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Jabar Askani جابر آسکانی ءِ شئر و پربند۔
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February 02, 2011, 11:33:00 PM »
Emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
marg mae deedaga rock maan kanth
pa zaanth wathi raha gaar kanth daim
dil gushe sarpade thepliye deedag inth
haak mani dehh e sadd satha karzith
naapag mani rosthagg ma peshgaha
dedagani wahde nehenge haar mallanth
hushke kanig musaferani raaha charanth
marg repeenith Bani aadam aa daim
mardum zindaga inth Qabrani thaha
proshith nehenge hoshaam zinde
aga kasse tharampani hesaaba bezaanth
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 03, 2011, 02:15:49 AM »
برات جابرآسکانی تئی اے آزات لچّہ باز جوان اِنت۔ سوبین بات ات
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 03, 2011, 08:12:43 PM »
wajaen beraath thangi shumaa shaad baathe,,,
mani beraath mann shaer e naha bass bare bare gun dila o pekra jang kana gun.thai lafzani rang dayege sakk baaz minnath wara jan,mana saro sooj kaneth aga radiye booth inth.mann shume saro soojani rahchara daema.....shume kasther jabar askani
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 04, 2011, 04:34:44 PM »
BAAZ JOWANIEN SHAERIE WAJA...
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 04, 2011, 05:15:56 PM »
SALAM wajahe beraath daniel jan..
mann sakk baz minnath wara ke shuma wathi polle deedagani shank bakshaath..
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Re:Mani {dasthonk} shume Eslah e chamshaanke luteth.
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February 05, 2011, 04:27:40 PM »
cho thepliye paema pa galahag
arwah nimmon kanth pa darahaga
cho mehre drachka bae wahde
chamma bakshaa mann thai sahaga
narr mageske thai jeega naneshtha
paake daamon thai sheer mahaga
dasthe lakeera mann thara ginda
hasth chedage janthe thai chahraga
thai thalab dile pollani sara
cho nood sabaahe bith guaraga
shapp hanul e ,roch sadoo we ranga
sadd sdakka pa thai dile daaraga
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 05, 2011, 11:59:20 PM »
salounken braat jabaar askani
salam o pollen droud
brat taei dastounk e wahag baz jowanent balay agan ara man benobeshten man chosh nobeshtagat , pahelly loutan .
emrouz pa dazmoushi gwazeet harch kasi
AA kas ke bandaat e shouhaza makant
Raha modama gaar bekant
Delgoush goun didagan makant
Haak mani deih e sata karzeet
Napag rodeet man peishgahi
Neheng harch wahd haar malleet
Mosaper hoshken kaneega chareet
Marg rippeineet ensana daem
A kasa ke zend e kadra mazant
Proushit zend e houshama neheng
Gar zend tramppani hosaba bezant
cha shoma pahelly loutan ke bey shomay josta man shomay dastounka nagdkary kot.
souben bebatet.
shomay brat
adabi hakim
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 06, 2011, 08:24:12 PM »
salam wajahe beraath,,
shuma shaad baathe,o mann dile juhlaankiya shume mannath wara ke shuma wathi polle deedagani shaank pammana bakshetha anth.zaanthe o pekre juhle zarr aa mann thaninga door aa ,angath thayaaba ha.hame waastha bootha kanth mani guna radiye bebith.shuma mani lachcha eslah kurthag mana doosth booth.o mana shuma shaath hamm nabe ke mann dega ozer e ya ke ethraaze bekna.........
aga shuma dila mayareth mann wathi hayaal hamm gun shuma bahr kana aga dila kaare guda gunahgaar bae.chiyya ke mann shume baaz ehtharam aa kana.omid dara shuma mani gappa sarpad bae..minnath w
mani ee lachcha e thaha booth kanth lafzani poshtho deem hasthe,bale aga hayaale baabatha bechaare guda mann rad naha chiyya ke mardum yakk shaere likkith guda yakk pekre ye daamon aa nendith.
mesaale....emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
marg mae deedaga rock maan kanth
awwali banda mann dunyahe habarkuthag.ke dunya yakk aazmaeshe pamma. eda mara chezze ekhtyaar dayag boothaga cha allah e neemaga.ma ekhtyaar darre bale chizze haddo band hasth anth.maa serf yakeen e daamon aa ee safar e mosafer inth.mae deema hech chiz paddar nahenth,maa wathi chamma hech nagendinth sirf yakeen o emman deedaga chaarenth.bale marga chaa rand mae deema ee pardag cheesth bith o harr chizz paddar bithinth. yaani dunya o aakherath zaaher banth.haqeekath mae deema ooshthith,,,,,,hame paema mani shaere harr bande yakk droshume daarith,encho wazaahath kanag nabith shuma wath zaane,,shuma wathi hayaal daathag wathi jagaha barabarenth. mana doosth both.
mann yakk dega chizze raa daya shuma wathi chamshaanka zaroor bedyeth.mana do sharre teacher hasthenth,,{waja thangi baloch o waja adabi hakim}no mann zana ke mani ee safar aasan boothe..
thai kasther jabar askani..shaad baathe...minnathwara
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 06, 2011, 08:37:46 PM »
Wajaen braat Jabar Askani:
Assalam o alaikum,
diwwan a shome jind e perband dist del baaz vash bit.
goshant sharren' waanok laazum naent keh sharren' adeeb o shaair bebant bale agan' sharren' qaari ya waanok nebeshta kanag bina kanant goRa aa allama sharr lekkag e johud kanant o mana shome perbandani taha shome pegr e johlaankii gendag atk o ey baaz juwaanen' chizzen'.
Shoma chiyaa keh pah sar o souj delmaang et pameshka ma wati chamshaank a techkaka dayagayan' omaitent ishiya masbat zooret.
Cha shoma yak jost e hast keh mani jind a angata na URDU e tooka o nae keh Baluchi e taha Aazaat dastoonk wantag bale awali randen' keh shome perband e sara gendagayan' o cha shomara rand man Wajah Khaliq Arman e ketab chaaret hooda ham ey chiz dist. agan' mara shoma ey babata chizzey bogoshet keh ey shaairee e kojaam sensf ent o ishiye raah o rahband (rules and regulation ) chey ent ey ham bogoshet mennatvaar bayan'
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Emrooz pa dazmooshi guazith har kasi
marg mae deedaga.n rock maan kanth
(deedaga = deedagan')
pa zaanth wathi raha gaar kanth daim
dil gushe sarpade thepliye deedag inth
(dohmi tahar e sara man zoor janagayan keh balken' chush bibit)
del goshe sarpaden tepl-iYe deedag int
haak mani dehh e sadd seta karzith
naapag mani rosthagg ma peshgaha
(man shome ey sher e sawaba ey perbanda Ghazal gosht nakanagayan' agan' azaat ghazal e rahbandan' bezanan' balken mani sar ham per bibit )
dedagani wahde nehenge haar mallanth
hushke kanig musaferani raaha charanth
(ey band kammo mani sara sar gwazagaen' agan' shoma techkter kotent gehter at.
marg repeenith Bani aadam-a daa,em
mardum zindag- ant Qabrani thaha
proshith nehenge hoshaam zinde
aga kasse tharampani hesaaba bezaanth
ey sahen' sheraani pegr sharrent.
Wazhnaam baatet
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Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
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February 06, 2011, 08:56:00 PM »
THAI SHUHAAZA DARKAPA JENDE PADA GERA
WAHDE PATHO RASA MANN RAHA GAAR KANA
ROOCH O SHAPP AGA MAANAE BULOTANTH
MANN DEEDAGA BAND KANA O PACH KANA
RANG ZARD O THAAM SHAKKALA INTH
BEENAGG MAGESKAANI DAPEEL ANTH
SHEER MANI CHAMMA DAR NAETH HECHBAR
MAATH KOHHE WAHDE SAAHAGA NENDAA
AA MANA ANCHOSH LOTITH PA WATHA
CHO AAHOGE HAZITH MANI BOOWA
HAAK MAE HOORIYA THARR BOOTHAG
SAKK DOOSTH BAE THAU MANA....
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 06, 2011, 10:57:00 PM »
salamath baathe bebe shuma...
mann minnathwara shume chamm shanke shume dasth dard makanth..mann wathi pekr aa shairy ya sakk balahen darjahe dayan,ee harkasi wasa dannenth.rasthi baaz ketaabe waanaga mardum khayaale wazna sarpad bith khayaala hamm yakk haddiya sarpad both kanth bale shair nabith. noo mann hamm hame rama guna gun.bale shume wade rahshon hamrah bebanth guda mae waden nook bahande shair aani ee safar arzaan bith.....shume saro soojaani minnathwara......
shuma drusth kurthagath ke AZAAD gazal babatha mana sarpad bekaneth..mann wathi pekre o wajhani gushthagen sarhaalani baabatha kammo habar kana aga radiye both pehl kaneth...
HAZAR minnath pa waja { sabah dashthyari } aa ke aahiya [1999] Azaad gazal e naama awwali bara {maahthaak}, balochi lubzaank,habb e thaak, africi baloch no, e thaha ,,maah augest o suptember a[1999]aa shing boothag.waja sabah dashtyari e azaad dasthoonke thaha naeke baher o thange paabandi kanag bothag o naeke red peeshred e ,albath hamokshaerwathi juthaen yakthai o maane daranth. shaer e darwara begendeth.....
thai juthaiya haar arsaani
mani baalada malletha chicho
baare thau zende nooken rahsara
mana thahthaale baanzula bande
mann thai dathage durhen waaba
wathi Qabre saronna shakk kana
thau hama dard bakshathag dilbar
mann cha dugnyaha grastha aajo
angath begaha sormage thau mani
dile darwazaga samare o guaze
ee sabah,, e dil ganooke ke
omre guazenth bewafaha pa....wahh
Azaad dasthonke thajrubath[ Manzoor besmill ]shaere deewan {aap rang}e thaha o gindag bith,besmill a wathi shaer e thaha thang{bahr}paasdari nakurthag bale thawame shaer a peesh rede pabandi gindag bith.hamuk shaer wathi paband dasthonk e wadawathi yakthai o juthaen maane daranth.
azaad dasthonke darwara begendeth........
mahnowe enjeer e saahaga ya mureed e dagaani daryahen neshaan
marcha maara deer perren nanth thai nazzikye deeren gumaan
noobathe anche ke saah o saahag kessah nabith
che dega lutith thara besmill,, wathi jindaa bezaan..wahh
Azaad dasthonka balochi ye thaharewaaj dayaga Manzoor besmill e kerd drustha burzinth.aaiye shaer e deewan {saach}e naama chaap boothag.baaske thaha hamm hasthen shuma chamm shaank bidyeth.ee balochi lubzaank thani wahdi bendaathi teekiyenth.saach e thaha azaathen dasthonk aani red o peesh red e pabandi kanag boothag bale cha {bahr } o wazna azaath anth .ee wada balochi lubzaanke awwali sarjamen thajrubathe gushth bith ke ketaabi e wada athkag......
duraahen dunya zerr e laapa inth
zingai geraan inth boojegani thaha
rooch namahramani sethra kanth
sahaga wash washa kenzinith
kaaya baalo mani qabre sara
baanula wathi chaaranth...wahh
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hushke thaakani paema
guaatha guna anth bani adam
besmill aasa roock makan
kaah o booch kudohe banth...wahh
shuma {saach }waanagi ha buwaaneth shuma geshther sarpad baeth......aga radiye boothag ,,pehl kaneth..washnam baathe,,,,jabaraskani
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Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
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February 07, 2011, 09:10:47 AM »
wajaen braat Jabar Askani:
Assalam o alaikum,
Shome ey perband e sara mani chamshaank randter kaet keh annu dazgatti sak baazent ey sahata do gapp janag louTan omaitent dela nayaaret.
1. shoma ey perband nebeshtank e section a daatag bahed ey Shaairee e section a butten' (man ishiya move kanagayan' shairee section e taha)
2. Shoma ey sarhaal e sara Islah e wahag darshaan kotag ey babata chizz gap techk kanag louTan'
IslaH dayag har kasi kaar naent
iSlaH dayuk e bahed ent keh aa ey kaar e taha balad bibit
aa sher e pegr a sarpad bibit
aa sher e vazn a sarpad bibit
aa islaH dayuken' perband e sinf e raah o rahbandan' bezaant. yani lachcha a lachcha e paema o dastoonka dastoonk e paema o saut ya zaheerookan' hama rangan' bechaarit
agan' dastoonk ent bahed islaH dayuk sherani radeef o qaafiy, vazn o beher o matla'a maqta drustan' bezaant
agan sher balehaaz e mana radent goRa aahiya kulli tarrenag e hak wa bitten bale anchush keh aa cha behra dann mabit cha vazn a dann mabit cha pegra dann mabit
ey ham hama soorat a keh shaair ishiye ijaazat bedant.
pada labzaani raddo badal hama wahada kanag ISlah kanouk e waasta zaloori ent keh chush kanag a chey sher e taha sur peda bibit, mooseeqiyat paeda bibit o sher e taam geyshter bibit nae keh sher e arwah biproushit.
baaz randa anchen perband pah Islah a deyma kayant keh aahani sara zaantkaar ham iSlah daat nakanant ishiye sawab agan' man rad maban' do (2) bayant.
yakkey wa eshent keh perband e jind cha rah o rahbandan' dar bibit o shaair e sara laazum bibit keh aa ey perband e wat yak naaqid e bibit o aahiya kullan shar bekant.
dohmi sawab eshent keh perband e jind e taha iSlah e gunjahish maan mabit. yani agan aahiye taha yak labz e ham burz jahal kanag bit aa perband seren send bitten' pameshka chushen perbandani sara zaankaar ham hech nagoshant.
agan' mani ey gappani sara kasiyaa aetraaz hast aa allama mana sarpad bekant daan' maan ham wati iSlah a bekanan'
daan' insaan zendagent aahiye sekkag o dar barag e amala jaari ent.
Zaant e peRa cha drustan' kamter
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Haalath e haazra parr ikk GAZAL peshe khidmath hai,,,,,
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February 07, 2011, 11:04:25 PM »
thera enthezaar shaam e gamm ka kessah puraana hai
naya gazal naya khayaal naya zamaana hai
jhoote lafzoon ka lebaas gazal ko pehnaiye
bass daad lijiye shaer ghoi tho ekk bahana hai
kalejaa nekhaal karr rakh diyaa kaagaz parr
janaab ne kehh diyaa chooriye deewna hai
mere thakhayull kaa meyaar jaane bagaer
wo ye kehh gaya bass wakth kaa gawaana hai
Meer, ke geet aur parween, ka khayaal lekar
aaiye hamm ne aap ko shaeri sekhana hai
leejiye aap bi hugae GAZAL goo jabar,
aap ka mezaaj bi aaj kall aashqaana hai
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Re: AZaad Gazal,,,,,{ dasthoonk }
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February 08, 2011, 05:31:50 AM »
sallaM , jabar jaan tai shaery shar ent .... chonke aida ghap AZAAD ghazale bohaga en goda allam man wati chaar habar add kana gon dewaane taha ...
azaad ghazale basically bedath cha urdu zubaane shaery e rahbandan hor kanag botag , ahiye subab amesh en k urdu shaery kanok sak baaz ant, sak rush gendaga kait, urdu zubaane daneshwarani mutabika harchi k tu nebeshta kaney tara ame ehsaas bit k baaz en chizz pesara cha dohranag botaga , pameshka
O balochi zubaane tokka manzor bismile ( aap rang ) e taha azaad ghazal goshag nabotag balken manzoor bismile domi chaap ( saach) tewaga azaad ghazalani ent ....baley balochi zubaane baaz naam daaren o deerigen shaer gon manzoora mutafiq nayan .
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Re: Shume Eslahi chamshanke luteit,,AZAAD GAZAL....
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February 08, 2011, 05:53:02 AM »
Jabar jaan , azaad ghazal chonha isla kanag nalotit , chiya k ich pabandi nest aishye taha haan albata wazn horen gon ancho k wazn harch kisme shaery taha shamil en ... ancho mirza ghalib goshit " aatey hein gaib se ye mazamen kayal mein " ancho balochiya yake goshit o mubarik kazi pada har wahda ame habara kant " shairy allahi daad e ", mani goshage mol o moraad aishen k agan shairy allahi daad e goda wazn hum cha borz che gonene gon ...pameshka kujaam hum shaera wazne zaa diyag nabit ...baki labzani gechenkaari o kafiya bandi azaad ghazal naloti k sher tankeed neshana bot bikant ...
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