: December 29, 2005, 04:22:20 PM »
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Salam Sister Naheed


Salamat Bataee
ALLAH Tara Sahet O Tandursti Bedant (Aameen)
Mana Baaz Khushi Bitt Wahdi Men Taee Balochi poetry Waant, MashAllah Taee Shair'i Balochi Zuban Ham Baaz Wash Ent .Mana Omeed Ent Tao DeEma Ham Anchoshee'n Shairi Ey Diwan Mai DeEma Peesh KaneE



walakum salam bro Rind Baba
mani omeed ya chi ziyada mani phela shairi dost atka shomara ,,,baz mehrbani key mani phela poetry shomara dost atka  :) aga phela shayiri  dost mayatki to man dobara balochi ya nibishta kaney gey koshish na kote ga  :)  
 
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Nice one Keep It Up
« Reply #5 on: December 29, 2005, 05:47:29 PM »
Congratulation Naheed, hmmmm it was a good start. Keep it up..We will wait for more poetry in Balochi.

Write something (poetry) on the present day Pak Army bombing on innocent baloch civilians

Cheer

Imran
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Re: Nice one Keep It Up
« Reply #6 on: January 03, 2006, 06:59:05 PM »
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Congratulation Naheed, hmmmm it was a good start. Keep it up..We will wait for more poetry in Balochi.

Write something (poetry) on the present day Pak Army bombing on innocent baloch civilians

Cheer

Imran

thank u so much sweet bro imran 4 liking my poetry  :)
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« Reply #7 on: January 05, 2006, 07:26:01 PM »
Dearest Naheed:
Salaamat baate,

Congratulation
I am really glad to see your nice work. Its really a nice start so dear dont stop it and keep continue this great work.
My well wishes are with you.

kul nako ameeri-e-Baluchi Balochaa chey sharter kahe liket kaaN.  :)  

(Uncle Ameeri gave this comment to brother Abdullah at balouch.com on his first ever effort in Baluchi language )

dua go
ur sis
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« Reply #8 on: March 24, 2009, 10:25:19 PM »
Banok Salaam o Washaatk
Naheed i really don't have word to say about your first ever published Balochi "Dastonk" means gahzal. i am not a poet or analyst perhaps I've a little experience in the Balochi Literature.. U no,,,, the great Balochi scholar & poet waja Sayad Hashmi(1926-1978) just start his Balochi poetry like U at the age of 24,, but in 28 years duration he wrote more than 20 various books in Balochi including Sayad Ganj (A first reliable Balochi Dictionary),,,
any how its a good start and plz keep going,, a bright future & a honorable designation is waiting for U like great SAYAD.
man ham barey wahdey kad wat urdu o Balochi shaery kana, [:(]bale angata cheyr datagant,,, ni mani ham dil gosheeeee k...........
Best Regards
Zarin Askani
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Re: Balochi poetry of Naheed Umer Baloch
« Reply #9 on: March 24, 2009, 10:37:57 PM »
baaz wash Naheed Umar
 
Keep sharing
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Re: Balochi poetry of Naheed Umer Baloch
« Reply #10 on: March 24, 2009, 11:04:50 PM »
really nice :)just keep writing balochi poetry sis.. E:D3
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Re: Balochi poetry of Naheed Umer Baloch
« Reply #11 on: March 25, 2009, 10:18:59 AM »
 banok naheed baloch tai he dastonk baz wash ent ancho ki tao gushagai he tai awali dastonk ent hame ranga wati juhdan barjah bedaret deemtira shartir nebishtah koth kany. balochi shair o balochi nadkaran bewanet o balochi wanagi aan ham bwan et labz (pankaar) e jah a (izmkaar)bokoteen washtirat
   shome kaster ,manzil
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Re: Balochi poetry of Naheed Umer Baloch
« Reply #12 on: March 25, 2009, 11:53:29 AM »
wah wah best shaherien baz dost bit alla tra wash bekant

 shome kaster
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Re: Balochi poetry of Naheed Umer Baloch
« Reply #13 on: April 30, 2009, 05:38:13 PM »
sALaam Dear bAaANuKen gUWaAR man Tai .. MaHAL .. ANDaLeEB .. FaReDa .. O BaANuK KaReEma RanGE gUWaArANi siRa FakHR kaNAAN ..!
MAni GoN wAJa HUDA aA dUa InT K sHuME ZaANta GeSH AanCHe GeShTar BiKAan O sHUme PAemAA dURrAh BALOCH gUWaARANA QaUm DosTi BIdAan ..!


SAD SALAAM ManI BAANUKEN GuWaARAN ..!
SoHRe SALAAM pA kUlLe BALOCH sHAHEEDaNi NAaMA ..!




SARMAchAr ..!
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