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Jabar Askani جابر آسکانی ءِ شئر و پربند۔
« on: February 02, 2011, 11:33:00 PM »
                             Emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
                             marg  mae  deedaga  rock maan kanth
 
                             pa zaanth  wathi raha gaar kanth daim
                             dil gushe sarpade thepliye deedag inth
 
                             haak  mani  dehh e sadd  satha karzith
                             naapag  mani  rosthagg  ma  peshgaha
 
                             dedagani wahde nehenge haar mallanth
                             hushke kanig musaferani raaha charanth
 
                             marg  repeenith  Bani  aadam   aa  daim
                             mardum   zindaga   inth   Qabrani  thaha
 
                             proshith     nehenge     hoshaam    zinde
                             aga kasse  tharampani hesaaba bezaanth
 
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 02:15:49 AM »
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 08:12:43 PM »
wajaen beraath thangi shumaa shaad baathe,,,
  mani beraath mann shaer e naha bass bare bare gun dila o pekra  jang kana gun.thai lafzani rang dayege sakk baaz minnath wara jan,mana saro sooj kaneth aga radiye booth inth.mann shume saro soojani rahchara daema.....shume kasther jabar askani
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2011, 04:34:44 PM »
BAAZ JOWANIEN SHAERIE WAJA...

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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2011, 05:15:56 PM »
SALAM wajahe beraath daniel jan..
mann sakk baz minnath wara ke shuma wathi polle deedagani shank bakshaath..
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Re:Mani {dasthonk} shume Eslah e chamshaanke luteth.
« Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 04:27:40 PM »
                              cho   thepliye  paema   pa  galahag
                              arwah  nimmon kanth pa darahaga
 
                              cho  mehre   drachka   bae   wahde
                              chamma bakshaa mann thai sahaga
 
                              narr mageske thai jeega naneshtha
                              paake  daamon  thai sheer  mahaga
 
                              dasthe  lakeera  mann  thara  ginda
                              hasth chedage janthe thai chahraga
 
                              thai    thalab    dile    pollani    sara
                              cho   nood   sabaahe   bith  guaraga
 
                              shapp hanul e ,roch sadoo we ranga
                              sadd  sdakka  pa  thai  dile  daaraga
 
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2011, 11:59:20 PM »
salounken braat jabaar askani
salam o pollen droud
brat taei dastounk e wahag baz jowanent balay agan ara man benobeshten man chosh nobeshtagat , pahelly loutan .
emrouz pa dazmoushi gwazeet harch kasi
AA kas ke bandaat e shouhaza makant
Raha modama gaar bekant
Delgoush goun didagan makant
Haak mani deih e sata karzeet
Napag rodeet man peishgahi
Neheng harch wahd haar malleet
Mosaper hoshken kaneega chareet
Marg rippeineet ensana daem
A kasa ke zend e kadra mazant
Proushit zend e houshama neheng
Gar zend tramppani hosaba bezant
cha shoma pahelly loutan ke bey shomay josta man shomay dastounka nagdkary kot.
souben bebatet.
shomay brat
adabi hakim 
 
 

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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #7 on: February 06, 2011, 08:24:12 PM »
salam wajahe beraath,,
shuma shaad baathe,o mann dile juhlaankiya shume mannath wara ke shuma wathi polle deedagani shaank pammana bakshetha anth.zaanthe o pekre juhle zarr aa mann thaninga door aa ,angath thayaaba ha.hame waastha bootha kanth mani guna radiye bebith.shuma mani lachcha eslah kurthag mana doosth booth.o mana shuma shaath hamm nabe ke mann dega ozer e ya ke ethraaze bekna.........
 
aga shuma dila mayareth mann wathi hayaal hamm gun shuma bahr kana aga dila kaare guda gunahgaar bae.chiyya ke mann shume baaz ehtharam aa kana.omid dara shuma mani gappa sarpad bae..minnath w
mani ee lachcha e thaha booth kanth lafzani poshtho deem hasthe,bale aga hayaale baabatha bechaare guda  mann rad naha chiyya ke mardum yakk shaere likkith guda yakk pekre ye daamon aa nendith.
mesaale....emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
               marg  mae deedaga  rock maan kanth
awwali banda mann dunyahe habarkuthag.ke dunya yakk aazmaeshe pamma. eda mara chezze ekhtyaar dayag boothaga cha allah e neemaga.ma ekhtyaar darre bale chizze haddo band hasth anth.maa serf yakeen e daamon aa ee safar e mosafer inth.mae deema hech chiz paddar nahenth,maa wathi chamma hech nagendinth sirf yakeen o emman deedaga chaarenth.bale marga chaa rand mae deema ee pardag cheesth bith o harr chizz paddar bithinth. yaani dunya o aakherath zaaher banth.haqeekath mae deema ooshthith,,,,,,hame paema mani shaere harr bande yakk droshume daarith,encho wazaahath kanag nabith shuma wath zaane,,shuma wathi hayaal daathag wathi jagaha barabarenth. mana doosth both.
mann yakk dega chizze raa daya shuma wathi chamshaanka zaroor bedyeth.mana do sharre teacher hasthenth,,{waja thangi baloch o waja adabi hakim}no mann zana ke mani ee safar aasan boothe..
    thai kasther jabar askani..shaad baathe...minnathwara
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #8 on: February 06, 2011, 08:37:46 PM »
Wajaen braat Jabar Askani:
Assalam o alaikum,

diwwan a shome jind e perband dist del baaz vash bit.
goshant sharren' waanok laazum naent keh sharren' adeeb o shaair bebant bale agan' sharren' qaari ya waanok nebeshta kanag bina kanant goRa aa allama sharr lekkag e johud kanant o mana shome perbandani taha shome pegr e johlaankii gendag atk o ey baaz juwaanen' chizzen'.

Shoma chiyaa keh pah sar o souj delmaang et pameshka ma wati chamshaank a techkaka dayagayan' omaitent ishiya masbat zooret.

Cha shoma yak jost e hast keh mani jind a angata na URDU e tooka o nae keh Baluchi e taha Aazaat dastoonk wantag bale awali randen' keh shome perband e sara gendagayan' o cha shomara rand man Wajah Khaliq Arman e ketab chaaret hooda ham ey chiz dist. agan' mara shoma ey babata chizzey bogoshet keh ey shaairee e kojaam sensf ent o ishiye raah o rahband (rules and regulation ) chey ent ey ham bogoshet mennatvaar bayan'

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Emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
marg  mae  deedaga.n  rock maan kanth
(deedaga = deedagan')
 
pa zaanth  wathi raha gaar kanth daim
dil gushe sarpade thepliye deedag inth

(dohmi tahar e sara man zoor janagayan keh balken' chush bibit)
del goshe sarpaden tepl-iYe deedag int


haak  mani  dehh e sadd  seta karzith
naapag  mani  rosthagg  ma  peshgaha

(man shome ey sher e sawaba ey perbanda Ghazal gosht nakanagayan' agan' azaat ghazal e rahbandan' bezanan' balken mani sar ham per bibit )

dedagani wahde nehenge haar mallanth
hushke kanig musaferani raaha charanth
(ey band kammo mani sara sar gwazagaen' agan' shoma techkter kotent gehter at. 

marg  repeenith  Bani  aadam-a  daa,em
mardum   zindag- ant   Qabrani  thaha


proshith     nehenge     hoshaam    zinde
aga kasse  tharampani hesaaba bezaanth

ey sahen' sheraani pegr sharrent.

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Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
« Reply #9 on: February 06, 2011, 08:56:00 PM »
                                        THAI SHUHAAZA  DARKAPA JENDE PADA  GERA
                                        WAHDE PATHO RASA  MANN RAHA GAAR KANA
 
                                        ROOCH O SHAPP  AGA   MAANAE  BULOTANTH
                                        MANN  DEEDAGA   BAND  KANA O PACH  KANA
 
                                        RANG    ZARD  O  THAAM   SHAKKALA    INTH
                                        BEENAGG    MAGESKAANI     DAPEEL     ANTH
 
                                        SHEER  MANI CHAMMA DAR  NAETH  HECHBAR
                                        MAATH  KOHHE  WAHDE  SAAHAGA   NENDAA
 
                                        AA   MANA  ANCHOSH    LOTITH   PA  WATHA
                                        CHO    AAHOGE     HAZITH     MANI    BOOWA
         
                                        HAAK   MAE    HOORIYA    THARR   BOOTHAG
                                        SAKK      DOOSTH     BAE     THAU      MANA....
 
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #10 on: February 06, 2011, 10:57:00 PM »
salamath baathe bebe shuma...
mann minnathwara shume chamm shanke shume dasth dard makanth..mann wathi pekr aa shairy ya sakk balahen darjahe dayan,ee harkasi wasa dannenth.rasthi baaz ketaabe waanaga mardum khayaale wazna sarpad bith khayaala hamm yakk haddiya sarpad both kanth bale shair nabith. noo mann hamm hame rama guna gun.bale shume wade rahshon hamrah bebanth guda mae waden nook bahande shair aani ee safar arzaan bith.....shume saro soojaani minnathwara......
 
shuma drusth kurthagath ke AZAAD gazal babatha mana sarpad bekaneth..mann wathi pekre o wajhani gushthagen sarhaalani baabatha kammo habar kana aga radiye both pehl kaneth...
HAZAR minnath pa waja { sabah dashthyari } aa ke aahiya  [1999] Azaad gazal e naama awwali bara {maahthaak}, balochi lubzaank,habb e thaak, africi baloch no, e thaha ,,maah augest o suptember a[1999]aa shing boothag.waja sabah dashtyari e azaad dasthoonke thaha naeke baher o thange paabandi kanag bothag o naeke red peeshred e ,albath hamokshaerwathi juthaen yakthai o maane daranth. shaer e darwara begendeth.....
 
thai   juthaiya  haar  arsaani
mani baalada malletha chicho
baare thau zende nooken rahsara
mana thahthaale baanzula bande
mann thai dathage durhen waaba
wathi Qabre saronna shakk kana
thau hama dard bakshathag dilbar
mann cha dugnyaha grastha aajo
angath begaha sormage thau mani
dile darwazaga samare o guaze
ee  sabah,,  e dil  ganooke ke
omre guazenth bewafaha pa....wahh
 
Azaad dasthonke thajrubath[ Manzoor besmill ]shaere deewan {aap rang}e thaha o gindag bith,besmill a wathi shaer e thaha thang{bahr}paasdari nakurthag bale thawame shaer a peesh rede pabandi gindag bith.hamuk shaer wathi paband dasthonk e wadawathi yakthai o juthaen maane daranth.
azaad dasthonke darwara begendeth........
mahnowe enjeer e saahaga  ya mureed e dagaani daryahen neshaan
marcha  maara  deer  perren  nanth  thai  nazzikye  deeren  gumaan
noobathe    anche   ke  saah o  saahag  kessah   nabith
che   dega  lutith   thara   besmill,, wathi  jindaa bezaan..wahh
 
Azaad dasthonka balochi ye thaharewaaj dayaga Manzoor besmill e kerd drustha burzinth.aaiye shaer e deewan {saach}e naama chaap boothag.baaske thaha hamm hasthen shuma chamm shaank bidyeth.ee balochi lubzaank thani wahdi bendaathi teekiyenth.saach e thaha azaathen dasthonk  aani red o peesh red e pabandi kanag boothag bale cha {bahr } o wazna azaath anth .ee wada balochi lubzaanke awwali sarjamen thajrubathe gushth bith ke ketaabi e wada athkag......
duraahen dunya zerr e laapa inth
zingai geraan inth boojegani thaha
rooch namahramani  sethra kanth
sahaga  wash   washa   kenzinith
kaaya baalo mani qabre sara
baanula    wathi   chaaranth...wahh
...................
hushke    thaakani      paema
guaatha guna anth bani adam
besmill  aasa  roock    makan
kaah o booch kudohe   banth...wahh
 
shuma {saach }waanagi  ha buwaaneth shuma geshther sarpad baeth......aga radiye boothag ,,pehl kaneth..washnam baathe,,,,jabaraskani washnaam_baate

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Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
« Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 09:10:47 AM »

wajaen braat Jabar Askani:
Assalam o alaikum,

Shome ey perband e sara mani chamshaank randter kaet keh annu dazgatti sak baazent ey sahata do gapp janag louTan omaitent dela nayaaret.
1. shoma ey perband nebeshtank e section a daatag bahed ey Shaairee e section a butten' (man ishiya move kanagayan' shairee section e taha)

2. Shoma ey sarhaal e sara Islah e wahag darshaan kotag ey babata chizz gap techk kanag louTan'

IslaH dayag har kasi kaar naent

iSlaH dayuk e bahed ent keh aa ey kaar e taha balad bibit

aa sher e pegr a sarpad bibit

aa sher e vazn a sarpad bibit

aa islaH dayuken' perband e sinf e raah o rahbandan' bezaant. yani lachcha a lachcha e paema o dastoonka dastoonk e paema o saut ya zaheerookan' hama rangan' bechaarit

agan' dastoonk ent bahed islaH dayuk sherani radeef o qaafiy, vazn o beher o matla'a maqta drustan' bezaant

agan sher balehaaz e mana radent goRa aahiya kulli tarrenag e hak wa bitten bale anchush keh aa cha behra dann mabit cha vazn a dann mabit cha pegra dann mabit
ey ham hama soorat a keh shaair ishiye ijaazat bedant.

pada labzaani raddo badal hama wahada kanag ISlah kanouk e waasta zaloori ent keh chush kanag a chey sher e taha sur peda bibit, mooseeqiyat paeda bibit o sher e taam geyshter bibit nae keh sher e arwah biproushit.

baaz randa anchen perband pah Islah a deyma kayant keh aahani sara zaantkaar ham iSlah daat nakanant ishiye sawab agan' man rad maban' do (2) bayant.

yakkey  wa eshent keh perband e jind cha rah o rahbandan' dar bibit o shaair e sara laazum bibit keh aa ey perband e wat yak naaqid e bibit o aahiya kullan shar bekant.

dohmi sawab eshent keh perband e jind e taha iSlah e gunjahish maan mabit. yani agan aahiye taha yak labz e ham burz jahal kanag bit aa perband seren send bitten' pameshka chushen perbandani sara zaankaar ham hech nagoshant.

agan' mani ey gappani sara kasiyaa aetraaz hast aa allama mana sarpad bekant daan' maan ham wati iSlah a bekanan'

daan' insaan zendagent aahiye sekkag o dar barag e amala jaari ent.

Zaant e peRa cha drustan' kamter
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Haalath e haazra parr ikk GAZAL peshe khidmath hai,,,,,
« Reply #12 on: February 07, 2011, 11:04:25 PM »
                thera enthezaar shaam e gamm ka kessah puraana hai
             naya   gazal   naya   khayaal   naya    zamaana      hai

              jhoote    lafzoon  ka   lebaas    gazal    ko    pehnaiye
              bass  daad  lijiye   shaer   ghoi  tho  ekk   bahana  hai
 
              kalejaa   nekhaal   karr   rakh   diyaa   kaagaz    parr
              janaab   ne   kehh    diyaa   chooriye     deewna    hai
 
              mere    thakhayull     kaa   meyaar    jaane    bagaer
              wo  ye  kehh  gaya   bass   wakth   kaa  gawaana   hai
 
                  Meer,  ke  geet   aur  parween,   ka   khayaal   lekar
               aaiye    hamm    ne   aap  ko   shaeri  sekhana    hai
 
               leejiye    aap    bi   hugae    GAZAL    goo       jabar,
                aap   ka   mezaaj   bi    aaj   kall   aashqaana    hai
 
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
« Reply #13 on: February 08, 2011, 05:31:50 AM »
sallaM , jabar jaan tai shaery shar ent ....  chonke aida ghap   AZAAD ghazale bohaga en goda allam man wati chaar habar add kana gon dewaane taha ...
 azaad ghazale basically bedath cha urdu zubaane shaery e rahbandan hor kanag botag , ahiye subab amesh en k urdu shaery kanok sak baaz ant, sak rush gendaga kait, urdu zubaane daneshwarani mutabika  harchi k  tu nebeshta kaney tara ame ehsaas bit k baaz en chizz pesara cha dohranag botaga , pameshka

O balochi zubaane  tokka manzor bismile ( aap rang ) e taha azaad ghazal goshag nabotag balken manzoor bismile domi chaap  ( saach) tewaga azaad ghazalani ent ....baley balochi zubaane baaz naam daaren o deerigen shaer gon manzoora mutafiq nayan .
                 
 

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Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
« Reply #14 on: February 08, 2011, 05:53:02 AM »
Jabar jaan , azaad ghazal chonha isla kanag nalotit , chiya k ich pabandi nest aishye taha haan albata wazn horen gon  ancho k wazn harch kisme shaery taha shamil en ... ancho mirza ghalib goshit " aatey hein gaib se ye mazamen kayal mein " ancho balochiya yake goshit o mubarik kazi pada har wahda ame habara kant " shairy allahi daad e ", mani goshage mol o moraad aishen k agan shairy allahi daad e goda wazn hum cha borz che gonene gon ...pameshka kujaam hum shaera wazne zaa diyag nabit  ...baki labzani gechenkaari o kafiya bandi azaad ghazal naloti k sher tankeed neshana bot bikant ...