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Rasool e ama metagaA
« on: August 19, 2010, 04:20:41 AM »
Salam Walaikum,

Friends I am trying to write a Naat.I request you all that plz correct me If I am wrong.

                                 Moula bebar manara Rasool e ama metagaA.
                                 Goshant noor e aur guwarit man chammaN wathi destaga.

 jazak

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Re: Rasool e ama metagaA
« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 05:01:10 AM »
Walaikum Assalam brother Imran:

tai johud seta karzit.
tao ey sahata yak she'r ey daatag. ishiya geysh bekan means harchey tai zehna hast aahiye nebeshta bekan ma chaaren' deym tera chey badali yaarag a chey gehteri kaet.

tai johud e gendag e rahchaar

tai gohaar
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Re: Rasool e ama metagaA
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2010, 05:10:20 AM »
Gohar Raji thaii baaz minnat war kay thu baaz sak zooth jawab daath...man lootha kay mana shro e amy dowyn line e toka ghalti goshag bibith,pada cha man dem tera likkag shro kana.
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Re: Rasool e ama metagaA
« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2010, 05:36:20 AM »
Salam Walaikum, man shomy khidmat a wathi yak degy naat e paish kana..umeed kana shoma mani ghalti ana shar kany...

Yak bary biyaae tow waaba,zaheera thaii ga gaar baan
Cham o dil chaarant e raaha,yaadaa thaii ga gaar baan

Jalwa ey sarkaar e baii thyn,waana man sally allaa
ars e chammaa'n o baa adab,waba thaii ga gaar baan

aa ama wash bo eyn mesk o,aa noor o noor e jalwa'yan
aa wajd o mast eyn deedar'a,waja thaii ga gaar baan

thu shuty mehraaj o asra'a, ummatiyani haatyra
go thu mehraj boothyn waba, ishq'a thaii ga gaar baan

ya Mustafa mehr e aseer'an,doroda'an man wanaan kana
waady kaay waaja waaba,wirda thaii ga gaar baan

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Re: Rasool e ama metagaA
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2010, 06:42:57 AM »
Salam Walaikum,

Friends I am trying to write a Naat.I request you all that plz correct me If I am wrong.

                                 Moula bebar manara Rasool e ama metagaA.
                                 Goshant noor e aur guwarit man chammaN wathi destaga.

 jazak


wajaen braat Imran Baloch: Salamat baatet

 durah gappan peysh cha tara pahelli louTan keh kammo dazgatti e sawaba tai ey sarhaal e sara wati chamshaank daat nakot.
brat tai ey sher tao mana email e sara ham deym daatag. Man ishiye passav a yakken jagaya dayag louTan’ daan’ agan kasey cha ey sarhalaa chizzey darbarag louTit aa ishiya chey estefadah bekant.
bechaar wazn e waasta tara kammo wazn e qanoon sarpad bayag zaloori ent o ishiye waasta kammo baz tara wazn e study kanag kapit.

Shahiree e taha ey chizzani bayag sak zaloori ent:
1. beher (yakken meter / vazn e taha misrahani bayag)
2. radeef
3. qaafiya
4. matla'a
5. maqta'a
6. sher e har do misrahani taha rabt
7. o hama zoban e taha tao ey shera bandagae aa zaban e zalooratan poora bekant.

tai ey sher o ey dega hamen sarhaal e sara maandaatagen’ sherani aha mana wazn e kammi o sherani taha rabt e farq a abed baluchi e tab ham kamm gendag atk. man anchush maaret keh tao Urdu a baluchi e taha tarrenag e johud kanagae o ey chizzan tao soben nabayagaet.
Moula thu bar manara, Rasool e ama metagaa.

(agan man ey miSrah a bachaaran' goRa dohmi misrah e taha mana ey goshag zaloori ent keh kojaam meytaga
Goshant noor e aur gowaarith, man chammaa wathi destagaa.

Man ey tahar a dou hessa e taha bahar kanan’ o ishiye tajziyah kanan’
Goshant noor e aur gowaarith = gwashant noor gwaarit (ey baluchi e taha hama manayaa ada kant keh tao urdu a chey tarrenag e wahada kotag)

man chammaa wathi destagaa.=  ey radent bahed ey jumla chush bibit:
man chamman’ wat distag = yani man ey chizz wati chammani goona peysara distag
man chamman’ wat distagan’ = ey ham burzey manaya kaet
man chamman’ wat begendan’ = ey wahag a darshan kanagaent keh man ham begendan’

noo brat tai sher e neymaga pada kayan’
tai ey sher e wazn a ey paem bechaar o wati maaresht (ehsasaatan’ ) darshan bekan

maulaa bebar manara, rasool e  dar e dapa

maulaa bebar mana wati mehboob e meytaga


noo tao ey tahar(miSrah) a deyma eyr bekan. Awal sara “dapa” agan na “meytaga” e drusten’ qaafiya,an’ shohaaz bekan yak jagaya eyr bekan pada aahan’ wati maarashtani taha johud bekan
goun man hamencho bitten man ishiya sarjam kanag a tara komak kanan’

tai passav e wadareeg

 wati raaj e heyr loutouk



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